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One little quote missing

Switch Blayde

So how important is punctuation? I just read this in an SOL story:

Usually, it was my mom I stroked off to, or one of my friends,


He meant — friends' (meaning his friends' mothers), but he had his male protagonist jerking off to his male friends.

Replies:   garymrssn
garymrssn
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@Switch Blayde

So how important is punctuation?


You mean like this?

After we ate George, Mary and I went shopping.


Is it 2 or 3 people going shopping?

joyR

@garymrssn

After we ate George, Mary and I went shopping.

Is it 2 or 3 people going shopping?


More importantly, how much of George did they eat?

Remus2

George is having a bad day.

garymrssn
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@joyR


More importantly, how much of George did they eat?


Since it was a 'No Sex' story, I guess they ate all of him. ;)

Ernest Bywater

@garymrssn

Is it 2 or 3 people going shopping?


One has to wonder what they went shopping for after eating George. The best guess is they want someone for desert.

awnlee jawking

@garymrssn

After we ate George, Mary and I went shopping.


Pffft. To qualify as 'erotic fiction', the author has to specify the aforementioned Georgina's orgasm count while being eaten ;)

AJ

Crumbly Writer

@joyR

More importantly, how much of George did they eat?

And more importantly, did they bring a George goodie bag to eat while out?

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