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Eddie Davidson 🚫
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1. The President wants to close down Tik Tok. In retalation, they remove many of their censorship requirements and allow nude dancing, etc.

Tell the story of a Tik Tok star as she completes dares and challenges to get Tik Tok fame as an e-Girl.

2. Naked in School: Charli D. is a Tik Tok star. Her parents have no idea just how big of a star she is. She and her sister have also been chosen to be in the Naked in School program and that extends to social media appearances and their home.

3. Mind Control Tik Tok: The protagonist creates a hypnosis Tik Tok that embeds suggestive ideas into people who watch the video. His sister watches his video and thinks he is a dweeb. She laughs "This is a joke. It doesn't work"

"Take off your shirt, Addison" he says.

"What? That's crazy! How dare you tell me to do that!" she says as she takes off her shirt. "What? How did you make me do that?"

Mushroom 🚫

There is always a danger when trying to use "current" fads and trends in a story. And that is that it can quickly become dated and obsolete.

Imagine reading a story in here, and reading that the main characters mostly communicate on MySpace. Or even older, he talks to his girlfriend with ICQ.

Now that is fine, if you are wanting to set a period piece. But writing about something "current" (especially in technology) can leave it quickly looking old and silly.

And yes, I am even guilty of that myself, which is why I am aware of it. In around 1996 I started writing "Okinawa", and one of the big things in it is that I have the main character talk to his girlfriend with IRC. This now makes it a period piece, and set roughly in the timeframe it is written. But to anybody that picks it up now that is under 40, they might well have to look up some of the things I talk about. Because nobody reading it in 2020 can believe the story is written in contemporary times, because the technology is just to old.

Kinda like Star Lord being given a Zune, or somebody pulling out their "Windows Phone". Even Skype is largely gone, and that was huge a decade ago.

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son 🚫

@Mushroom

Even Skype is largely gone, and that was huge a decade ago.

Until this year, Skype still had a huge presence in corporate environments. It's only just this year beginning to be supplanted by Microsoft Teams.

Replies:   Eddie Davidson
Eddie Davidson 🚫
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@Dominions Son

I *LOVE* stories set in the early 2000s before cell phones were common for teenagers and when VHS was still a valid format. I see nothing wrong with a story set in a certain era. It should never have to be 'only current times' because those will change.

Shaved pussies for instance. It's hard to find bush on a pussy at all anymore in porn. But if you wrote a story set in the 1980s about a bald pussy people would think you shaved your cat.

There is a story called "Punky Girl" that takes me back to that time and I get to live it all over again. If anything I'd rather have stories set in the 1980s, 70s, etc so to me it would be very valuable as a time capsule to remember the Tik Tok fads and e-girls.

That being said, I think we are stuck with this shit for a while.

Replies:   Mushroom
Mushroom 🚫

@Eddie Davidson

There is a story called "Punky Girl" that takes me back to that time and I get to live it all over again. If anything I'd rather have stories set in the 1980s, 70s, etc so to me it would be very valuable as a time capsule to remember the Tik Tok fads and e-girls.

Actually, most stories like that are more "artifacts". Simply a relic of the era they were written than anything intended by the writer.

Myself, I generally make most of my stories "timeless", in that I avoid mentioning things like "modern technology". I also often will place in subtle clues where if caught indicate it is not "modern". One example, I specifically described a TV as having "knobs", and a few other things that would clue it in to being set in the 1970's. But nothing overt.

And having for over 2 years been writing a "period piece", it is a lot of work. I even lived through the period I am writing, and still find myself frequently looking things up, to make sure I do not throw in an anachronism. Like say buying Star Wars on videotape in 1981, when it was not released until 1982.

But here is the real thing, other than say clothing and some words, a story set in 1965, will be almost the same as one set in 1975 (but the cassette will be overtaking albums), and the same as 1985, although phones would have started to leave the wall and become "cordless". By 1995 though even cassette will be dead, being replaced by CD. TVs will have lost their knobs by the late 1980's, replaced by remotes and push-button number pads, and cable TV will be more the norm with 50 instead of 5 choices to view.

But for the most part, not much else really changed. Myself, I simply picked a time, place, and era where a "look" (Valley Girls) was unique and different from those before or after. But even reading through it, by half way through even that largely died (as did the real fad), and only the absence of cell phones would really place it as "not modern".

Replies:   Eddie Davidson
Eddie Davidson 🚫

@Mushroom

It's hard to be timeless, simply because the concept of a cellphone with a camera changes everything. 100 years from now all of this will seem quaint by comparison. At best, you can hope for a few decades where it could possibly be any of them. It certainly would work in the 1950s if it works in 2020.

That being said - I am still hoping someone does a TikTok story. Any takers?

