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Can I get a Feedback for my current story?

SaiDiaS ๐Ÿšซ

I want to see if the writing for my story has improved or not, and whether or not the story is working, so far. From the prologue to Chapter 7, I was doing a lot head-hopping, because I am not writer and I am not that experienced in writing. I just started writing for fun and to write stories I'd like to see. So there's a lot of mistakes those 7 chapters plus the prologue.

So, if anyone would be feeling to give me feedback. It'll be great.

Replies:   Freyrs_stories  Marius-6
Freyrs_stories ๐Ÿšซ


sure, I'll have a gander at it in the next day or two. get back to you after. premise seems ok to my tastes.

do you want the feedback here or inline with the story?

Replies:   SaiDiaS
SaiDiaS ๐Ÿšซ


Either one is fine. Whichever one is easier for you.

Marius-6 ๐Ÿšซ


It would be significantly easier if you Post a LINK to the story you ware asking to be reviewed; in this thread.

Replies:   Freyrs_stories  SaiDiaS
Freyrs_stories ๐Ÿšซ


I'm on my second read through. it was easy enough to find as it is the author's only story to date. but here's the link anyway Link hope that helps. The story is a reasonable effort though a bit jumpy at points, but that is not a major fault, just an observation.

SaiDiaS ๐Ÿšซ


I only have one story up on this site.


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