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Revenge over a mistake.

StaticBat83 🚫

A young man met and fell in love with a young woman. He is the heir to a vast fortune. And his family don't like the girl. They see her and only see a common girl, someone who will hold back their son or brother. The girl is always covered in dirt or some kind of filth.

One day she overhears his family try to talk him into breaking up with her. She leaves before the talks are over.

The family force him into going on a trip. He wants to contact his girlfriend but his family say no. So he leaves a note with his sister to give to his girlfriend. He thought he could trust her. But she gave the letter to their parents.

The girl thinks he just abandoned her. So she seeks help from her older sister and their mother. Since the girl had some hair and personal possessions of the guy they are able to cast a spell on him from a distance. The guy then wakes up as a hot young woman. Hot in more ways than one. She can't seem to keep her legs closed.

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blackjack2145309 🚫

@StaticBat83

Not a terrible idea for a story, but the way I see it you're going to work in a way for the MC and the girlfriend to reconnect somehow so she can have the "oh god i made a mistake" type moment.

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StaticBat83 🚫

@blackjack2145309

Still debating that.

roleplay40 🚫

@StaticBat83

When the guy wakes up as a woman, in a woman's body, after he as got over the shock of this, I assume you will have him explore is new body, which he might enjoy to begin with. But since you say this would be revenge and he would not be able to keep his legs closed, Will the guy end up hating it, no longer enjoying any of it.

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@roleplay40

Just to interject on this a little because i've been reading a manga on a similar premise.

First there needs to be a period of enjoyment, ie masturbating while the guy turned sexy waifu explores her new body for a few days.

The idea is for her to come to the conclusion "women's bodies are just DANGEROUS"

Which is good to loosen up the reader for some sexy comedy yucks....

Then i think the MC needs a neutral female confidant to "teach him to be a female"

I mean every gender switching story needs a slightly awkward changing room montage don't they?

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roleplay40 🚫

@blackjack2145309

I agree with you that there first needs to be a period of enjoyment for the guy that has been turned into a woman.

In StaticBat83 idea the MC is the heir to a fortune and as been sent on a trip, so the MC could spend the next few days Masturbating, exploring his new body in his hotel suite, ordering room service, Those delivering his food would think he as got a lady staying with him.

Like you i think the MC would need a female confidant to "teach him to be a female" Help the MC at the very least get some clothes to wear so he can leave the hotel.

And yes every gender switching story needs a slightly awkward changing room montage.

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madnige 🚫
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@roleplay40

there first needs to be a period of enjoyment

I'm pretty sure the MC will not enjoy hir first period... ;)

Also, in the spirit (or at least cocktail) of the original topic, this (IIRC) is a secondary plot theme of Carry On up the Khyber

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roleplay40 🚫
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@madnige

I agree the MC would certainly not enjoy his first period, which is ex girlfriend, her older sister and there Mother who all worked together to put the spell on the MC would no doubt hope the MC hated it.

Not sure what IIRC means but Carry on up the Khyber is a good film.

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@roleplay40

Not sure what IIRC

If I Remember Correctly.

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roleplay40 🚫

@Dominions Son

Thank you for letting me know.

blackjack2145309 🚫

@roleplay40

Though one thing i'd like to see more of is women acting like men in the context of a gender swap as far as aggressive social behaviors...

i will give Michelle Rodriguez credit though from the movie she was in called "the assignment" she seemed to do a passable job from what i saw.

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roleplay40 🚫

@blackjack2145309

Yes Michelle Rodriguez did a passable job as you say in the film "The Assignment"

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