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Correction Center for Errant Wives

Eddie Davidson ๐Ÿšซ

I'd like more stories about this concept.

Either, voluntarily because of a BDSM lifestyle, or because of a Stepford wife kind of law/mandate by the government.

Not just focused on the correction center - but what happens when they come home to the family after completing a 6 week cycle of re-education.

hiltonls16 ๐Ÿšซ

@Eddie Davidson

Have you seen Ted Biker's Devastation Diaries series?

Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

Not wives, but you might enjoy The Vassal Academy by SavannahMann

https://storiesonline.net/s/56347/the-vassal-academy
https://storiesonline.net/a/SavannahMann

Eddie Davidson ๐Ÿšซ

scanning these now. They sound like they are right up my alley.

I am mostly interested in once the correction is complete - how does the wife return to behave around her husband, kids, mother in law, and so on.

blackjack2145309 ๐Ÿšซ

@Eddie Davidson

I think the "before" on the stepford wife kind of law/mandate by the government idea needs to be added in as well.

It's because in a story like that, knowing the background of the "errant wife" and how she came to the correction center lures the reader into reading more as long as you write the right synopsis to the story. It's like that rule of thumb of authors "every story needs a hero to love." The same is also true i think "every story needs a villain to hate."

On that basis, the pleasure in reading a bdsm story like this mostly comes from the errant wife (aka villain) being broken down in various ways and turned into a "stepford wife" or eager to please submissive.

Replies:   Eddie Davidson
Eddie Davidson ๐Ÿšซ

@blackjack2145309

exactly.

If this is a story where the law is new and the wife was normal.

Or simply that the husband was far too lax, and let his wife have certain dignities and priveledges, and now that his family is visiting he can't permit that.

Or maybe she is just rebellious and remembers a time when women weren't expected to behave.

blackjack2145309 ๐Ÿšซ

I just wanted to bring up a story I recently read.
https://storiesonline.net/s/11943/new-order-of-the-ages

Because i think it fits with the theme of the discussion here.

I mean it's not exactly an errant wife story but it does have elements that are worth considering for a story like this.

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