Forum: Story Ideas

What about a Giant Ass instead?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pa46dQiIAuU

What about a Giant Ass instead?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dqBtWR9e8pg

Reminded me of an OLD movie. 60s? The Thirty Foot Bride of Candy Rock.

No sex, obviously.

Well if you want to talk movies about attack of the 50 ft. woman? :P

I wonder how many Big Mac's and fries she would eat? Drink Cola from a five gallon bucket? Kenworth truck for a Go Cart? Way too many problems for a readable story.

A lot would depend on exactly how big you make her (8', 12', 20').

If you don't make her ridiculously large I think you could get an interesting story by making her the mc and making the story about how she copes (or fails to cope as the case may be) with her size.

A lot would depend on exactly how big you make her (8', 12', 20').

And from blackjack2145309

question is whether or not you want to make the size change permanent. Personally i'm a bit of a fan of making the size change a temporary period,

The bucket, the mop and the cloister.

So you have a school girl equivalent of vomit. Unattractive, stepped around or over, but never stepped on, never bullied, just utterly ignored. A bucket.

You have a boy who is highly intelligent, a beacon of morality, yet so unassuming as to be invisible, even in class, where he excels. A mop.

Graduation day. The girl is called to the stage for a special award. The audience is stunned to learn that she has spent years reading to kids in the local cancer wards, to the elderly in care. The cheerleaders are stunned that it was her efforts that raised the money for their new uniforms, the list of selfless, unassuming acts goes on.

As she hurries away backstage afterwards she sees a group of Jocks bullying the boy because he is to give the Valedictorian speech. She hears the bullies putdowns, but it is his response that strikes a chord within her. From the ground where they threw him, he tells them it's important that he has a girlfriend, only that he treats all women with respect, that it matters not who he works for, but only what he works towards. His words resonate within her as she passes unnoticed back to her seat.

The awards are over, the Jocks basking loudly in their fans adulation, whilst at the podium stands the boy, tall and stick thin, waiting in vain for everyone to settle down and quiet for his speech. His resigned patience galvanises something deep within the girl. As her body slowly grows from bucket-like to blindingly beautiful, so grows her presence until amidst the audience stands a towering valkyrie, beautiful in her wrath. She leaps up onto the stage, stands behind the boy, her vengeful countenance more than enough to silence the auditorium whilst at her behest, the boy delivers his speech.

But all is not fair in love, war and Graduation.

The boy is filled with admiration for the girl's selflessness, but repulsed by the vengeful valkyrie, however beautiful. Whilst the girl has fallen for the altruistic boy, yet cannot help him be noticed without changing into the powerful presence of the beautiful valkyrie.

So why the bucket, mop and cloister?

A cloister is a covered walk, typically with a colonnade open to a quadrangle on one side. Duty uses the mop and bucket to clean the tiled walkway of the cloister, a duty made endless by those whose muddy feet tread the newly cleaned tiles. The boy could easily educate them to wipe their feet, if only they would listen to him. The girl could easily scare them away so they avoid the cloister. Either method would see the bucket and mop allowed to find peace in their cupboard of love. So do they continue their futile task, endlessly? Or can the girl find a way to tame her valkyrie and can the boy learn to accept that intimidating power and beauty can be the ultimate expression of compassion.

Just a thought.