Thanks for all the comments etc...
I have been told I need an editor and have tried a couple. Haven't found the right one yet I guess.
I am working on the next chapter of Crystal Control. It should be ready soon.
Thanks to my editor, I'm putting up a couple more chapters. At this point, it's mostly laying groundwork for future chapters.
I have a new editor and things are coming along. Chpt 7 should be up soon. Other chapters should be coming along shortly.
Ok, I have a few more chapters ready to go, but they need edited and I've lost contact with the person that has been doing the editing recently.
Let me know.