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Slow collapse of civilization

Keet ๐Ÿšซ

In a recent forum post Grant suggested a new scenario for the collapse of civilization by the loss of the GPS system. Thinking of possible other new scenario's made me think of one that is currently very real and without a doubt will cause real world wide problems in the near future (next 100 years): pollution and climate change.
I'm not a tree hugger or green activist but I do realize that world pollution has become such a big problem that it's possibly already at the point where it can't be reversed without a certain level of collapse of the current civilization. This could be a scenario for stories that I haven't read before.
Some points I thought about:
It's a slow process. Not like the fast processes like a virus, meteorite strike, or EMP disaster.
Different sources disagree on the current number of deaths per year caused by pollution. The numbers vary between 6-9 million per year and 1 in every 6 deaths. Imagine what what the numbers will do when pollution keeps increasing the way it does and climate change causes more and more disasters. It's certain to cause huge problems.
Big business is increasing it's power base every year (Google, Amazon, etc.) and increasingly influences politics. They have a two-sided interest: the cost of clean production or cleaning up is just that, a cost. No real motive to spend money on it. On the other hand it kills people, the very source of their profits.
Since it's a long term process a lot of people, and specifically businesses, have a way of thinking like "I'm not around anymore when it gets too bad". Politics could do what needs to be done but since it will definitely harm business they don't act like they should do, "think about the elections!".

I imagine a story where we are ~50 years in the future and it has gone really bad. Maybe there's a big business that now sells clean air and clean water because it has to be processed before it's even breathable or drinkable. A large part of the population has already died, will soon die, is too ill too do anything, or too poor to buy clean air and water. Birth rates have dropped dramatically and many are born with defects. Climate change causes regular, huge natural disasters.

There will be a point where it all collapses. I can see different possibilities for good stories using this scenario. Collapse into chaos, slow decimation of the population without real chaos, or war because some countries keep polluting while others started huge efforts to clean up. There's also possibilities for stories that tell about the rebuilding with ~20% of the current population left, unlike most PA stories where very few are left to rebuild.

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

I wrote a story (unfinished and unpublished) in which solar flares sent our communications satellites out of kilter and they flooded the planet with radiation that made all males sterile (even unborn babies).

Although there was some rioting and looting, and every country enforced martial law, my scenario had people mostly believing the authorities' claims that they were working on the problem and were close to a solution to reverse the damage. Most people continuing to lead relatively normal lives, apart progressively from maternity staff then kindergarten teachers etc.

That was a relatively slow apocalypse.

AJ

Replies:   Keet
Keet ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

Any plans to finish and post it? ;)

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@Keet

Not currently.

The slow apocalypse was just the background setting - I've PMed you with the actual storyline.

AJ

Keet ๐Ÿšซ

Today there is a news article about the huge water shortage in Chennai in India. It's a sad fact that even if half a billion people died because of lack of water in India it will have little effect on the world civilization but if the same would occur somewhere else or at multiple places at the same time it could create huge problems. Problems that cause another step towards a declining civilization. That is one of the reasons that could be used in a story about a slow collapse of civilization.
I wonder why there are not more stories using the concept of a slow collapse. If the story started towards the end of the collapse you would have almost the same situation as with a world wide disaster but with better preservation of the few resources left for far fewer people. Maybe with a description in the first few chapter how the collapse started without anyone noticing and how it grew. Ultimate survival of the fittest? Not by fighting but because of having the best, most healthy physical body?

Replies:   awnlee jawking  Not_a_ID
awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@Keet

There could be a slow collapse in the UK. Overpopulation, particularly in the Londonistan area, means that our unique chalk stream ecosystems are being wiped out through overextraction. And unless we can manage Brexit, a further two million migrants are expected to arrive in the area in the next decade or two.

Because solutions are expensive (desalination plants, a national grid of water) and the worst problems are more than the five years away, the short-termist governments keep kicking the issue into the long grass for their successors to deal with.

AJ

Replies:   Keet
Keet ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

Exactly. Because I feel that it's actually happening (and not only in the UK) it's a very interesting subject for new stories.

Replies:   StarFleet Carl
StarFleet Carl ๐Ÿšซ

@Keet

Because I feel that it's actually happening (and not only in the UK) it's a very interesting subject for new stories.

One of the problems, or issues anyway, that I see with a slow collapse is that a lot of the causes for slow collapse end up reaching a tipping point, whereupon suddenly that slow collapse becomes a quick collapse.

