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Looking for more like Witch Eyes by Argon

sunseeker 🚫
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Like the topic says I'm looking for more stories like Witch Eyes...guy and girl get separated by fate after a short or long romance, meet up later in life and he finds out she had his kid.

I know there was a story about this happening to a guy before he went to college and became a star football player but the girl was a cheatin byatch iirc, and had lied to both the daughter and her current fiance...any other suggestions are welcome!

TIA peoples and have a great weekend!

SunSeeker

EDIT - Just remembered that the guy stayed in an apartment above a garage when he went to college, the landlords daughter was trying to be a snob when she came back to visit, and he later met/dated a golf pro...

But then I might just be confusing several stories lol

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sunseeker 🚫
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@sunseeker

Believe I found the football related story - Path to Glory by Brendan Buckley.

Iirc the storyline about discovering he has a daughter comes later in the story...

https://storiesonline.net/s/56290/path-to-glory

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XofDallas 🚫

@sunseeker

Path to Glory is the one you're looking for. No doubts at all.

FantasyLover 🚫

@sunseeker

Vacation by Dual Writer

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sunseeker 🚫
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@FantasyLover

Vacation by Dual Writer

Really? I have read Vacation a few times and don't remember it being anything like Witch Eyes.

Yes the first lady Steve hooked up with in the trailer park left him, iirc because of violence (not by steve), and they got back together later but she never but she never had his child while gone. I don't think anyone ever had Steve's kid and he didn't know about it...and he had a lot of kids...and wives!Lol

Thanks for the suggestion though

SunSeeker

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akarge 🚫

@sunseeker

Actually, I think Steve DID get his lady friend pregnant, but he didn't know until she showed up again, kid in tow.

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sunseeker 🚫

@akarge

Actually, I think Steve DID get his lady friend pregnant, but he didn't know until she showed up again, kid in tow.

huh, I'll have to check it out again as I don't remember her having his kid after taking off.

Thanks for the input...

SunSeeker

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itsmehonest 🚫

@sunseeker

I was the first woman Kathy, she left pregnant with Greg when she left over the violence. Did not tell Steve till she came back. Then they made Bonita when she came back.

akarge 🚫
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@sunseeker

From the 'Cast' chapter.

Kathy - The first woman in the trailer park that Steve meets and dates. Is also the mother of JJ (Jake Junior), Carl, Ben, and Barbara. The four children are hers and Jakes. Jake is her now deceased first husband. Jake was a marine killed in action on the first day of Desert Storm. Kathy leaves after the violence she feels she is responsible for and unknowingly leaves pregnant with Steve's child.

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sunseeker 🚫

@akarge

Guess I shoulda read the "Cast" chapter before I started reading it...again for the umpteenth time! LOL!

Thanks

Dinsdale 🚫
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@sunseeker

One story, His and Her takes:
https://storiesonline.net/s/40398/reunion by Girl Friday
https://storiesonline.net/s/40651/coming-home-reunion-lukes-story by Rod Ramsey
These stories were uploaded in August / September 2003 so it's hardly a surprise that they are Premier Only nowadays.

dotB also had a couple of entries in this particular competition, "Beyond the Mirror" (his version) and Fifth Wheel (her version, incomplete). They were only posted on his own site where he called himself K Pelle. Grin and bear it.

Reluctant Sir has one, https://storiesonline.net/s/18102/echo

oyster50 also has one, if you look at https://storiesonline.net/s/14808/community-four-ever (starting Chapter 14) you will find another one.
Edited to remove references to two other stories where his "daughter" turned out to have been fathered by another.

Oh, and Argon has another entry: https://storiesonline.net/s/51938/return-from-the-dark-side where Tammy appears in Chapter 19.

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@Dinsdale

Thank you! Added them to my list! Even the couple I've read already :D

SunSeeker

MarissaHorne 🚫

@sunseeker

IIRC, A Terrible Taste in Tees by qhml1 has this as a post-separation plot 4lement.

redthumb 🚫

@sunseeker

Can't remember the title or author, MMC started a garage band with girl friend as singer. Moved away moved away, lost contact with FG and became successful rock musician. In chat room girl said that her mother was a singer with a garage band. It turned out that it was his daughter that he never knew he had.

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@redthumb

I believe I remember this one too...the old gf is dieing from cancer iirc...I think it is Axe Victim by Lellan McLemore

MMC name is Axe Woodson

https://storiesonline.net/s/48234/axe-victim

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Dinsdale 🚫

@sunseeker

https://storiesonline.net/s/41757/spirit-renewed (Heathen57) has a very similar plot, but without the cancer (I think).
It is a lot shorter than the Lellan McLemore story and imho falls way short in comparison.

MarissaHorne 🚫

@sunseeker

Those Dagenham Days byThe Heartbreak Kid has a similar theme.

Radagast 🚫

@sunseeker

Another by qhml1:
https://storiesonline.net/s/25657/sweet-child-of-mine

"Something I can do for you, kid?"
"Yeah. If you're Kyle Masters you can invite me in, give me a towel and something cool to drink. And you need to spit in this tube."
"Who the he ... heck are you, kid? Why are you botherin' me?"
She looked scared to death but determined as hell. "Well, you're probably my father. That's why I need you to spit in this cup. I need to know. My name is Kinsey."

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