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Lori Loughlin Sentenced

Ferrum1 ๐Ÿšซ

Surely I'm not the only one who's imagined this could make for a wonderful adventure tale as the Hollywood Starlet tries to navigate her way through the prison system.

Maybe her paperwork gets shuffled wrong and she winds up in a real prison rather than Club Fed. Maybe her natural D/s streak is really brought to the forefront, feeding off her fantasies brought to life, while she waits for the paperwork to be fixed so she can get to that white-collar "prison" she was promised.

Lots of ways to go with it, I think, and keep it consensual since it's a real person we're talking about.

Or, just make up a character that seems a lot like her in many ways.....

blackjack2145309 ๐Ÿšซ

I agree there are lots of ways to go with something like this. Though the trick is to come up with something that's a unique twist.

Replies:   Ferrum1
Ferrum1 ๐Ÿšซ

@blackjack2145309

It's that "unique" part that's always the problem. Prison stories are a dime a dozen and the only really interesting part that I see is that we're talking about a real Hollywood star who happens to be quite the hottie.

Some say that it'd be wrong to write a non-con scene because it is a real person. But others say that it would be okay since non-con is actually quite a real thing in prisons around the world. I can see it being rather squick for some, and admit it is a touchy subject.

Half the fun, imo, would be the wake-up call it'd certainly give her. She has to survive amidst the peons, women who would love nothing more than to own her in a dozen ways. Maybe the guards are complicit since they're pissed about her elitist/entitled ways.

Maybe the key to it would be relay everything through her private memoirs or diary as she's trying to talk with her therapist, working out all the things that happened to her.

One of the ideas I had was to focus on the way the court of public opinion swayed what happened in the legal court. She could have gotten off with a fine and public service, but the media was in full swing. Even when she was accidentally shipped to the wrong prison, it was the media that made it impossible for her to be transferred because they were running constant hit pieces on her, the judge, the prosecutor and everyone else. Imagine headlines like "Oooh, little Miss Hollywood gets special treatment!" or, "The Rich get Club Fed, You get Club Dread."

Even in the age of the 24hr news cycle, the stories just don't seem to stop as everyone's fixated on her for some reason. With all the pressure from the media and protesters on the street, there's no way the judge can be seen playing favorites, so she decides to leave the mistake as is. Lori stays in the "standard" prison with all the low-lifes and learns some hard lessons.

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@Ferrum1

It's that "unique" part that's always the problem.

Some say that it'd be wrong to write a non-con scene because it is a real person.

The problem is that writing a story like that about a real person is that unless you are writing an authorized biography it's a lawsuit waiting to happen.

Replies:   Eddie Davidson
Eddie Davidson ๐Ÿšซ
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@Dominions Son

I don't know what the legalities are but when you are writing a fan fiction about celebrities its probably not that big of a deal. Public commons.

There are thousands of fan fictions stories about Brittany Spears getting tied up, or Emma Watson being magically hypnotized to do whatever Harry tells her. Etc.

I am no lawyer though - but given the celebrity status, a clear "This is a work of fiction" would be a proper disclaimer.

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@Eddie Davidson

I don't know what the legalities are but when you are writing a fan fiction about celebrities its probably not that big of a deal. Public commons.

Fan fiction about the characters they play is one thing. Stories about the celebrity themselves are a different matter.

Obscurity is what protects most of the authors.

The actual legalities are almost irrelevant. Under US law anyone can file suit over almost anything.

If the celebrity finds out about the story and decides to sue (they generally have money to pay lawyers), one of two things will happen.

1. The author fails to respond and the celebrity gets a default judgement in their favor which they can use to force any site hosting the story to take it down.

2. The author spends a lot of time and money fighting the law suit. Even if the judge can be convinced the suit is frivolous and dismisses it early, it will still cost the author money. The process is the punishment.

Jason Samson ๐Ÿšซ

She discovers that a whole cast of celebrities are in the same prison at the same time, for a variety of misdemeanors.

And although it is never spelled out, observant readers will realize that these characters, in this situation, naturally somehow start to play out a classic film plot, eg Al Pacino really is The Godfather or Clint Eastwood is acting like he did in jail in heartbreak ridge.

Anyway, it turns out the prison governor who is incompetent actually paid to get into college etc and things descend into farce and the inmates running the asylum and nobody wanting to leave?

Banadin ๐Ÿšซ

Be careful about Defamation.

Ferrum1 ๐Ÿšซ

Not being a writer, I'm free to think about the story. There's zero chance that I'd ever publish anything I've pondered on simply because writing a decent tale is well beyond my abilities. :D

From an ethics standpoint, I don't really have a problem with it. Bad things happen in prisons. We all know it. Somehow it's okay to write about a fictional "person" having something bad done to them, but not a real person who just got sentenced? I understand how it can be seen as hitting a little close to home, I guess, but it's still a weird dichotomy.

With all the prison stories out there, I really don't see a way to make this idea unique or original. The one thing that sets it apart from the rest is the one thing that everyone shies away from. If that element isn't used, there's no story unless you write something that's PG13.

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@Ferrum1

Somehow it's okay to write about a fictional "person" having something bad done to them, but not a real person who just got sentenced?

It's not about it being morally wrong to write about a real person that way.

It's about writing that way about a famous person with a public reputation to protect and money to pay lawyers. A person who might just get miffed over being written about that way.

I'm not saying someone should or shouldn't do it, but if you are going to do it, you should understand that there are risks in writing fictional stories about real living people and what those risks are.

Replies:   Ferrum1
Ferrum1 ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

Good point. I hadn't considered that angle.

ystokes ๐Ÿšซ

Once you are a public person different rules apply otherwise comics wouldn't have much to talk about. As for being used in a fictional story as long as you don't claim anything as fact there's not a damn thing they can do.

Cold Creek portrayed real people in a bad light. rifj tricked Bush into being in the Twin Towers on 9-11 and killed him off.

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@ystokes

. As for being used in a fictional story as long as you don't claim anything as fact there's not a damn thing they can do.

They can sue. They won't win, but getting it dismissed will cost the author a lot of time and money.

As they say, the process is the punishment.

Replies:   ystokes
ystokes ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

They can sue. They won't win, but getting it dismissed will cost the author a lot of time and money.

If deemed a frivolous lawsuit the person who brought it may have to pay all court and attorney fees. That could be why Trump always threatens to sue for libel yet rarely does.

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ
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@ystokes

If deemed a frivolous lawsuit the person who brought it may have to pay all court and attorney fees.

No, the US does not have loser pays. Barring extraordinary circumstances all parties pay their own costs.

ETA: It is possible to get awards of costs and attorney fees in the US, but it is NOT routine, even in cases dismissed as frivolous.

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