I'm trying to come up with a reasonably sexy encounter with a girl at a low end motel. I was thinking about something in the pool (i think it comes from thinking of that movie from dusk til dawn)
But i don't know how feasible that is.
In short the reason i'm writing this is to get input from other people.
And yes i know what you people are going to say "how about in the room in the bed?" but i'm also looking for some inspiration here....
Well i think random guest would work for terms of this would work best for terms of the scenario i have in mind.
Though i wouldn't be opposed to a "i paid a (blank worker) $50 for (blank) so i can have this sexual encounter with you" story
Not knowing the scenario you have in mind makes it a bit difficult to foster suggestions. However, if paying for a service is on the table, a random sex worker encounter would fit.
Well you see i don't know the scenario to a degree...
Let me explain...
The story i'm writing (a monstergirl/harem story) the group is hiding out at this motel from a criminal syndicate.
Also the girls need to have sex with the male "harem king" to recharge their powers which they used the previous night to help the male MC fake his death.
To answer the obvious question here, the reason they're hiding out from the criminal syndicate is because they (the male hero and the girls) want to stay out of any place the male MC would obviously be for a while.
To answer the obvious question here, the reason they're hiding out from the criminal syndicate is because they (the male hero and the girls) want to stay out of any place the male MC would obviously be for a while.
Hiding from any given group isn't that hard. A hotel or motel would be the last place they would want to go for that though. Even the low budget models require personal ID. There are several states that have codified that requirement. Try checking into any hotel without an ID and cash only payment to experience that for yourself.
Any information the government can get should be considered on the market to a sufficient bid. They may as well have popped smoke and put up a neon sign that says "here we are."
Hiding from any given group isn't that hard. A hotel or motel would be the last place they would want to go for that though. Even the low budget models require personal ID. There are several states that have codified that requirement. Try checking into any hotel without an ID and cash only payment to experience that for yourself.
Any information the government can get should be considered on the market to a sufficient bid. They may as well have popped smoke and put up a neon sign that says "here we are.
Okay, fair enough argument, but i'd argue there would be a few days of leeway between the time of the incident that causes the MC to want to hide out and the time the BOLO is put out...
But arguments aside, i'll humor your point of view for five minutes and ask "where would you suggest a character hides out to stay out of public view for a while?"
Camp grounds, trailer parks, or a low budget rental house (sometimes a boat rental). If they were in a camper, no one would be the wiser unless they were seen.
The people who rent such places are usually not adverse to keeping the transaction out of the governments eyes as they pocket the money without a report for tax reasons.
Credit cards or bank debit cards are a sure way to leave a trail straight to them. That also includes gas stations et cetera.
Cash only is the purview of migrant workers. Not just picking crops either. Many industrial sites such as power plants, and large construction projects will have options nearby them as they typically have a migratory work force.
ETA: All cell phones should be ditched as well. Tracking via cell phones has gotten more than one wanted person busted.
I admit those are fair points about your location suggestions...
And the stuff about ditching all cell phones is a given...
But arguments aside, i'll humor your point of view for five minutes and ask "where would you suggest a character hides out to stay out of public view for a while?"
Anything that can be tied to the MC by public records, like a relative's vacation cabin, is out.
I would recommend squatting on an abandoned farm house.
Hiding at a Motel: Should be fine if one of the female characters (a) isn't being pursued by the syndicate and (b) could put it on her credit card.
Random and Reasonably Sexy Encounter: Pool seems fine to me, especially if it is mid-week in a business-type area. Not unusual for the pool to be unused for significant periods of time (or, get the desk clerk to let them slip in and new girl sees and joins them). I'm assuming by "reasonably sex" you mean more than just a meet-cute? Some sexual activity. Again, depending on time, could be fine. If it's just some display, there's always the old wardrobe malfunction, which could be even more fun in a pool packed with others.
Hiding at a Motel: Should be fine if one of the female characters (a) isn't being pursued by the syndicate and (b) could put it on her credit card.
Her not being a direct target wouldn't necessarily matter if her association with the MC was known to the syndicate.
I meant for "isn't being pursued" to include just for reasons of known association, but you are right to clarify. Thanks.
In the end it's your story.
"Monstergirl/harem" puts the need for realism on the back foot.
If there were such a thing as a monstergirl, they would come with experience in hiding what and who they are.
If there were such a thing as a monstergirl, they would come with experience in hiding what and who they are.
Not necessarily. I could imagine a world where they are common and somewhat accepted in society so no need to hide except perhaps for extreme/particularly dangerous types.
"Monstergirl/harem" puts the need for realism on the back foot.
If there were such a thing as a monstergirl, they would come with experience in hiding what and who they are.
Well i'm not sure about this, you see the world i'm doing monstergirls aren't generally known to the public but they are known to various groups who either want to kill the monstergirls, exploit their abilities or coerce them into being living weapons.
And after thinking about the hiding part for a while, i'm definitely not certain about it because there would be factors involved.
for example a shapeshifter or a humanoid type monstergirl okay those i can accept.
monstergirls like greek lamias? i'm not so sure about that.
To me it's more fun to throw in complications here and there.
but they are known to various groups who either want to kill the monstergirls, exploit their abilities or coerce them into being living weapons.
All more than enough to motivate them to stay hidden.
