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Thank you to the folks who presented typos, misspellings, mis statements, and otherwise provided advice on how to tighten up "Emily". In particular, CoullPert spent a lot of time and considerable effort to help me clean up the results of my fumble-fingering my story.
The re submitted story is more clean, and, for those who do not want to wade through a month-by-month serial, may be more enjoyable to read.
I have just submitted Chapter 13. This wraps up this story. It is not impossible that there may be follow on stories, but for the present, I'm finished.
Thank you to everybody who read along, and encouraged me to fill out the tale. I hope you enjoyed it, and that it met your expectations. And, particularly, thank you to the folks who commented. Everyone. I am tickled that you all were engaged enough in this story, to reflect and share the results of that reflection.
Happy Mother's Day!
Read Jay Cantrell's blog post. Duty: it's what Adults do.
I've submitted Chapter 12, I anticipate y'all seeing it shortly.
At this point, it appears that Chapter 13 will see our adventurers home, and perhaps one more chapter will follow. I have had a couple of readers point out typographical errors, and places where I skipped a word, or other breach in continuity. Thank you. I've addressed them in my archival copy of the story.
Chapter Twelve is complete, and I am re-reading, and proofreading it, presently. I anticipate posting it next weekend. To all those who follow the story, and commented, thank you. I hope that, with this chapter, you feel that your patience has been rewarded.
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