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Like for story where mc's setup constitution, laws etc

sunseeker ๐Ÿšซ 12/18/2017, 10:48:57 AM

Looking for any recommendations for stories where the main characters setup a constitution, laws, etc. I've read The Ark by REP.

Can be set in past or current time, futuristic, space post or pre apoc, doesn't matter.

Thanks

Replies:   Capt. Zapp  tphile2  JPanyon
Capt. Zapp ๐Ÿšซ 12/18/2017, 11:37:56 AM

@sunseeker

Have you read 'Majestic'?

sunseeker ๐Ÿšซ 12/18/2017, 12:29:38 PM

thanks Capt Zapp, yes I have read it, several times :) plus a few of the authors other stories.

Thurfing ๐Ÿšซ 12/18/2017, 4:36:05 PM
Updated: 12/18/2017, 4:37:12 PM

Hey this story fits! Habe fun it's a good read imo!

https://storiesonline.net/s/15604/the-reset-manifesto

Replies:   themarksmn
themarksmn ๐Ÿšซ 3/20/2018, 8:11:30 AM

@Thurfing

Thank you for recommending this one! Was a great read.

sunseeker ๐Ÿšซ 12/18/2017, 5:38:58 PM
Updated: 12/18/2017, 5:39:32 PM

Thanks Thurfing, yes another great story! Sadly I've already enjoyed reading,,,and re-reading it :)

Maybe an older story,,,from years gone by,,,

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ 12/18/2017, 6:00:16 PM

Gateway - What Lies Beyond by The Blind Man

Stories by FantasyLover tend to have those elements too.

AJ

JohnBobMead ๐Ÿšซ 12/18/2017, 6:21:17 PM

The Jade Force of Misera series by Lazlo Zelazac.

While initially it's just a mercenary force, they do end up establishing the Jade Empire, complete with governmental structure. And all the way through, there is Law by Contract.

Replies:   sunseeker
sunseeker ๐Ÿšซ 12/18/2017, 11:14:57 PM

@JohnBobMead

Love the Jade Force series!

LonelyDad ๐Ÿšซ 12/18/2017, 10:15:17 PM

"Ever and Always' by Banadin

https://storiesonline.net/s/12770/ever-and-always

Most of the story doesn't apply, but at the end they plan for and set up a new government for the US.

sunseeker ๐Ÿšซ 12/18/2017, 11:14:08 PM

I think I might read too much,,,I've read all the stories suggested. Will check out some of FantasyLover's stories I haven't read.

Thanks everyone for the suggestions

Ernest Bywater ๐Ÿšซ 12/18/2017, 11:46:52 PM

A lot depends on how much you want the constitution etc built into the story. In the Clan Amir series a constitution is created as part of the first story in the series, but it doesn't go into much detail of the constitution, although one of the additional stories does have a lot of the detail. Most of the stories are action stories set in that universe.

https://storiesonline.net/universe/891/clan-amir

much of the constitution information is here:

https://storiesonline.net/s/55443/about-berant

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sunseeker ๐Ÿšซ 12/19/2017, 10:04:29 AM

@Ernest Bywater

thanks EB. I read the Clam Amir stories but will have to go back and read em again ;)

Replies:   Ernest Bywater
Ernest Bywater ๐Ÿšซ 12/19/2017, 12:04:42 PM

@sunseeker

thanks EB. I read the Clam Amir stories but will have to go back and read em again ;)

The bit about setting up a constitution is toward the end of Fighting Heritage while the bulk of the constitution oddities are in About Berant with mention of aspects of the constitution being made in a few of the stories; The Shukra War is one when the constitution aspects are mentioned a few times.

Replies:   sunseeker
sunseeker ๐Ÿšซ 12/19/2017, 12:10:41 PM
Updated: 12/19/2017, 12:46:44 PM

@Ernest Bywater

just finished About Berant. Very interesting and nicely detailed. Many thanks! And thanks too for the info about the other 2 stories.

Replies:   Ernest Bywater
Ernest Bywater ๐Ÿšซ 12/19/2017, 12:29:43 PM

@sunseeker

And thanks too for the info about the other 2 stories.

You're welcome, there are several other stories where the constitution is referenced, but those two have the most relevance to the constitution as sub-plots. Most of the other references are more like a back-hand reference of the type in Rites of Passage where Gordie speaks on his sister's behalf and states he can't be due to the law while Harold will be - meaning he can't be king at all. The constitution comes up again in The Day of Blood, The Lost Ones, and others - but is only mentioned as a side aspect.

ChiMi ๐Ÿšซ 12/19/2017, 12:02:01 AM

Damn, can't remember the Series, but it was about a futuristic Earth society that completely depended on Energy and technology. After an internal struggle between the rulers of Earth, the energy grid failed and suddenly the Society was on a stone age level.

The First book picks up with a group of LARP'ers (life action role players) who played 24/7 living without technology and suddenly they were the only hope for survival.

Sometimes (and battles) later, they set up a new constitution to try and survive the now lawless land.

There were also fantastical creatures like Unicorns and Dragons (semi- and permanent transformed Humans, who couldn't transform back without technology)

I have the books somewhere in my bookshelves here, but can't find it right now. If I remember correctly, it was a Baen Books Author, but the site is currently down.

Even if it was my kind of story with rebuilding society, empire building, etc. I found the "FUCK YEAH AMERICA!!!!" patriotism with the whole constitution plot headache inducing and dropped it within the second book.

Replies:   lnettnay
lnettnay ๐Ÿšซ 12/19/2017, 1:08:44 AM

@ChiMi

I believe you are thinking of: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Council_Wars

Lonny

ChiMi ๐Ÿšซ 12/19/2017, 1:31:03 AM

Yup, that's it.

tphile2 ๐Ÿšซ 12/20/2017, 4:41:37 AM

@sunseeker

two Robert Heinlein novels come to mind.
The Tunnel In The Sky
The Moon Is A Harsh Mistress

both are essentials and great reading

Gauthier ๐Ÿšซ 12/23/2017, 8:04:10 PM

The Preacher Man by hammingbyrd7 where the 'Constitution' is computer code.
Some part of the Greenie universe by Al Steiner.

Best Empire Builder ๐Ÿšซ 12/31/2017, 4:47:56 PM

Pfand X has group that fixes the laws at the end of story.

Replies:   sunseeker
sunseeker ๐Ÿšซ 12/31/2017, 6:49:42 PM

@Best Empire Builder

thanks I will check it out. Don't know how I missed a story by Lazlo! Thought I had read all of them...

Zellus ๐Ÿšซ 1/2/2018, 12:51:06 AM

https://storiesonline.net/s/51490/will-and-carrie
https://storiesonline.net/a/Rotedrachen

Best Empire Builder ๐Ÿšซ 1/3/2018, 9:06:17 PM

You might enjoy this also.
What yhe future may bring by Going forward 55

JPanyon ๐Ÿšซ 9/13/2018, 1:52:38 AM

@sunseeker

Uncle Jim's "Injustice" series is headed in that direction. Three stories are completed, and the latest one ("Maureen") is well underway. The action involves baddies from Atlanta to Salem, and politicos throughout the territory centered around Washington D.C. It's MC element is based on magic use, and not pure mind power. Have yourself a good read.

hiltonls16 ๐Ÿšซ 9/13/2018, 5:59:17 AM

Gordon Johnson's Personalia series, perhaps.

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