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looking to build a series based on magically imbued rings.

Freyrs_stories ๐Ÿšซ

This is not Lord of the Rings. Or high fantasy. It's short to medium stories about people who come into contact with otherwise normal looking rings which start them on journeys into various kinks.

I've seen a few stories where an 'entity' bestows magic on average people and the results of that 'gift'.

So I have a name for the series "Circles of Cerridwen"
:(kEH rihd wehn)Pagan goddess of Transformation, Inspiration and Knowledge.

So I'm looking for some scenario ideas, mainly kinks etc to build a small library of stories under this trope. Things I'm already considering are:
Body swap
Incest
Body modification
BDSM
Exhibitionism
and Mind control.

hit me back with some ideas, though no promise on when they'll get written

Replies:   LupusDei  Mushroom  bk69  Remus2
LupusDei ๐Ÿšซ
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@Freyrs_stories

hit me back with some ideas, though no promise on when they'll get written



There's one strange magic effect on the borders of exhibitionism and mind control.

The ring wants her naked and makes it be normal. It make all people around the wearer want the wearer to be naked but regard it as completely normal, natural and unimportant if they indeed are, regardless of otherwise circumstances.

So, wearing this ring, there's no obvious effect at first. The wearer himself doesn't experience any strange urges. Then, it's either discovered accidentally by the user appearing naked where they shouldn't be or being walked in on, or it's subtle at first, but people around start to encourage her to strip in strange ways and places.

Then, once she discovered people seems to ignore her nudity, it's about experimenting with the limits, with are (almost, perhaps) infinite, then she discovered that people who have seen her walking around naked outright demand her to strip if she's clothed as if it was inappropriate or even obscene for her to wear clothes. Then she may discover she can project this effect on others, albeit in much limited ways, they should be in direct presence and there's may be other limitations.

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@LupusDei

A slight variation on LupusDei's suggestion.

The ring causes any clothing the woman puts on to slowly dissolve over a period of time (several hours?) unnoticed by the woman.

The ring protects her from cold/rain so as to keep her from noticing due to the weather.

Replies:   LupusDei  Crumbly Writer
LupusDei ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

That's not a small variation, it's rather complete turn around, but good in its own way.

In my suggestion, she known she's naked and may be even be very nervous about that, but others find it normal and encourage, or even insist she's dressed, and as appropriate as she possibly could, but it's just happen to be nudity.

In your suggestion, she's naked but don't notice, perhaps even try to claim herself she's dressed as appropriate as she could be, it's others who see nudity and may or may not tolerate her eccentric behavior.

The psychology is reversed. Don't mind I wouldn't love either of those.

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Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@LupusDei

In your suggestion, she's naked but don't notice, perhaps even try to claim herself she's dressed as appropriate as she could be, it's others who see nudity and may or may not tolerate her eccentric behavior.

No, mine she's naked and doesn't notice (unless and/or until someone else mentions it to her) but like with yours, others find her nakedness normal, though in mine they mostly see no reason to comment on it.

Crumbly Writer ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

A slight variation on LupusDei's suggestion.

The ring causes any clothing the woman puts on to slowly dissolve over a period of time (several hours?) unnoticed by the woman.

The ring protects her from cold/rain so as to keep her from noticing due to the weather.

I'm sorry, but most the the suggestions stretch credibility beyond any semblance of reality. Granted, outright porn has never been restrained by much common sense, but you want it to at least be somewhat plausible.

So, rather than 'magically' dissolving her clothes, or brainwashing anyone within twenty feet of her, maybe temper it a bit, but having it irritate her skin, so it's always itchy and she keep's rolling up her sleeves and struggling with her skin. It doesn't 'make' her naked, but it's like the old 'get her hot' medications, which just made the girl uncomfortable rather than actually stripping them of their conscious choices.

Quick porn jerk-offs are all about getting the people together in the shortest amount of time, but the better stories focus on motivation, and how the individuals are drawn together, even when they fight the impulses drawing them together. There aren't nearly as many of the second type, but they're immensely more satisfying than the former--though they require more of an investment of time than the 'one-off' stories.

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Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@Crumbly Writer

So, rather than 'magically' dissolving her clothes, or brainwashing anyone within twenty feet of her, maybe temper it a bit, but having it irritate her skin, so it's always itchy and she keep's rolling up her sleeves and struggling with her skin. It doesn't 'make' her naked, but it's like the old 'get her hot' medications, which just made the girl uncomfortable rather than actually stripping them of their conscious choices.

Hmm, maybe, though along those lines, rather than a physical irritation, more psychological.

Start with a mild anxiety that varies slightly with how much clothing the victim wearing/how much skin they are showing and slowly ramp it up over time until it develops in to a full blown clothing phobia.

richardshagrin ๐Ÿšซ

Sounds pretty normal for a Naked in School story.

Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

o I'm looking for some scenario ideas, mainly kinks etc to build a small library of stories under this trope. Things I'm already considering are:

Here's another idea. One that could be used to introduce everything on your list.

A ring of "free use".

A cursed magical ring that compels the wearer to obey any command from anyone. The victim is completely aware of what is happening.

