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tangoperu ๐Ÿšซ
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There is this boy in his late teens who is still a virgin, who discovers that his whole family, father, daughter, brother, sister, cousins, family friends, neighbors, etc. are into the incest/swinging lifestyle and have been in it for years. Even his bratty little brother enjoys it, but somehow they decided that he should be left out.

His family say that they love him, but he won't be allowed to participate.

The story explores the feeling of betrayal, the angst and how will he cope with all of it.

Is there anything like this already posted?

LupusDei ๐Ÿšซ
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What comes to mind is Melissa's Secrets by Pookie, she discovers she's been (briefly) in somewhat similar situation when her involvement is being kick-started. Then, she's youngest, and is being involved... but it is left open to interpretation how deep or slow her involvement might have been wasn't she stumbled upon lot more than was likely intended to reveal, at least yet. And I said too much already.

Note: that story isn't finished (hopefully yet, there's long periods between posts). Also, it requires "full access" to be turned on to find it. Yes, there's that, but not as the main theme.

Radagast ๐Ÿšซ

If you are interested in stories that explore the angst of family betrayal, then both stories by Hawkrider may suit you. If you are looking for some form of incestuous cuckolding as erotica then probably not.

https://storiesonline.net/s/17801/truths-and-betrayals-of-a
Kid is in an accident, father dies ,he finds his mom was cheating and is still seeing the guy, then his girlfriend cheats while he is recovering, etc.

Not my cup of tea, the MC makes me think of Harry Potter getting everyone around him killed while screaming 'Its not my fault'. I prefer characters who can take ownership of their emotional state. But if its the emotional state caused by betrayal that sparks your interest, these may be worth reading.

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@tangoperu

Everyone but the protagonist is the starting premise of Delaware Dan's 'Spring Break' stories.

AJ

Vincent Berg ๐Ÿšซ

Just added it to my 'future stories' list, but it's not my typical story and, even if I write it, it's unlikely I'd post it. :( Still, the potential twists and complications are inviting.

Replies:   leviathan8382
leviathan8382 ๐Ÿšซ

@Vincent Berg

Just wondering if you ever wrote the story?

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Vincent Berg ๐Ÿšซ

@leviathan8382

Sorry, but I wasn't referring to stories I might have written, rather to my stories-to-read preferences. Since I prefer 'forbidden love stories', featuring two star struck loners banding together, I'm not into group sex scenes. It's not that I object to those stories, but it's just not the motif I prefer to write in.

Eddie Davidson ๐Ÿšซ
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@tangoperu

maybe he has bad personal hygeine, small penis and is also considered very immature by the others and so they have not invited him and part of the story is his sneaking around trying to watch through the windows?

There is a good episode of Always Sunny in Philadelphia where Mac is upset that he wasn't touched by the local priest, because he feels he was much hotter than the other guys that were.

Replies:   leviathan8382
leviathan8382 ๐Ÿšซ

@Eddie Davidson

I think it would work better if the MC was a loner compared to the rest of the family rather than it being bad hygiene. Also, how would the family know he has a small Rick. If it's the loner thing then there is a chance for the character to join the family in the future if that's where the story goes.

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LupusDei ๐Ÿšซ

@leviathan8382

I like the loner angle too. And the voyeur ange, a lot, of course (being one myself).

He might be perceived as, well, different. Maybe a tad bit on asperger spectrum, meaning emotional intelligence doesn't come naturally for him, and he may react to touch differently than most.

For example in my teens, touching my ribs by a female hand was so sexually overloading I reacted with what most perceived as aversion. The easily out was claiming I'm ticklish. Also, highly functional sociopaths or light aspergers can appear inconsistent in social skills for normatives, freakingly wise one moment and hopelessly dumb another. Because, well, we do actually have to consciously analyze everything, lacking some functionality seemingly assumed to be inbuilt. It may lead to trust issues, the reactions and conclusions being different from expect, we are accused of lying when we're not, until we learn to tell expected lies.

So it may not be like he wasn't groomed at all at whatever age the family considered appropriate, it just went nowhere. Alternatively/additionally he might have been extra busy around the same time, with sports or other extracurricular out of house activities that put him in contact enough of strangers the family could see risk of doing any too rash, too obvious moves in fear of him talking aside, intentionally or not.

Then, it quite stuck at that. He started spying and voyeur, discovered what's happening. Meanwhile the family knew he's spying, but decided he's actually content with that and that's his role in the game now. They assume he knows they know and would come out and join if he felt the need. He may know they know, but still don't invite him, making him only more insulted, but may invent rationalizations like erroneously assuming he's still too young to be included. Then, those may be broken when, say, he sees other kids his age or own younger sister or brother included.

Each new level of the I know you know I know you know I know (ad infinitum) is exciting for the exhibitionist/voyeur game but is entrenching the roles and can be easily poisoned by miss-assumptions.

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leviathan8382 ๐Ÿšซ

@LupusDei

The being busy with sports or something aspect would really work cause that would give the family time when he's not home to have their incestuous orgies. Then if a practice or something gets cancelled he could come home and being the introvert that he is doesn't announce his presence or just comes in really quietly and stumbles upon his father, mother, brothers, sisters, aunt, uncle and cousins all having sex. After that he starts to pay more attention to his family and skips his practices to come home early and watch. Maybe he gets turned on by it and does it for the thrill or maybe it fuels his anger and every time he watches he get more angry until he bursts.

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@leviathan8382

Of course, the boy might be a trans boy, in which case participating could be problematical.

AJ

madnige ๐Ÿšซ

@tangoperu

ISTR that Gina Marie Wylie's Tom's Diary has this as a minor plot point; parents, sister, her friends, their friends...

AmigaClone ๐Ÿšซ

@tangoperu

Swinging Surprise has a recent college graduate come home and discover his parents and sister are incestuous swingers - along with some neighbors.

tangoperu ๐Ÿšซ

@tangoperu

Just wanted to tell everybody that, since I didn't find what I wanted, I started to write this story.

https://storiesonline.net/a/tangoperu

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