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New story: An Unwanted Alias

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I'll be posting chapter 1 of a new story, "An Unwanted Alias," tomorrow (Tuesday). My plan is to post chapter 2 on Friday, followed by 3 and 4 on Tuesday and Friday of next week. After that, I'll drop back to one chapter a week. I've written 8 chapters so far, and I expect the story to be about 20 chapters in length. Therefore, it's reasonable to think I might be able to maintain that posting schedule until the story is complete, although I can't make any promises.

What's the story about? Well, you'll have to wait until tomorrow to get an idea. :)

After "An Unwanted Alias" is complete, my tentative plans are to go back and finish "Song of Adelita."

New story on the way, seeking editor help

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So, I'm supposed to be on hiatus from writing, taking it easy after wrapping up the epic-length tale that was Lightning in a Bottle. Yeah, right. Fat chance. One of my story ideas took off in my mind, and I have a good chunk of the story written already. I won't be posting any of it until it's complete, or nearly so; don't expect to see it for a month or more.

It's a romantic tale with no time travel or sci-fi aspect, so it's different from LiaB in that way. No rock and roll, baseball or coming of age stuff either. Still, I think many fans of LiaB will enjoy it. (fingers crossed) The story will most certainly have the "slow" code, and probably the "Minimal Sex" designation as well. That's not to say that this will apply to all of my future stories, but it will to this one. It's a medium length story that will probably have 15-20 chapters, certainly no more. (I'm done with epics for a good long while.)

Now is probably the right time to put out a request for editing help. I'm interested in help in two areas: a grammar and spelling editor, and a content editor. It would be a BIG help to find a content editor who has spent some time in China and is familiar with Chinese culture. :)

Correction

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A correction to that last blog entry ... the SOA characters actually appeared in chapters 72 and 74 of Lightning in a Bottle. :)

What's in store?

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Let me elaborate a little on that hint I dropped in my last blog entry. I do want to write a Lightning in a Bottle sequel, or at least a story revolving around characters in LiaB. There was a segue into the sequel in the epilogue of LiaB. It will center on the second-generation band, Lightning Strikes Twice (which may very well be the title of the story, as well). This tale will be more or less set in the present time, with no time-travel aspect. So, at some point, look for a tale which details the adventures of Lexie, Nick, Tina, Zoe, Leah, Jaden and "Deuce", with appearances by their parents - the familiar old characters you've gotten to know so well.

Having said that, let me temper your enthusiasm a bit by stating up front that this story is not number one on my priority list. I haven't yet figured out which way I want to take the story, and for me, a story needs several months (often longer) to fully crystallize in my mind. Therefore, my muse is insisting that I direct my immediate efforts into another universe.

If you look at my homepage, you'll notice that there's a story listed there that wasn't there before today. That's the story I alluded to in earlier entries: "Song of Adelita", which has been here on SOL since 2005, under another pen name. My reasons for having two pen names simply don't apply any more, so I put in a request to Lazeez to move SOA to the Sage Mullins pen name, so that all of my work is in one place. The other pen name is no more.

Currently, SOA has 25 chapters and is more than half finished. I just posted chapter 25 last week, which pulled the story out of the dreaded yellow stripe (inactive) status. I'm not sure how much SOA will appeal to fans of Lightning in a Bottle. It's a much darker tale with more sex, and a theme that might not be everyone's cup of tea. But give it a chance, anyway. A few characters in SOA made brief appearances in chapters 72 and 74 of LiaB, and from that, you may get a clue as to which way SOA is heading.

I want to eventually finish SOA, but again, it's not at the top of my to-do list. Recently, I found an old detailed summary of the conclusion of the story in the recesses of my hard drive, which gives me a nice blueprint to work with. After some thought, I decided to remain true to my earlier intentions for the story. In the short term, it will be simply a side pursuit. New chapters may appear from time to time, but they will likely appear slowly.

So, you may ask, what is at the top of my writing list? It's a new story which you might call an action/adventure romance. It's a story of medium length, much shorter than LiaB. I won't say any more, except that it likely will merit a "Minimal Sex" designation. I'll begin posting it once I consider it to be more than halfway written.

Beyond that, there's another tale in the works (chapter 1 is already complete) that I'm quite excited about. This story has a complex plot and will require some research on my part, and I'm not quite ready to jump into it. It's a time-travel tale, but not a do-over -- it deals with travel to the future. It likely will have the TimeTr, Sci-Fi and PostApoc codes.