The wearer can not remove the ring. If the wearer tries to cut off the hand the ring is on to escape, the hand will regrow with the ring back in place within 24 hours.

The only way for the curse to be broken is for the wearer to encounter someone with the strength of will/character to not take advantage of the wearer and for that person to command the wearer to remove the ring.

Mushroom ๐Ÿšซ

@Freyrs_stories

It's short to medium stories about people who come into contact with otherwise normal looking rings which start them on journeys into various kinks.

Incest
Body modification

Why do I now feel this sudden urge to write a story, which involves two siblings yelling out "Wonder Twin powers, Activate!"

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@Mushroom

Why do I now feel this sudden urge to write a story, which involves two siblings yelling out "Wonder Twin powers, Activate!"

Because even in a room full of nerds, you are still weird.

Replies:   Mushroom
Mushroom ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

Because even in a room full of nerds, you are still weird.

Hell, if I was not afraid that the reference was so old that few would get it, I also could have added in Chuck and Nancy from "Shazzan"

But I think would only know of that from the SNL version "Shazzang".

daisydesiree ๐Ÿšซ

While wearing the ring, she can tell from just looking at a man how big his erect dick is and so she decides who she wants to date based on that.

bk69 ๐Ÿšซ
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@Freyrs_stories

What are you looking for, suggested kinks?

Like, the B.O.B. (or Homer Vargas) ring, that guarantees any woman the wearer has sex with will be impregnated? (note: hilarious possibility if the wearer is female and strictly lesbian)

Or a ring that makes a wearer only experience anal sex (cocks always end up slipping into her ass, even if the intent was something else)

Or a bimboification ring (this was a thing in stories at one time - people, including occasionally men - were transformed into slutty, subservient, stupid and 'sexy' (for barbie-doll values of 'sexy') women)

A orgy-inducing ring that ramps up the sexual desire of all near the wearer (most amusing if the desire never targets the wearer, so the wearer could strip down and try to join the orgy but there'd be no takers)

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Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@bk69

A orgy-inducing ring that ramps up the sexual desire of all near the wearer (most amusing if the desire never targets the wearer, so the wearer could strip down and try to join the orgy but there'd be no takers)

Or it focuses their desire on the wearer so the wearer gets gang banged.

Replies:   bk69
bk69 ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son


Or it focuses their desire on the wearer so the wearer gets gang banged.

That would be expected, though, with a ring that makes everyone superhorny. I like to take the unexpected route sometimes.

FairWeatheredFriend ๐Ÿšซ
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What about a ring that lets the wearer clone/duplicate himself? I always thought a harem story could be done right if the mc could virtually split himself up into clones to get with all his girls at once for "sexy" time.

Could do a story like that to we're the clones aren't permanent and when they get recalled back to the main body he gets to "retain" all the knowledge and info that the clone experienced in the day it spent out of body, in essence making the MC op as fuck.

Replies:   bk69  daisydesiree  LupusDei
bk69 ๐Ÿšซ

@FairWeatheredFriend

Could do a story like that to we're the clones aren't permanent and when they get recalled back to the main body he gets to "retain" all the knowledge and info that the clone experienced in the day it spent out of body, in essence making the MC op as fuck.

That character was in a superhero story... I think he was a supporting character in the Omega Boy stories.

daisydesiree ๐Ÿšซ

@FairWeatheredFriend

What about a ring that lets the wearer clone/duplicate himself?

And there's a psychic link so she can feel herself having sex with five guys simultaneously.

Obviously the opposite for a guy, so he could possible feel oral, anal, and vaginal with three different girls at the same time.

LupusDei ๐Ÿšซ
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@FairWeatheredFriend

Could do a story like that to we're the clones aren't permanent and when they get recalled back to the main body he gets to "retain" all the knowledge and info that the clone experienced in the day it spent out of body, in essence making the MC op as fuck.



A way to do just that could be through very limited time travel. The ring grants ability to go back, say, up to 8 to 24 hours in the past.

Multiple copies are achieved throughout recursive jumps, limited by the cooldown time on the ring that's a significant part of the backsliding window, and can be even directly proportional to the last jump. So, say if you go back 18 hours, you can't go back in time for 12 hours.

Additional difficulty could be that copies merge if he meets himself (so no side-to-side fucking a row of girls).

Through experience and training the control of various variables may or may not increase, the precision of backwards jumping, the max time limit, the cooldown decrease.

A complete gamification of the experience could be if he have to consciously define return points before he can recall those, it's that function that has a cooldown (fixed and relatively short, say 1 to 3 hours), each return point can only be used once, and they expire in the set time, with could be slightly longer in this model, say 48 hours.

There could be additional limitations on the number of concurrent copies or some discouraging costs of overdoing it into infinity.

ETA: Obviously, this is likely kind of time travel that can only affect causal flows that are not yet part of your previous experience in the future, so known facts remain immutable, but may be open to interpretation. (But still can include paradoxical experiences where you learn about your own future actions in the past before deciding on a jump back.)

