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NiS: a girl goes permanude out of conflict with Program

LupusDei 🚫
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Tl;dr:
Interrupted Program week + relocation --> permanude in Program free environment.

A derivative scenario in Naked in School universe that bothers me for a while. I don't feel competent to write it as stated here though. (I may or may not eventually arrive at a further derivative of this, but it's very low in the possible projects priority list, and that's under the unlikely assumption I write anything anywhere publishable ever at all.)

It starts rather cliche, we have one pov character, our typical for this: a grey mouse terminally shy and little reclusive bookworm girl with smallish tits who nevertheless is revealed to be pure ten beauty once stripped naked. Her parents had initially bought the bullshit about Program benefits and put her in the priority list, but she's not first week participant. Rather third or fourth week from Program introduction might work best, or respectively worst for this, as it is just about when I would expect the abusive aspects to peak. Early enough for novelty value of the whole thing still be fresh, but there's already enough familiarity with Program that put the initial guard down while everyone's still trying one-up-manship in just how far "reasonable requests" can possibly go, and similar.

Worse, it goes rather bad in her school overall from the get go, the public isn't nice to the participants and it seems the worst is enabled and encouraged by the management.

So, for your girl the first two days of it are just as traumatic as expected. She's probably not outright raped yet, but it seems coming. By Wednesday she's already in conflict, ruled guilty in avoiding some clearly unreasonable requests, probably by faculty no less, and informed she would have to repeat her week upon further infractions.

She is trying to adapt and probably still would become the typical slutified Program "success" especially as she has basically already resigned that she would be going naked for the second week anyway. She has examples that it does happen, and very graphgraphic examples of just how it ends up to be.

Her parents aren't blind and call bullshit on the whole thing. By Friday, she's brought over to a private school with strict uniform standards and no intention to even instate the NiS Program. She's chased down there by the regional (or whatever one-up) Program manager, accused of Program avoidance, scores her final infraction by arriving at the new school with clothes on, and while Program shouldn't have any power in that school, it ostensibly does over her while she's not finished with it yet, and the necessarily chaotic scene results in her being admitted to the new school... naked.

Come Monday she's introduced to her new class of uniformed peers nude, believing she's sentenced to remain so for no less than three weeks and possibly four, as she has to: finish her original interrupted naked week (no matter she only missed Friday and restarts on Monday), repeat that for scored infractions, and then yet another penalty week for attempted avoidance. Plus she's expected to score a new naked week in the new school with disregard to (or even because) it not participating in the Program, but that is allowed to be concurrent, given she dutifully checks her outreach goals.

This however is very different crowd, they could be rich entitled assholes by kind, but they at very least maintain facade of politeness, tolerance and acceptance, and they take the naked girl for what she is, a girl forced to go naked for whatever bullshit reasons. Their interest into detail of how it come to be may be superficial, but a naked girl is naturally fun to hang out with, and so she becomes an instant social starlet, rather inevitably.

She's adapting very well in the new environment, she's making fast friends and not being shy jumping participation into all kinds of ongoing projects and activities. Some possible future problems with the later she dismiss, thinking she will be allowed to dress before the drama club play takes stage or whatever similar. She has discovered freedom in her nudity, all the little perks like going through light warm rain without care and similar, thus her Program outreach goals score themselves, especially towards the end of her three weeks, as she provoke the new peers go skinny dipping and similar, and while she in practice has given up wearing clothes entirely, for now, she still believes.

As by now should be rather expected, come the Monday she try on the uniform of her new school for the first time, it turns out to also be last, as she is brought to principal's office and ordered to strip, for... uniform infraction. Respectively, it is explained to her that the school care nothing about the Program, they had come to her aid addressing her special needs and instated nudity as legal uniform standard and those are strict and she's bound by that: she's admitted as a nude student and will graduate as a nude student. Or, well, attending this school is a privilege and while they would be sad to see her go being all round A student and socially active (and a paying customer, I infer), that's what she have to do if she wants to wear clothes to school.

She calls her special Program manager, and get a confirmation, that's indeed the case, the school has no interaction with the Program at all. Further, thus the three weeks she's done aren't really counting, if she's changing schools again she will have to start that nude again, or still, but given how she's got nudity as her official school uniform, it's all good for now. The obvious choice is to remain naked and where she is.

This is a natural endpoint, but it would be fun if a plot hook or secondary conflict (that may or may not be a romance) would allow to explore what's basically a prolonged happy ending showing her final adjustment as a permanent nudist.

Maybe even picking up affiliate status with the Program derivative as Nude in Society participant allowing or even tasking her to be nude whenever technically possible, with or without goal to fight or fix the Program itself.

Maybe the news about nudity being legal uniform choice, even with the draconian all-or-nothing and permanent rules may incite one or more of her new classmates to make the jump too (no matter if out of pure thrill, in stated support to our heroine, or as a long standing wish come true).