I doubt I'll be doing much writing in the next month or so. Hopefully, though, I'll have something to post before too long.

Final thoughts on Lightning in a Bottle (part 2)

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Sharp-eyed readers may have noticed that as of yesterday, not only does LiaB have an actual table of contents, all 78 chapters now have titles. I skipped over the titles while I was posting the chapters, since although many of the titles are vague, some of them are rather obvious spoilers. That's less of an issue now that the entire story has been posted, so I elected to go ahead and add the titles.

Oh, and speaking of spoilers, in this entry I plan to touch on reader feedback and criticism. Which means I need to throw out this warning...

************** SPOILER ALERT ****************

Yep, if you're still reading the story, you might want to wait until you're finished before reading this entry.

There were four parts of the story that I'll mention here as being triggers for negative criticism.

1) Chapters 1-3: The beginning, prior to Pat being sent back to 1980. I'm only bringing this one up because I've gotten about six or seven feedback notes telling me that this part was unnecessary. These individuals felt that Pat needed to be sent back at the very beginning, and the rationale for that was always something along the lines of "in all the great time travel stories, the protagonist gets sent back at the start." This is as absurd as it is inaccurate. Off the top of my head, I can think of one time travel tale, the excellent "Washed Up" by Lazlong, where the protagonist gets sent back at an even later point in the story. Plus, it should be apparent now that the first three chapters served a valuable purpose: they tied directly in to the conclusion of the story.

2) Chapters 21-23: Pat's Big Blowup and his subsequent "dark period" that lasted almost a full year. Oh, the furor that resulted when I first posted those chapters. I got note after note telling me that I'd lost a reader (and the chapter download stats showed that the readership did indeed decrease, at least at the time). Time and again, I was chided for turning my protagonist into an immature asshole, and his friends into petty phonies. That, obviously, was not my intent, although I'll allow that without the context of what was to come, that reaction might have been somewhat justifiable. I had to post chapters 23 and 24 at the same time as a means of damage control, and that segment even generated a discussion thread over on the SOL Forum. Over time, though, opposition to this part of the story has waned greatly, and it's quite noticeable because a new group of readers has emerged who prefer to wait until a story is complete before reading it. Is that absence of negativity a result of improved context, or because later parts of the story are more deserving of criticism? I can't say.

3) Chapters 61-63: The Victor chapters. I won't dwell too much on this one, because I already spoke my mind in another blog entry not too long ago. It's disappointing to me that, for whatever reason, this part of the story just didn't jell with you, the readers.

4) Chapters 76-77: George appears in the rain and tells his story, followed by the disposal of the bottle. This part was more polarizing than anything else; feedback tended toward the extremes. Many of you loved it; some hated it. I had a few readers tell me this part was superfluous, added nothing to the story, and should have been left out. My intent was for it to be a somewhat roundabout way of tying up some loose ends.

Now, I'll step back and look at my own story with a critical eye. What part of the story, in my opinion, was most deserving of criticism when I posted it? Answer: None of the four I've listed here. My vote would go to the end of chapter 33, when Julia unceremoniously dumped Pat. It was too abrupt and out of character for Julia, at least the way I'd presented her up to that point. I regretted that turn of events almost immediately. A few readers did let me have it, but most of you let it pass without comment.

I pretty much painted myself into a corner at that point in the story. There were a lot of things going on: the band getting back together, the accident with Inez's parents, Pat making amends with Evie. Right after that, Pat shared his time travel secrets with Inez and Evie, which of course preceded Pat and Inez finally getting together. There was a strict sequence of events that I needed to adhere to, which caused Pat and Julia's breakup to be far more abrupt and jarring than I really wanted.

Luckily, I believe that this inconsistency was resolved a few chapters down the road, when Julia explained herself to Pat, about how guilt had been her primary motivation in breaking things off. I want to give credit where credit is due here: that scene was conceived by mcguy101, my behind-the-scenes collaborator over the second half of the story.

Enough negatives. Most of you really enjoyed the long buildup (over several chapters) to Pat and Inez finally getting together. Also, I was quite pleased to see that chapter 78, where Pat and Inez learned about their life in the other timeline, was met with almost unanimous approval.

Sometime around the middle of next week, I'll tell you more about my future writing plans. Let me throw out this teaser: Yes, a sequel of sorts to Lightning in a Bottle is on my agenda - although it probably won't be the next thing I tackle.

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