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I need a woman's opinion on this 10/1/2020

blackjack2145309 ๐Ÿšซ

Ok, let's say you go to a guys house to seduce him (let's say your boss ordered you to do it to get a client back that he screwed up with). At first he tries to talk you out of it. But in the end when you two arrive at the bedroom helga and inga (aka the swedish twins) and the woman finds out they are in a harem like relationship.

My question is how does the woman who originally came to seduce the man react to that?

Because the way I see it the woman who came to seduce the man could respond to it in any number of ways.

I'm also evolved enough to realize I'd like to hear a woman's opinion on the scenario i described.

Replies:   bk69  joyR
bk69 ๐Ÿšซ

@blackjack2145309

you go to a guys house to seduce him (let's say your boss ordered you to do it to get a client back that he screwed up with)

Ok, here's a problem.

You really need to isolate the exact reason for the attempted seduction. Here's why: being coerced into trying in order to keep a shitty job (working for a asshole who'll pimp out subordinates to keep his bonuses rolling in is by definition a shitty job) will make a big difference from running into one of the five most eligible bachelors in the world and getting an invite to his apartment. How highly motivated to successfully bed the guy is she gonna be? Is her motivation fear, ego, lust, greed, or twu wuv? What's her personality like? Maybe she sees herself as enough of a prostitute to not overreact to the surprise, and she'll just explain the nature of the transaction. Maybe she's really tired of men (especially her shithead boss and the fucktards he keeps whoring her out to) so the women appeal to her.
You need to really know the character. Then you'll know how she'd respond.

joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@blackjack2145309

I need a woman's opinion on this 10/1/2020

Maybe you should have used caps???

Whilst you might want a woman's opinion, it appears what you are going to get are the guys opinions...

Should be entertaining. :)

Replies:   blackjack2145309
blackjack2145309 ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

*Shrug* Perhaps you're correct joyR. Then again i can only speculate why bk69 keeps responding to my posts. I don't know if something about me irks him or if he responds to everyone's posts with the same amount of (blank)

All i want to do is get some female opinions/views on the scenario i describe not a "writer's workshop" analysis.

Replies:   joyR  bk69  Mushroom
joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@blackjack2145309

PM sent

:)

bk69 ๐Ÿšซ

@blackjack2145309

I responded mainly because I noticed your question wasn't specific enough to get the answer you were looking for, and was trying to help you in framing the question to do so.

Mushroom ๐Ÿšซ

@blackjack2145309

All i want to do is get some female opinions/views on the scenario i describe not a "writer's workshop" analysis.

But here is the thing that needs to be remembered. A lot of us are writers, as in we try to create situations where we can tell a story from any point of view. ANd I do not mean that in any way to be offensive, honest.

Myself, I guess I am lucky because I have taken some psychology classes, and spend hours or longer trying to "get into my character's head" before I write about them. And the first rule once I decide their personality is to not have them ever do anything they likely would not do on their own, if they were a real person and not just a figment of my imagination.

And unless the woman is already close to being lose and easy to boss around, I have a hard time imagining such a situation happening. Myself, the vast majority of my female characters are rather strong individuals, so would tell such a boss to go piss on a rope. Also, to me "seduction" implies that it is something an individual wants for their own desires, not because somebody told them to go do it.

Just giving my own 2 cents here. Myself, I tend to strongly avoid the "traditional harem" tropes when writing. Largely because I do not find them believable. I think 5 women trying to be with one guy about as likely as 5 guys trying to be with 1 woman. Works in porn, not in RL.

Replies:   blackjack2145309
blackjack2145309 ๐Ÿšซ

@Mushroom

But do you suppose if the woman's boss in this kind of situation if he were well known enough in a certain industry could say "who is he going to believe you or me?" If the woman threatens to take the conversation about his orders to her boss's boss?

Or does feminism permeate society that much the response goes back to "piss up a rope?"

Replies:   Dominions Son  Mushroom
Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@blackjack2145309

But do you suppose if the woman's boss in this kind of situation if he were well known enough in a certain industry could say "who is he going to believe you or me?" If the woman threatens to take the conversation about his orders to her boss's boss?

You are kind of assuming a large corporation and that the "boss" involved is middle management.

What if there is no boss's boss?

He is the CEO?

A closely held corporation and he is not only the CEO, but the larges of only a handful of stock holders?

A smaller business, and the "boss" is the sole owner?

Mushroom ๐Ÿšซ

@blackjack2145309

But do you suppose if the woman's boss in this kind of situation if he were well known enough in a certain industry could say "who is he going to believe you or me?" If the woman threatens to take the conversation about his orders to her boss's boss?

Or does feminism permeate society that much the response goes back to "piss up a rope?"

I do not give a damn how well known they are, it is simply inappropriate.

And "feminism" has not a god damned thing to do with it. It is all about respect. I make no secret that I hold a lot of "modern feminism" in disdain, an attitude I learned from my mother (who saw it as attempting to make eunichs of women). It is all about respect.

And that entire "believe you or me" nonsense went out the window a long time ago. Look no further than Bill Cosby or Harvey Weinstein to see that. Not wanting to see the clock turned back to when women felt intimidated does not make me some kind of "feminist supporter". I see it simply as respect for others.

I would hope that in reality, if somebody tried that, the gal would nail his ass to the wall.

Remus2 ๐Ÿšซ

Based on the OP, I'm not going to offer an opinion. I will state that there are parts of the world where people still do that kind of thing. Especially parts of Asia, so the OP premise has some minor validity.

Replies:   bk69
bk69 ๐Ÿšซ

@Remus2

Hell, Dan Snyder's operation was something like that, apparently. Not quite so explicitly (female employees were 'encouraged' to take advantage of their sex appeal in negotiations and such, rather than told to go fuck someone for the good of the team) but even there, there was a lot of turnover and settlements including gag orders.
And providing prostitutes to business associates has been a business tactic worldwide for years, but in most places it's considered better to outsource prostitutes than turn current employees into whores.

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ
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@bk69

And providing prostitutes to business associates has been a business tactic worldwide for years, but in most places it's considered better to outsource prostitutes than turn current employees into whores.

Yes, hiring prostitutes on the fly would be better than trying to turn employees hired to do other jobs into whores.

On the other hand, if your business does enough of that in a jurisdiction where prostitution is illegal, it may be more efficient and would certainly be safer, legally and medically, to have whores on the payroll.

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