Replies:   Mushroom
Mushroom 🚫

@Eddie Davidson

It's hard to be timeless, simply because the concept of a cellphone with a camera changes everything.

Not really, I do not find it hard at all. Not even "cell phones" are really new, they have been around for about 40 years. It is only in the last decade and a half that they have been affordable is all.

And a great many of us used to carry our cameras almost everywhere with us. I always had one in my car at all times. And with the advent of 110 and disk film, many of them got really small. Just look up the "Micro 110 Camera", the film canister was larger than the camera itself. I never went into the field without mine. And disk cameras were about the same size as a cell phone today.

Nothing in a "smart phone" is really new. Media device, book, camera, organizer, these go back decades or a century or more. The "smart phone" simply brings them all together into 1 device.

Heck, ask anybody around in the 1980's about the "Day Runner". In the mid 1980's, everybody who was anybody had one of these things. The biggest almost the size of a school notebook, the bigger they were the more important you were. This was like the newest iPhone if you were an upwardly mobile Yuppie back then.

And those technologies stuck around for decades. But the concept of a "cell phone and camera" is not really new. In the 1970's I had a portable radio with a camera I took skiing with me all the time. And in the 1980's I had a pocket TV with a radio.

Those only died because in 2012 analog TV was shut down, and the portable digital ones are all garbage. n As a technophile for over 40 years, I have seen things like this come and go, and none of it is ever really "new". Just another re-imagining of an older concept.

Replies:   Eddie Davidson
Eddie Davidson 🚫

@Mushroom

you seem to be getting away from the point, but they didn't have cameras that can snap HD pictures at a moments notice which was my point.

Sorry if that was unclear. If I had those as a kid we would have taken a lot of nasty/naughty pictures of us doing stupid stuff back then.

So it would be easier to set a blackmail story in modern times then in the 1980s where you had no autofocus and had to bring the camera on a strap, lol.

make sense?

Replies:   Mushroom
Mushroom 🚫
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@Eddie Davidson

you seem to be getting away from the point, but they didn't have cameras that can snap HD pictures at a moments notice which was my point.

Sorry if that was unclear. If I had those as a kid we would have taken a lot of nasty/naughty pictures of us doing stupid stuff back then.

"HD" is a concept that is recent, and only relates to digital photography, not film. Film could be very high detail, depending on what grain you use.

And never heard of a "Polaroid Camera"? Available since the 1940's, take a picture and it develops in front of your eyes without a lab needed.

Of course, I took photography in school and had my own darkroom, so was not a problem even then of taking nude high quality pictures of my girlfriend.

All these things you think are new are actually very old. Even "autofocus" has been around since the 1960's. And blackmail, please. There is almost nothing new now that did not exist 40 years ago. If you go back and look at some of the oldest stories here, I think you will find blackmail with Polaroid cameras. I can even think of one, "Lucky TIckets".

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son 🚫

@Mushroom

And blackmail, please. There is almost nothing new now that did not exist 40 years ago.

Blackmail has been around at least since the dawn of the Roman Empire.

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking 🚫

@Dominions Son

Blackmail has been around at least since the dawn of the Roman Empire.

And what did Dawn do to deserve being blackmailed? Or was she the blackmaileress?

AJ

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son 🚫
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@awnlee jawking

And what did Dawn do to deserve being blackmailed?

She was cheating on her husband (a Senator) with a gladiator. The gladiator was a Nubian.

Replies:   Mushroom  bk69  LupusDei
Mushroom 🚫

@Dominions Son

She was cheating on her husband (a Senator) with a gladiator. The gladiator was a Nubian.

Oh yes, the legend of Biggus Dickus.

bk69 🚫
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@Dominions Son

The gladiator was a Nubian.

Odd. Nubians were always said to be reluctant to eat 'er.

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son 🚫

@bk69

Odd. Nubians were always said to be reluctant to eat 'er.

See now, I'm disappointed. That comment of mine was a deliberate set up for a "black male" joke.

LupusDei 🚫

@Dominions Son

She was cheating on her husband (a Senator) with a gladiator. The gladiator was a Nubian.

Speaking of forgotten fads, being a man-whore was actually part of the job description for those guys, 'gladius' stands as much for penis as sword. Having her favorite champion on itself would hardly be incriminating for a senator's wife. Sure, there could be more to the story.

Replies:   Dominions Son  bk69
Dominions Son 🚫

@LupusDei

Having her favorite champion on itself would hardly be incriminating for a senator's wife.

There is a reason why I made the Gladiator a Nubian. Think about it for a while.

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking 🚫

@Dominions Son

Nubian - someone with a nub, ie clitoris. The gladiator was a gladiatrix!

AJ

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son 🚫

@awnlee jawking

Nubian - someone with a nub, ie clitoris.