Replies:   Eddie Davidson
Eddie Davidson 🚫
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@LupusDei

You seem more than capable to write this summary and craft all the twists and turns. All you need to do is fill in the details. I strongly encourage you to give it a shot. What is the worst that could happen? you write a fun story that inspires others to write?

If I were going to play with this idea, I am reminded of CaddyShack and CaddyShack 2. The pretty girl with the brazen but rich father is the MC. She is from New York/Jersey but has recently moved to a an upper class neighborhood in another state. She wants desperately to fit in with her snobby/rich friends.

She avoided the "Program" in her old high school, but she is no stranger to it. She's seen it many times. She thinks its humiliating but she isn't totally shocked by it. Her pervy little brother and his friends would probably love to tease her about it - but that's the worst of it from her perspective. She's willing to do her week just like everyone else has to do.

Rich Dad puts her in "Bushwood Academy". The program comes to the school and her new "Friend" (Miffy Young) tells her she just HAS to sign up for the program if she wants to join her social club.

However, the program at her school is only for discipline purposes, and it requires the normally wellbehaved MC to be naughty/rude to get in. Miffy sets her up to steal a test and be caught cheating. She claims that she wasn't sure being rude would be enough/was just trying to help the MC get accepted.

Miffy claims she completed the course the previous year, but she hasn't. She and her brother are just goofing on this girl.

MC wants desperately to fit in. The rich assholes (Miffy and her brother Todd) have intentionally tricked the MC. The program is required until the behavior improves and the MC is judged by a jury of school administrators and student government (which just happens to include Miffy and Todd)

The voting is done in private after a hearing. Miffy and Todd pretend "We were your advocates but ultimately we couldn't convince Dean Uchre to cut you some slack. Tough break"

Eventually, MC accepts she is just going to be permanude through her year at Bushwood.

One idea I would add here is that MC's Step Mom (looks a little like Dyan Cannon if you know who that is) is a sort of hot blonde milf. She is more than willing to do the program with her at home in solidarity and goes to her workouts/yoga classes naked. A total bimbo type/airhead who is very supportive of the MC - but only draws attention when the two of them go to the mall because she has huge fake tits.

Thoughts? Similar to your idea but skipping the program following her/prior school and just starting with the rich aholes. The program shouldn't be this all powerful/all encompassing illuminati singling her out. In this scenario you still accomplish the goals, but it is because the program is customized to each school and doesn't cast it as a villain.

Alternatively: Rich Dad's new wife is a total bitch. Her step-son is a total Rich-snob.

She INSISTS the daughter volunteer for the program at Bushwood only to establish that step-mom is top dog in the pecking order - because she is afraid the daughter has daddy eating out of her hands.

She intentionally signs the permanude for the year option. "It will do her some good and teach her a little humility - she isn't too big for her britches."

Replies:   LupusDei
LupusDei 🚫

@Eddie Davidson

You seem more than capable to write this summary and craft all the twists and turns. All you need to do is fill in the details.

Details is what frightens me. I can't reliably describe clothes or food without going on hours long word hunting expeditions, haven't ever visited an English speaking country, and my school experience differs significantly from the clische in the genre. Nothing of that is deadly, but as I said, it's currently very low priority on a buggy workflow.

Thoughts? Similar to your idea but skipping the program following her/prior school and just starting with the rich aholes.

Sure, I don't expect anyone to pick up the exact outline, that would likely be boring thing to do.

However, the algebraic I started this with was:

Interrupted Program week + relocation --> permanude in Program free environment.

Everything else is already frills.

Replies:   Eddie Davidson
Eddie Davidson 🚫

@LupusDei

I can assure you that your grammar/composition of English is good enough that I'd never know it wasn't your primary language.

I used to think that I could not write (and who knows, maybe I am wrong). I was my own worst critic. You won't know until you begin. Describe everything that the main character sees, feels, smells unless it is so boring that it doesn't matter. The more you practice the better you become.

I am really excited to read a NIS story like what you described. You could even try a short story format initially. I've found once I start writing I tend to just keep going because I fall in love with the characters.

I wrote one where the mother is so supportive of her kids that she shows up naked at school. It was based on TV show characters "The Goldbergs". I am not sure I did a very good job with it.

I broke with some of the rules like "Reasonable requests" and inserted my own set of rules. As an example, no boners (like at nudist resorts) - boys have to masturbate anytime they are walking around with a chubber. It is a disciplinary action of sorts. Obviously, it's fairly sadistic because hormonal teenagers would have a tough time not getting aroused around naked bodies.

I really like the idea. I won't promise to write it myself - but I could also volunteer to help you. You could send me what you have through the in-site email system and I could elaborate and help make suggestions.

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