And yes, there's no fast track going back to future (other than self-merge, maybe), you simply live past the point you left earlier.

Ferrum1 ๐Ÿšซ
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That's a lot harder to think on than I was first imagining it would.

I prefer long stories that take time to develop things, and the idea of magical rings set in a short story doesn't seem to work.

Of course, you could do something like a take on https://storiesonline.net/s/23050/claras-mind-controlling where the heroine is unaware that her tweets are changing reality. Even when she sees posts on social media, she thinks they are deep fakes.

I could see the rings doing similar, people being changed and those around them just accepting the changes. Each ring features in a solo chapter as it were, where the bf or gf finds it and then we see how they react with their SO.

Short and sweet, and no real worries about how it would play out in the world at large since it's all taking place at home.

While the girlfriend finds the BDSM ring, it doesn't make her want to be a dominatrix. Instead, it makes her boyfriend want to dominate her, and she's wondering where this all came from and why she can't bring herself to really resist as he ties her to her bed. Or why her parents aren't barging in when they should obviously be able to hear her being spanked and screwed within an inch of her life. She knows something's up, but everyone around her is treating it like it's normal. Even her bestie looks at her like she's weird when she's telling her about it the next day at work.

"Yea, and?" Liz says, still not understanding why Sally was confused about being used as a fucktoy. "You do realize that's what you're supposed to be doing, right?"

"What on earth are you talking about, Liz?" Sally asks, getting weirded out by her best friend's casual acceptance of what her boyfriend did to her last night. "We've never done anything like that before, and I certainly wasn't planning on it last night! He must have drugged me or something, and my parents, too!"

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bk69 ๐Ÿšซ

@Ferrum1

I prefer long stories that take time to develop things, and the idea of magical rings set in a short story doesn't seem to work.

Basically, it helps if you realize the rings are essentially examples of a Mk 1 Plot Device.

The rings exist to give a plausible explanation for the current installment in the 'kink of the week gonzo sex story'.

Freyrs_stories ๐Ÿšซ

been reading these as they come up.

Still working on the common premise, I.E. the mechanic of how each person acquires their ring. Like is it at a flea market and the goddess wanders from market to market etc.

as they are rings of the goddess, and she is the goddess of Transformation, Inspiration and Knowledge, I'd love to use those as 'core' tropes of how each ring starts to work.

I want most of the main characters to be aged between high school and university but I'm not opposed to older characters, either as MC or supporting.

Remus2 ๐Ÿšซ
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@Freyrs_stories


"Circles of Cerridwen"

Pagan goddess of Transformation, Inspiration and Knowledge.



If the story is to be true to that, then some of the following will not logically apply.

Body swap

Incest

Body modification

BDSM

Exhibitionism

and Mind control.

The knowledge bit throws a wrench in the spokes. Transformation and inspiration can easily be applied to those scenerios, but filtering in knowledge? Not so easy.

A similar theme to "Master PC" could roughly fit, but then you'd be reshaping a wheel already ridden.

I think maybe leading off with knowledge would be a better premise, followed by inspiration then transformation. Gathered knowledge to learn, that inspires a transformation in the characters abilities and or mind/body. That leads to everything else being on the table as the character grows.

My .02

Replies:   bk69
bk69 ๐Ÿšซ

@Remus2

The ring gains the knowledge of the wearer's secret desire, and uses that as inspiration to transform itself (and those it influences) to provide for that desire. Makes sense.
Again, you're overthinking a plot device.

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Remus2 ๐Ÿšซ

@bk69

Again, you're overthinking a plot device.



It's nothing but spit balling without a lot of thought to it, thus the .02 at the end.

Ferrum1 ๐Ÿšซ

If you want the Goddess to distribute the rings, her factoring in to the story in a major way, you could always have her slip the ring somewhere the protagonist would find it, wherever that might be. One character might stumble and see something shiny in the grass beside the sidewalk. Another might see it when they're shopping at the flea market.

Instead of having the Goddess approach the human and talk with them, maybe make her more of the narrator talking to the audience.

Is this all semi-NC? Even feeding off someone's subconscious, it'd be hard to see how there'd be consent to have one's most perverted fantasy brought to life. Unless, of course, the Goddess explains that everyone around them will see it as perfectly normal and not worth mentioning.

That might be a good tease to get people to bite the bullet -- being able to live out your darkest fantasy without the negative ramifications that normally hold someone back, keeping the fantasy just fantasy.

Of course, it's only after they agree and are bound by The Contract that they realize the Goddess' interpretation of their fantasy isn't entirely accurate. And the Goddess has to explain that the fantasy wouldn't be what they imagine if everyone simply accepted it as part of normal life, so some things have to be changed. It's the taboo nature that made the fantasy so alluring in the first place, and that goes away the minute you make it commonplace and not worth even noticing.

I kinda like the idea of the protagonist not knowing what's going on. In the scenario I pointed out earlier, she's not even thinking about the cute little toe ring she picked up at the arts boutique. That allows for a slow burn as the story develops and we can to see the character eventually come to accept and enjoy the new facet to their lives even if they don't understand how it came about.

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