Hi Folks,
Chapter 23 was just turned over to moderation this morning. It's a whopper and we'll see how it reads.
As always, your comments and corrections are treasured.
Warmest regards, Ol'Mac
Hi Folks,
Chapter 22 is with moderation and should post sometime today.
Thanks for your comments and corrections.
Warmest regards, Ol'Mac
P.S. I have already re-posted the corrected text to fix a couple of typos. I've really got to stop trying to write at 2:30 A.M.
P.P.S My thanks to all the Eagle Eyes and their much needed corrections. Keep'em coming folks. I'll re-post this chapter after the dust settles.
Hey Folks,
Chapter 21 was just handed off after a final proofread.
This one should take you a while to get through, as it's just shy of 3000 words. Enjoy.
Read it slowly, as I had to get creative with the syntax for the powerful female entity that just appeared.
Wamest regards, Ol'Mac
Hi Folks,
For those of you that were disapointed in the length of chapter 20, I do apologize. I had to cut it off there because I had just introduced a major plotline element. I promise, on my honor, that chapter 21 will make up for it.
As of this moment the little beastie is sitting at 2500 words, or there about and GROWING! Every time I think it's done, some darn character pipes up with their point of view and the word count goes up.
Thanks again to all for your patience.
Warmest regards, Ol'Mac