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There's only so long I could continue to revise the 'problem child' chapter before recognising that I'm no Lubrican and it's always going to suffer by comparison.
I hope that placing the events in the context of the story will enable you to see the intent, and thus temper your criticism.
Thank you for your patience,
Can anyone recommend a free 32-bit antivirus? I had to uninstall the latest version of Avast Free because bugs they'd introduced stopped me backing up my work. (Since Avast now owns AVG, I'd rather not go in that direction.)
I haven't repeated any serials I've mentioned before, and I've been slightly more liberal in how recently the stories have been updated. But here, in no particular order, is a list of the recently updated ongoing serials which are giving me the most enjoyment.
Of Dancers and Doves by Lord Van Leak
Pantheon 2 by PuffDragon
Penumbrials by SciFurz
The Runaway by Geek of Ages
Artifact by blackrandl1958
The Wrong Girl by Lumpy
I need some help with a scene involving a shotgun. If you'd like to help and you're familiar with shotguns and their terminology, please send me an e-mail address and I'll send you a story extract and explanation of what I'm looking for.
Edit to add: I've received plenty of offers of help and they should be more than enough to provide the advice I need to make the scene work.
In no particular order, this is a list of the recently updated ongoing serials which have given me the most enjoyment in the past couple of weeks or so.
Retribution by Thornfoote
False Signs by Lumpy
What Lies Ahead by Lumpy
Chances Are... by Stultus
Dragons of the Night by Stultus
Convergence by MisguidedChild
Mayhem in a Pill by Shinerdrinker
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