I’m thinking of reworking the original Animal Husbandry story into the introduction to a new universe.
The increased detail readers have asked for would be additional chapters. I would fix the inconsistencies and confusing things like when I introduced med tube technology, then ignored it. The final chapter would address the ideas readers have suggested and perhaps some of the ideas Robert A. Heinlein talked about when some of his characters reached two or three thousand years old. I would go a different direction with the King drawing inspiration from introducing new girls to physical pleasure, never getting bored with living.
I’d like to hear any ideas about where to go with this story.
Thanks again for your interest.
George Foxx
I've posted major edits of Call Me Beth versions A&B
The edits fix confusing passages and continuity issues as well as clean up the mechanical issues.
I also got rid of anatomically inaccurate writing about the hymen and defloration.
Thanks again to the reader who pointed out the issues.
I'm in the hospital again while they try to figure out what is wrong with my digestive system. It will be at least a week before I can start on the plans I outlined.
While I write primarily for my own enjoyment, I got messages from two readers this week that brought up errors or issues I want to address. That directly impacts my project schedule. Of course the amount of work I actually get done depends on how often I fall asleep while writing.
I have 4 new stories in various stages of completion. These are on hold while I fix some things.
Maintenance Projects:
1. Fix continuity issues in " Call Me Beth" Both versions.
2. Correct anotomical mistake on the location of the hymen in all stories with deflowering scenes.
My pervy viewing of seculum and hymen pics led me to believe the hymen was located about half-way between the opening of the vagina and the cervix. A reader pointed out that my eyes played tricks on me. The Mayo Clinic web site reports the hymen is located 0.8 inches or less inside the vaginal opening.
While I do stray into fantasy about performance and strength and number of orgasms, I do try to be medically accurate unless I'm taking artistic license for a specific fantasy.
After I fix the errors, I'll go back to working on new stories.
In the works are: "My Niece Janet" "They Say Every Cloud Has a Silver Lining" a mojor rewrite of "Two for the Price of One" "Diary of a Teenage Seductress" and "I Love My Job - A Succubus' Story."
I make no promises for completion of any project and reserve the right to put a misbehaving story back in the trunk.
I suppose I owe people who read my stories a major rewrite on "The Electrician's Harem" and see if that gives me any inspiration for Book 2.
Thank you to everyone who reads my stories, and my gratitude to readers who make constructive comments or point out problems.
Entirely too damn hot in Manila,
George Foxx