Orc Elf Erotic. The Orcish horde conquers the Elven kingdom.....but the Elf Princess finds herself attracted to the Orcish war chief and becomes his mistress. Maybe there are other plot thread about the orcs conquering the city, elves resisting or maybe ALL the elven women fall to perversion.
It's a potentially cool idea.
Have you ever seen pictures of how elves and orcs are generally perceived? The elf princess would have to have a serious mental defect to be attracted to an orc :D
By force would be more likely.
The elf princess would have to have a serious mental defect to be attracted to an orc :D
First thing that made me think of was Shrek. ;D
The elf princess would have to have a serious mental defect to be attracted to an orc
Not to mention being blind and forced, even that might not be enough...
Tweaking the stereotypical orc image enough to make the relationship possible is, I would suggest, going to be too much for many readers to accept.
I'm aware. But who cares. Why not try something new?
Sure, but there's a limit to what the average reader can accept as the thinnest sliver of plausibility.
thinnest sliver of plausibility
That was immediately bypassed on mention of orcs and elves. It is the realm of pure fantasy as a result.
That clarified, I take your point. Mentally, it would invoke images western societies would find disturbing in the majority. While some readers with closet masochistic and or sadist tendencies would like it, the majority would not.
As a point of pure fantasy, anything is possible. However, the author should be aware such a story would have limited appeal.
My .02
That was immediately bypassed on mention of orcs and elves. It is the realm of pure fantasy as a result.
That clarified, I take your point. Mentally, it would invoke images western societies would find disturbing in the majority. While some readers with closet masochistic and or sadist tendencies would like it, the majority would not.
As a point of pure fantasy, anything is possible. However, the author should be aware such a story would have limited appeal.
My .02
I totally agree. I was trying to point out that "limited appeal" would probably be "VERY limited appeal".
IIRC, "Arcanum: of Steamworks and Magick Obscura" by Dragon Cobolt is about a half-orc who, along his journey, conjoins with females of other species and I'm pretty sure there's an elf or two in there somewhere.
AJ
I don't think this is the way to do it. The orc in your tale is unremarkable from other orcs. The elf stands out by wanting to be raped and conquered unlike other elves. The disbelief comes from the orc side of things methinks.
Change the orc? He still needs to be a warring chieftain who propagates his species in another species' females. The kink is overwhelming the girl so he can be a cunning foe but in addendum to strength. I really don't know how to make this work with an elfqueen throwing herself prostrate to the rapist. Breaking her maybe, melting defiance is always fun, but you said she's attracted to the monster and becomes his mistress. Mistress's a few levels up from war trophy.
No, this is outside of my bailiwick. If I did orcs and elves, I'd go backwards. The orcs are getting genocided by the sick of being raped elves. The last surviving orc clan is lead by a grand chieftain and his pack of powerful sons and one runt. The strong live to fight, the runt runs to live. The daughter of the queen, against better judgment, gives chase. Something gives runt the upper hand. He's the last, with one slave, one chip that he uses with all of the cunning he needed to survive his brutish brothers hazing to take the queen herself, until to save her species she joins the runt and enslaves her entire people. Making her do it for joy by the end of the book would be more fun than submission for duty.
In conclusion, your idea, as is, is unbelievable and bland. I'd recommend killing the final boss and new game plusing another attempt at life.
Give it a try yourself. Fan fiction is a starting point for many, as the universe and personalities are already developed.
here's your starting point:
Elf princess (lives in a trailer park elf reservation like other defeated nations within the USA. Likes junk food and Elvis).
Orcish war leader (Foreign prince in exile from Uzbekistan. Likes death metal and helicopter gunships).
Eons long racial hatred. (No need for ovens, just eat them alive.)
Thrown together in another dimension to battle true evil.
https://www.baen.com/tanya
