Forum: Story Ideas

Thank you for your reply. Those that suggested i write some Rape stories do seem to prefer the violent rape kind.

Thank you for giving me your thoughts, You could be right about the extreme rape stories having a smaller fan base than the much softer kind, but i guess that depends where you post the story.

You have said you do not like the Hard rape stories and BDSM activities what about pissing or scat in a stories is that something you like.

The stories i write are short stroke stories, which so far the five stories i have posted have been from 738 words which is maybe is to short of a story since it is only about a 4 minute read time, up to 3709 words which is about a 20 minute read time.

Downloads so far have been between just short of 600 up to 1400 which some, probably lots would see that as poor, but to me I am pleased that so many have downloaded my stories, yes would be great to have lots more downloads, but the amount of downloads and good feed back i have got so far, is enough for me to carry on trying to write stroke stories.

Thank you for your input, it is not to late to offer your advice i only posted this yesterday.

In your example are the three soldiers all raping the same woman each time, working there way through that way, rather than one guy raping one woman.

With a stroke story i see them as maybe only part of a story, an highlight, so maybe not much build up to the main action of the story and not a lot after the main action.

Yea three guys on one woman...

I assume you prefer it to be more than one guy raping a woman hard then rather than just one guy, In the list of things i suggested could maybe happen in a story, are there any you do not like to see.

Ok, thank you for letting me know, do you feel the same way as blackjack.

Well to be honest the most extreme i would consider going with a woman is into the area of bdsm. But i like to think of myself as at least a half decent writer though i have yet to publish anything.

To me a rape scene is more of a plot device than anything. I imagine when i set down to work and write a proper one of my own i'll have a whole list of questions to ask myself.

To answer your question, id say i'm more terror over violence type. I think Judi Dench said it best with "any thug can kill i need you to take your ego out of the equation."

In this case i believe any thug can be violent, but if you want to up the scene you need to humiliate and/or terrorize your female character.

Also in all honesty, i think i speak for most people when i say you should generally avoid any bodily fluids in a stroke scene because those things have a very narrow audience.

Thank you very much for your advice, I have posted five stories on this site but i do not actually see myself as a writer. Which is probably a contradiction lol.

A good quote from M, which true.

So if you also terrorize and humiliate the victim then The hard rape fantasy is maybe like a lot of horror films in that there is lots of terrorizing the victim or victims, not just the violence, which i can see how that would add more to the story.

I think in the end it would come down to how much you can sort of fit into a stroke story of say between 10 and 30 minute read time. which is what mine have been about in length so far.

I get what you are saying about short length of story doesn't make a stroke story, but because my stories will be sex stories and most of the story will have adult content in it, that is why i see them as stroke stories.

I know i have not read the "To Serve Man" by Damon Knight, and not sure if i saw the Twilight Zone episode based on that story.

I have just read your version of of "To Serve Man" i thought it was well written, and i have no problems at all that you did a version of that story yourself, if you was doing it to say sell on Amazon KDP for instance then i can see why most would not be happy with you, but to write your version to post on here then not an issue for me. plus you did give an Acknowledgment

Because of the theme of my thread. While reading your Story other than the surprise ending, two other things stood out for me. When you said and i quote.

"He heard a grunt and wondered if he was hurting her, but he didn't care. She was there to serve him so only his needs mattered."

"His hips humped, causing her to gag. But he didn't care. All that mattered was his pleasure. She was there to serve him; that's what she had said. And he was going to make the most of it."

If i do write some Hard Rape stories, violent ones for posting on here, they will certainly not be as hard as cutting a mans dick off lol, no one will die in my stories, that would be a limit for me. My two main limits when it comes to porn stories is No underage and no Snuff.

But i do like horror so good change i will like some of your thriller stories.

Thank you for taking part in my thread.

Yes you wrote the guy to be a loser, and the Alien lady was allowing Walter the fat loser to do what he wanted with her, she was there to serve him. So it was not rape, he just did not care about her feeling you could say.

When you put it like that then yes your stories are certainly not horror ones, not some guy in a mask going around killing people, but thrillers as you said before.

Have you seen the Jack Reacher tv series, if not it is worth watching, as far as i know it is closer to the book than the Tom Cruise versions were.

Yes mate, from the little bit i watched of the trailer looks like it will be a good second series, some times trailers show too much so i do not always watch all of the trailer. Thanks for the info about the thread.

Thank you for you input, When it comes to who's side the readers sympathy lies, not something i have thought about, but i guess depends on why the guy or guys are raping the mature woman, if they are just doing it because it is fun for them. then the sympathy might lie with the lady for a lot of readers, but if they are raping the mature lady for revenge for something she as done, then maybe most readers sympathy will not lie with the lady.

With my stories being short porn stories then if i write some Rape stories for posting on here, there probably would be no remorse shown afterwards, as the story will probably end when the guy or guys leave or very soon after they do, but also my stories might turn out to have been role play, no limit role play i guess. or turn out to have been all a dream.

I understand what you are saying about staying away from the piss and the scat as it will limit the fanbase even more for this kind of story.

Do not think i have ever been called a Freak before lol.