No as in someone from Nubia.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nubia

Nubia (/ˈnuːbiə, ˈnjuː-/) is a region along the Nile river encompassing the area between the first cataract of the Nile (just south of Aswan in southern Egypt)[2][3] and the confluence of the blue and white Niles (south of Khartoum in central Sudan)[3] or, more strictly, Al Dabbah.[2][4]

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking 🚫

@Dominions Son

No as in someone from Nubia.

Ha! You blinked first. ;-)

AJ

bk69 🚫

@LupusDei

His setup was for something along the lines:
Black males tend far too much to have been unwilling to eat her to have any chance to be glad 'e ate 'er.

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son 🚫

@bk69

His setup was for something along the lines:

Nope. Feel free to try again.

Mushroom 🚫
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Wendy ran upstairs and quickly returned with a camera. It was one of those Polaroid instant cameras. "Cool!" I said.

Wendy turned to Kristen and said, "Remove your blouse and bra. I want you topless."

Kristen seemed to have expected this. She silently unbuttoned her blouse and dropped it to the floor. She reached behind her and unclasped her bra, and that quickly dropped to the floor also.

I didn't get a very good look at Kristen's assets, since she had crossed her arms over her shoulders.

Wendy said, "Arms down. I wanna take a picture."

Kristen didn't move. I remembered telling Kristen that each girl could give her "an order" and she had taken that to mean a single order, so she wasn't allowing Wendy to get anything extra.

Of course, I had no such limitation on the number of orders that I could give, and it wouldn't do for Kristen to win at this game, so I interceded. "Drop your hands and pose for Wendy's camera. And SMILE!"

Clip from "Lucky Tickets", Chapter 7, from JiMC, circa 2003.

https://storiesonline.net/s/37587/lucky-tickets

As I said, almost nothing you are thinking of is new. This story could have been set in 2003, or 1953. BTW, did you even know that there was an active "Electronic Story" community going on even before the Internet? "Electronic Erotica" dates back to at least the 1980's.

Replies:   bk69
bk69 🚫

@Mushroom

BTW, did you even know that there was an active "Electronic Story" community going on even before the Internet?

Define 'internet'.

USENET and IRC predated the web, or at least widespread access to it.
And there were likely story archives with some of the old bulletin board sites...

Replies:   Mushroom
Mushroom 🚫

@bk69

USENET and IRC predated the web, or at least widespread access to it.

Common access to home users, not affiliated with an organization that used it for work purposes.

Roughly around 1994, when the first ISPs were becoming common. But to be more specific, really after 1995, when the NSFNET was finally disbanded, and it finally fully opened up for commercial use.

Replies:   bk69
bk69 🚫

@Mushroom

alt.sex.stories existed in the 80s, I think. I first encountered it in '92, though. And the text repository existed then.

Replies:   Mushroom
Mushroom 🚫

@bk69

alt.sex.stories existed in the 80s, I think. I first encountered it in '92, though. And the text repository existed then.

Oh, I know it did. But at that time unless you worked for the government, a university or a company that did government (mostly military) projects access was rare.

Most of us online back then either accessed a BBS, or a commercial service like Prodigy, AOL-Quantum, CompuServe, The Source, or something similar. We knew about "ARPANet", and it was like this mythical place that few of us could get access to. So we made do with our own version of USENET called FIDONet.

But we had FIDONet groups similar to Alt.Sex.Stories, and of course just text files that we would pass from one BBS to another. Rusty & Eddie's tags can still be found occasionally in very old text files from that era.

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It was not until 1994 that an ISP finally opened in my area and I could access it. $25 a month, a whopping 14.4k.

palamedes 🚫

Even before porn was available by computers stuff was being sent around by FAX machine.

Eddie Davidson 🚫

What about a Clitoan?

richardshagrin 🚫
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Aren't Newbies from Nubia? (Maybe I should spell that Nubies.)

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son 🚫

@richardshagrin

Aren't Newbies from Nubia? (Maybe I should spell that Nubies.)

Newbies are called larva. They live in hives.

Replies:   richardshagrin  bk69
richardshagrin 🚫

@Dominions Son

Newbies are called larva. They live in hives.

"Did you mean: Newbies are called larvae. They live in hives." (What I got when I googled your post.)

bk69 🚫

@Dominions Son

Actually that's new bees you're thinking of.

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son 🚫

@bk69

Actually that's new bees you're thinking of.

The grinning dick is fond of puns. He should have gotten it without having to use Google.

richardshagrin 🚫

The Forum liked my post so much it posted it twice. There may be a way to delete the second one, but it appears I don't know how to do it.

And I think Google assumed newbies were new bees.

Mushroom 🚫

on one of them click the trashbasket icon/

richardshagrin 🚫

Thank you. The trash basket icon got rid of the second (unneeded) post. I guess you learn something new every day.

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