I'm reading a great story with a great 1st-person narrator's voice, but it's in desperate need of editing. I keep coming upon things you editors should be aware of when editing โ plurality.
How many times have you read: "He dropped his hands to his side"? It should be "sides," plural, unless he dropped both his hands to the same side of his body.
In the story I'm reading, he wrote: "He reached over and took my cheek into his hands, tipped my face up to his." He grabbed her cheek with both hands to tip her face up? Of course it should be "cheeks." Plural.
And a few paragraphs later, he wrote: "I pulled myself up along his body resting my inflamed pussy on his hips." That's one wide pussy to be on both his hips at the same time. Of course it should be "hip." Singular.
I'm not picking on this author. I see this way too often on SOL so I thought I'd bring it to your attention so that you would be aware of it while editing.
ETA: corrected a typo in my example โ "hand" should have been "hands." Actually, it probably should be "arms."