I just finished reading this story for the nth+1 time. There's nothing really special about the story. No special twists, no exceptional phrasing, it just works. But it grabs you. Once you start the story, it just moves one along the story, until you reach the end and realize how good it was, and how satisfying it was to read it.
Way to go Stangstar6.
https://storiesonline.net/s/11755/rocket-man-sex-story