Just starting work on something new, and would appreciate a second set of eyes on what I'm doing.
The story starts out with the beginnings of an incest story between a 17yo sister and her 15yo brother, but there is a MacGuffin in the mix that will both push the story along and also serve as the means for introducing a fantasy element.
I'm not looking for proof-reading or editing, more someone who doesn't mind the content, doesn't mind reading a first draft, and can offer suggestions if the characterisation is off (this being something I struggle with, the giving of different voices to my characters).
Oh, and if it goes well enough that I publish it here, I'll add a 'thank you' if you want it.
Cheers.
