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Son can hypnotically freeze mother

readinghypnosis ๐Ÿšซ

My premise involves a teenage son and his recently-divorced mother. The divorce was pretty messy and left the mom rather bitter, which comes out with the formerly fun mom being more strict with her son and kind of grumpy in general. The son wins tickets to see a stage show hypnotist and convinces her to come, hoping it might cheer her up.

At the show, the hypnotist announces he needs a volunteer from the crowd and picks the mother. He puts her under and gives her a bunch of post-hypnotic commands to do silly things, like think she's a barking dog, that she's cold, or to cause her to freeze in place like a statue, only to have no memory of it when he brings her out of it.

The mother and son go home with the mother not believing anything was done to her, because she doesn't remember. The son insists that was indeed the case, and lists off the trigger words, none of which work, until he gets to one that causes her to freeze in the middle of what she was doing.

Confused at first, the son realizes that the hypnotist removed the trigger words at the end of the show, but must've forgotten to remove the one causing her to freeze. He says it again, and his mother resumes what she was doing, not realizing anything happened. Unsure what to do, he tries it again, successfully freezing and unfreezing her, before deciding not to tell anyone.

After looking at her in her frozen state, the son begins to realize how attractive she looks, especially her legs in a pair of shorts, like she usually sleeps in. He eventually works up the nerve to run his hands over her thighs a bit.

A few days later, remembering how he'd only kissed one or two girls in school and neither had seemed to think he was very good at it, he starts practicing kissing with his frozen mother. This continues for a few days, with the "practice" working up to feeling her chest through her shirt, and eventually practicing removing a bra.

Although his mother almost appears none the wiser (though sometimes confused how her shirt got ruffled or her lipstick a bit smeared), after a while, the son notices something happening: His mother had initially been a bit stern, but soon starts acting a bit more affectionate towards him, hugging and kissing and touching him more often.

She starts wearing sundresses or short skirts more often, takes a greater interest in the things he likes, encourages him to do more things together, and even telling him how handsome he is. At first, it just seems like she's become a more attentive mother, but after a while, it almost sees like she's flirting with him. He begins to wonder if the things he's been doing to her while she's hypnotically frozen are starting to have a subconscious effect on her...

What do you think?

Replies:   Eddie Davidson  Fanlon
Eddie Davidson ๐Ÿšซ

@readinghypnosis

That's a good setup but where does it go from there?

A good twist at the end might be that The Mom was only pretending the trigger worked to get him to stop. She froze in place and was shocked that he believed it had actually worked

Subsequently when he tried taking advantage of the situation and also shocked her and she let it happen.

You should try writing it

Replies:   readinghypnosis
readinghypnosis ๐Ÿšซ

@Eddie Davidson

No, I've seen the whole "I was only pretending" bit before. I wasn't really interested in that here.

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@readinghypnosis

No, I've seen the whole "I was only pretending" bit before.

I read a story (not on SOL) where the female thought she was pretending to go along with it until it went too far for her liking then she found she really was being hypnotically controlled. The story was pretty rubbish, without a satisfactory ending - basically an excuse for a series of mind-controlled porn scenes.

AJ

Eddie Davidson ๐Ÿšซ

@readinghypnosis

Conversely I've seen the whole "it really works" too.

I thought you were looking for suggestions

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@Eddie Davidson

Has anyone done "Oh my god it worked! Now what do I do?"

Replies:   Eddie Davidson
Eddie Davidson ๐Ÿšซ
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@Dominions Son

You mean like the son has no idea what to do but someone else does?

Here is one I've never seen and wanted to though. I don't know that it would work in this scenario because I was imagining her going under a trance of suggestion and having to do what he said for like 3 days.

I'd really prefer to read the story about what happens AFTER the hypnosis is over.

If the mom had perfect memory of everything that she was made to do. It could be really awkward. Especially if she knew that her son could trigger her at any time.

Maybe he doesn't realize she has perfect memory of what happened. She sits at the dinner table with her husband and daughter and him and pretends as though nothing happened the three days the dad and daughter were away. Meanwhile she knows her son is capable of putting her under at any time and making her stick a banana up her ass and dance like a monkey.

That would be kind of a thriller

I could also see it where she has no memory of what happened but people keep telling her what a slut and a pig she was. She has lost track of time and thinks that they are kidding her.

"You don't remember walking naked through the neighborhood and yelling come get this pussy? "

" I really didn't do that. You've got to be kidding"

And the story is more about her trying to figure out who put her under the trance and if they can do it again

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ
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@Eddie Davidson

You mean like the son has no idea what to do but someone else does?

No, more like the son didn't expect it to work and had no plan for what to do if it did. Maybe even now that it works, he regrets it.

ETA:

Son's friends buy him a book on hypnosis for his birthday.

The son is a skeptic, he reads the book but doesn't believe it will work.

He tries it on Mom on a lark expecting it to not work, and then he panics when he realizes that it did work.

Fanlon ๐Ÿšซ

@readinghypnosis

Hot tub love machine isn't too far away from what you are describing. Obviously not exactly what you had in mind, but there are a lot of similarities.

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