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Need additional editors/proof readers

Reluctant_Sir ๐Ÿšซ

I have had a mix of editors over the years, a couple have moved on, a couple have much more important things going on in their lives and so on.

My go-to guy has already taken a first pass but, like all of my stories, it usually requires the diligent efforts of multiple people to turn a silk purse into a sows' ear.... or something like that.

This new story is nothing ground-breaking or extraordinary, just an idea that came up a few years ago and has been banging around in my drafts folder. It's not even a new idea and there are a lot stories out there that are superficially similar.

The tale is about a modern-ish lad who learns that magic is real. He finds a mentor, some new friends and even gains a nemesis, all before he learns to shave.

The working title is Magic 101.

Tags are: Some Sex, M/F, F/F, Incest, Magic, Fantasy.

There are some non-sexual Mind Control elements and some non-sexual violence, though neither element is a focus for the plot.

Any of you editors fancy taking a stab at this one?

Replies:   pcbondsman
richardshagrin ๐Ÿšซ

The advantage of the working title is that sequels will be easy to name. Magic 102, Magic 103, maybe Magic 201, 202, all the way to Magic 999. If you want to focus on mutual oral sex, Magic 69 would fit the bill. Or eating pie, Magic 3.14159265359...

pcbondsman ๐Ÿšซ

@Reluctant_Sir

I'll have a go at it. Contact me through SOL mail. PC

Replies:   Reluctant_Sir
Reluctant_Sir ๐Ÿšซ

@pcbondsman

Thanks, Message sent!

daygecko ๐Ÿšซ

If you are looking for a proof reader I could take a look.

Replies:   Reluctant_Sir
Reluctant_Sir ๐Ÿšซ

@daygecko

Thanks for the offer!

If pcbondsman decides not to, or I think we need another set of eyes, I will send you a private message.

SGTStoner ๐Ÿšซ

Any time you need help with a story, let me know. It's definitely more fun musing about story elements from a great writer, than wondering how I'm going to wrap up one of my long-languishing projects.

Replies:   Reluctant_Sir
Reluctant_Sir ๐Ÿšซ

@SGTStoner

Any time you need help with a story, let me know. It's definitely more fun musing about story elements from a great writer, than wondering how I'm going to wrap up one of my long-languishing projects.

Back to work, you! Nose to the grindstone etc etc etc.

You started with a bang and we are expecting great things from you!

(Thanks, I will keep your offer in mind!)

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