Hi i am a newish author who has been writing a dark supernatural harem story where the human male hero meets monster girls.
To describe the story it takes place in a modern era where monster girls aren't known to the public but they are known to various groups that either want to kill, exploit the girls for their powers, or conduct unethical research. And that's just for starters. A lot of the adventures i have in mind are purely random happening in this universe i'm working to create.
A lot of the story has been written already, for the most part i need help with the grammar and spelling. I also could use help with the story line, making sure there are no noticeable plot holes in it. Any suggestions to make the story better would also be helpful.