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Chapter 1-10 have been edited and reposted. I hope that this will be the last time I need to do it.
Chapter 11 will follow in a few days.
Chapter 12 will be a complete rewrite as well as 13.
I have a chapter 14 in the works, but I may combine it into chapter 12 and 13.
I'm sorry for the delays.
As always thanks for reading, and Oh give a shout out to TeNderLoin who without his help none of this would have been possible.
GD
Dear readers, Greetings of the Holidays.
I realize it been sometime that I have written anything here.
Before I go on, I would like to extend a big hand to TeNderLoin jim7@fastmail.us who has been instrumental in getting me back on track.
TeNderLoin has been acting as my editor, and as many have informed me, I have been in a desperate need of one Please let him know how much you appreciate his efforts to making this a more natural story to read.
TeNderLoin has Literally found and made thousands and thousands of grammatical corrections. Please extend your gratitude to him for his efforts.
Together we have cleaned up the first 11 chapters, and soon a rewritten chapter 12 and 13 will be posted. I have more to write here, I just have to wait for my fingers to type it out and for TeNderLoin to clean up the grammatical errors, of which if my other chapters are any indication will number into the thousands.
Thank you all for your patients. I would not be doing this if not for all your encouragement.
Grey Dragon
Ok, Taking a deep breath, I hope I have fixed whatever it was I had done wrong with the last posting.
It is by no means perfect writing. I hope you will not hold that against me. None of it is, and someday I may get around to polishing it all.
For now it is just my ramblings as disorganized as they are.
I make up much of it up on the fly, so even I don't really know what is going to happen next.
I would guess real writers would be shocked with that.
The simple fact is, I am too lazy to form an outline, and even if I did, I would most likely not stick to it.
GD
To my readers.
Sorry, I guess I messed up the story when I tried to rearrange the order. I going to go over it again and fix it.
Looks like I messed up the formatting at the end. Not sure how that happened.
I have redo all that work. I didn't see any of that when I did my review and editing.
I will fix it.
GD
To my readers.
Sorry, I guess I messed up the story when I tried to rearrange the order. I going to go over it again and fix it.
Looks like I messed up the formatting at the end. Not sure how that happened.
I have redo all that work. I didn't see any of that when I did my review and editing.
I will fix it.
GD
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