If you study the history of pre-Castro Cuba, you'll see the signs were there that there was a slow collapse going on. Then suddenly things hit a tipping point, and you had a revolution. These things happen in countries and nations all too often. It's happened in France, it's happened in Germany, it's happened in Iran - the problem is that there typically ends up being a war or an internal civil war as a result of the slow collapse.

The problem with writing a slow collapse story about things happening today is that if you see what seem to be the causes of slow collapse, a lot of what you'll say is met with disbelief. And for that matter, some of the causes of slow collapse are self-inflicted. Here's just a few that I see going on right now.

1: India - overpopulation
2: China - ditto
3: Western United States - general stupidity in elected officials. (Hey, let's quit logging and stop clearing forest areas, so underbrush can grow up, then build houses in the middle of those areas, then complain because forest fires are worse due to high underbrush growth.)
4: Europe in general - Are you not paying attention to the Muslim invasion? Your regular ethnic population is not replacing itself, while they're moving in, popping out lots of kids, and taking over from within. There's a reason why AJ called in Londonistan.
5: Liberal parts of the U.S. - same as #4. Dearbornistan in Michigan, Minneapolistan in Minnesota.
6: Venezuela - Just look them up.

We're supposed to be having an energy crisis, and at the same time, a water crisis in a lot of the world. Fine - here's a solution. Build a nuclear reactor far enough back so it doesn't get hit by a tsunami, and then use that to power desalinization plants.

I could go on, but that's the problems with slow collapses. It's like playing a big game of Jenga. You can pull out one block, oh, no issues. Pull out another one, no problem. You pull out too many, and the whole damn thing quickly collapses.

I'm reminded of the Honor Harrington novels, with the situation in the People Republic of Haven.

Replies:   Keet  Not_a_ID  Not_a_ID
Keet ๐Ÿšซ
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@StarFleet Carl

One of the problems, or issues anyway, that I see with a slow collapse is that a lot of the causes for slow collapse end up reaching a tipping point, whereupon suddenly that slow collapse becomes a quick collapse.

I agree, but we're talking about concepts for fictional stories. There's a few things that occur world wide and and don't cause a sudden collapse. The biggest one I mentioned before is the general pollution of air and water. There's no solution for that until the whole world cooperates to solve it. Ain't gonna happen because the biggest polluters are generally also the poorest.
Pollution slowly creeps upon the world and is killing the environment. The result (in the long run) is a decimation of the world population simply because people die in an unlivable environment, infertility, and non-productivity because of illness.
But even a fast collapse born out of a slow collapse is a different scenario than the existing PA stories. It supports many problem areas different from a classical PA.
And there's possibilities for stories that try to stop a slow collapse. Describing how and when it is recognized and what is tried to solve it. Example: Take the article about India. Assume that it gets worse and 750 million people die. That will get the attention of the world and maybe they recognize that they could be next. Even the US and Europe have to pay attention because no money can buy clean air for the whole population of the country when dirty air keeps coming from other parts of the world. Same for clean water. Technological solutions (==money) can only go so far. Again, many possible scenario's for good stories. I agree that politics like in the US will slow down any solution because no politician will support it. Let the next one take the downfall. That is, if he can still breath ;)
You see, many different angles to approach for multiple different stories.

Not_a_ID ๐Ÿšซ

@StarFleet Carl

3: Western United States - general stupidity in elected officials. (Hey, let's quit logging and stop clearing forest areas, so underbrush can grow up, then build houses in the middle of those areas, then complain because forest fires are worse due to high underbrush growth.)

You left out decades of over-aggressive fire protection prior to that as well, because we wanted to log it, rather than see it burn. Or simply because we thought forest fires in general were bad and should be stopped at any cost. Even if the ecosystems for said forests revolved around being burned down every so often.

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Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@Not_a_ID

Even if the ecosystems for said forests revolved around being burned down every so often.

No, not burned down. Burned regularly, but not burned down. A ground fire will not kill mature, healthy trees. That takes a canopy fire. If ground level fires occur often enough you will never build up enough fuel for the fire to spread to the canopy.

Replies:   Remus2  Not_a_ID
Remus2 ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

No, not burned down. Burned regularly, but not burned down. A ground fire will not kill mature, healthy trees. That takes a canopy fire. If ground level fires occur often enough you will never build up enough fuel for the fire to spread to the canopy.

Agreed. A lot of people miss that point.

Not_a_ID ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

No, not burned down. Burned regularly, but not burned down. A ground fire will not kill mature, healthy trees. That takes a canopy fire. If ground level fires occur often enough you will never build up enough fuel for the fire to spread to the canopy.

