The rewritten version of Chapter 2 was submitted for posting.
If you've already read the original version of the story and have time to read the rewrite, I'd appreciate your feedback on whether the new version is an improvement from your point of view.
Over Christmas I did a lot of reading, and discovered some of my stories lacked the level of descriptive writing that helps make characters interesting. I have posted a rewrite of Chapter 1 of Please Uncle George that attempts to improve on the descriptions of characters. I have other projects going on right now, so it will be a while before I get the other chapters done.
Thanks for your patience.
Thanks Glen for your editing work.
I submitted Chapter 4 for posting.
This is the last chapter and conclusion of this story.
I'm posting Chapter 3 today. That was going to be the end of the story,
but my Editor, Glenn pointed out some things I'd left hanging, so I'm
working on Chapter 4 to patch the holes and bring the story to a smoother conclusion.
A GREAT BIG Thank You to Glenn for all his help on this story.
Chapter 2 submitted for posting.
This chapter has pregnant sex, lactation, nursing babies and daddy
and everyone falls deeper in love. The chapter concludes when both girls make love with Uncle George for the first time after delivering their babies.