I've revised the last chapter of the story and submitted it for posting.
Thanks to my editor, Glenn, for the quick turnaround.
Chapter 3 represents the biggest changes I've made to the original story. The primary difference is much more character development for a number of Uncle George's daughters. Some of these characters deserved a lot deeper treatment than I gave them in the original. I hope this gives the reader a deeper insight into the reletionships and the love between the characters. I hope too that it shows the relationships are all about mutual love, and there is no exploration intended or unintended going on in this story.
Of course the real world is never perfect, but in this fictional world I can control, they are all stories of mutual love, desire, passion, and fulfillment.
Many thanks to my Editor, Glen, for helping me give you clean copy and for helping me avoid easy, but cheap plot directions.
The rewritten version of Chapter 2 was submitted for posting.
If you've already read the original version of the story and have time to read the rewrite, I'd appreciate your feedback on whether the new version is an improvement from your point of view.
Over Christmas I did a lot of reading, and discovered some of my stories lacked the level of descriptive writing that helps make characters interesting. I have posted a rewrite of Chapter 1 of Please Uncle George that attempts to improve on the descriptions of characters. I have other projects going on right now, so it will be a while before I get the other chapters done.
Thanks for your patience.
Thanks Glen for your editing work.
I submitted Chapter 4 for posting.
This is the last chapter and conclusion of this story.