That area would need to burn every few years in that case, and even then, there would be enough "lack of intensity" to the fire at that point that even comparatively young trees have a chance to survive.

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Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@Not_a_ID

That area would need to burn every few years in that case

That will vary slightly with the population of browsing wild life. More browsers = less brush development at ground level and you can go longer between burns.

enough "lack of intensity" to the fire at that point that even comparatively young trees have a chance to survive.

Is this supposed to be a negative?

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Not_a_ID ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

Is this supposed to be a negative?

If you're creating a mass deforestation from wildfires scenario, yes?

Trees surviving low intensity fires don't deforest very well.

Not_a_ID ๐Ÿšซ
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@StarFleet Carl

We're supposed to be having an energy crisis, and at the same time, a water crisis in a lot of the world. Fine - here's a solution. Build a nuclear reactor far enough back so it doesn't get hit by a tsunami, and then use that to power desalinization plants.

This gets into some of the political ass-hattery of the 1970's that continues to haunt us to this day, especially as it relates to Nuclear Power.

Cheap and clean energy wasn't on the agenda for many people involved in those groups. As they were afraid of what we as a species would do with abundant energy that had few to no draw backs. No need to conserve, no need to be concerned about lot of other related things because the solutions are inexpensive to implement. (Because the energy needed to do so is inexpensive)

Solar is starting to become cheap, but it isn't quite so clean as many want to bill it as being, given all of the heavy metals involved in making solar panels. It also comes with a number of draw backs(reliable availability, etc).

Wind Power actually is a fair bit cleaner than even solar, but it likewise has its own set of issues to contend with as well. It also is starting to become cheap, but it has reliability issues. Which means you're talking about power storage, much like you would be with Solar, and that means dealing with Batteries, which means dealing with heavy metals and other substances that are typically highly toxic--certainly plenty of draw-backs to be found there if you bother to look.

Not_a_ID ๐Ÿšซ

@Keet

I wonder why there are not more stories using the concept of a slow collapse. If the story started towards the end of the collapse you would have almost the same situation as with a world wide disaster but with better preservation of the few resources left for far fewer people. Maybe with a description in the first few chapter how the collapse started without anyone noticing and how it grew. Ultimate survival of the fittest? Not by fighting but because of having the best, most healthy physical body?

I'm a technologist/futurist at heart. So "slow collapse" due to environmental factors fails near the onset.

Also, pollution in general is a weird metric. How do you define it? Many these days now view CO2 as a pollutant.

Pollution has become much worse in Asia, and likely will become so in Africa in time unless steps are taken, but it has become much better elsewhere in the world. Unless you count CO2 as a pollutant, but CO2 is in no danger of reaching levels likely to directly cause problems for humans anytime in any kind of predictive timeline, as you would no longer be measuring it in PPM. (What it does to climate in the interim, which is an indirect means, is another matter)

The technical ability to address most forms of pollution in the third world exists, and it largely revolves getting them off the more basic forms of biofuel and onto a electric grid or a natural gas supply instead. Mostly so they stop burning things(in inefficient ways) for heat or light.

You also start placing scrubbers on all those coal fired plants that China and India have been building over the past 20 years. You don't seriously believe that China was building those plants to conform to US Emission standards do you?

Those upgrades don't fix CO2, but it takes care of a significant portion of Asia's "Brown Cloud" problem. Which by extension takes care of most of the pollution related health issues.

Other "Slow events" which take a decade or more to play out also lend themselves well to adaptation/engineering solutions to address. At least so long as the area in question is allowed access to the resources(and political will) to address the situation at hand.

Sudden onset droughts and/or deluges are another matter, but even those can be adapted to if the will exists to do so. That's an engineering challenge. The Western US in the late 19th and well into the 20th century is a model of that with the large scale dam projects that were built for the purpose of holding back the "deluge" water events so they had water to last through the drought events. (It just happens that demand is starting to exceed available supply even against the long-term trend at this point)

But that pushes things back to "engineering challenge" as there are other places to obtain water, and in the case of the Colorado River for example, many places that place demands on upon it DO have access to other water sources, the Colorado was simply more convenient at the time(Hello, LA)

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Keet ๐Ÿšซ

@Not_a_ID

I'm a technologist/futurist at heart. So "slow collapse" due to environmental factors fails near the onset.

You're looking at it as real life problems/solutions. I sketched a scenario for a different kind of PA story. There's a significant difference.
I agree that there are a lot of technical solutions to many of the pollution problems but someone has to pay for them. I doubt somebody else is gonna pay for scrubbers in India and they most certainly can't afford them or have other priorities.

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