So how important is punctuation? I just read this in an SOL story:
Usually, it was my mom I stroked off to, or one of my friends,
He meant — friends' (meaning his friends' mothers), but he had his male protagonist jerking off to his male friends.
So how important is punctuation? I just read this in an SOL story:
Usually, it was my mom I stroked off to, or one of my friends,
He meant — friends' (meaning his friends' mothers), but he had his male protagonist jerking off to his male friends.
So how important is punctuation?
You mean like this?
After we ate George, Mary and I went shopping.
Is it 2 or 3 people going shopping?
After we ate George, Mary and I went shopping.
Is it 2 or 3 people going shopping?
More importantly, how much of George did they eat?
More importantly, how much of George did they eat?
Since it was a 'No Sex' story, I guess they ate all of him. ;)
More importantly, how much of George did they eat?
And more importantly, did they bring a George goodie bag to eat while out?
Is it 2 or 3 people going shopping?
One has to wonder what they went shopping for after eating George. The best guess is they want someone for desert.
After we ate George, Mary and I went shopping.
Pffft. To qualify as 'erotic fiction', the author has to specify the aforementioned Georgina's orgasm count while being eaten ;)
AJ