Part 1 and 2 have been edited and posted. If you read it before, it should be much more enjoyable now. Part 3 is at the editors. Part 4 is underway. I'm around 90k words, wow!
The story had been given a new title, micro gates - edited version
Ok I goofed. Last week I set up a new email account and closed my ancient Yahoo account. I missed the one spot where I have to tell sol what my new feedback address is. I just fixed it. Please if you wrote me something resend it or write directly to me at firstname.lastname@example.org
what do you use an 8 foot diameter gateway for? I'd love to hear suggestions from readers. the rules? make it a unique earthbound use. looking forward to hearing from readers.
i finished a rough edit of part 1 and reposted it. had the help of an editor for a bit, but ended up finishing it myself, as i wanted to post chapter 2.
I'm now working on chapter 3. I'll find a stopping spot each time i got around 30k words. this has been fun. sorry about the no capitals thing. I'm writing on a tablet using the store input method, and capitalization is not easy, and sometimes the wrong word gets suggested. that's why i need an editor.
well, i screwed up the formatting. i forgot that to make a paragraph show properly it had to have a double line break. I'll fix and repost, but coffee first.
and to all the helpful people who told me i needed more paragraphs, they are there, you just can't see them.