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The Great Leap Forward

ralord82276 ๐Ÿšซ
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Physiologically, Homo Sapiens have existed for between 300,000 and 500,000 years but archaeologists believe that we had the same type of basic, almost instinct-level, culture for most of that time: simple basic tools that never showed any innovation, simple fur clothing, no evidence of art, jewelry, or other indication of higher cultural structure.

Then, somewhere between 50,000 and 40,000 years ago, that all changed with what some archaeologists call The Great Leap Forward.

Suddenly we had cave paintings, more complex and sometimes multi-stage tools, jewelry, evidence of complex housing, boats, etc and that is where modern human cultural structures and behavior started to form. That is the period that archaeological discoveries have pinpointed that seems to be the start of humanity's drive to improve.

But what started it? Why did modern humans exist physiologically for 250,000-450,000 years before all of a sudden getting this cultural drive for improvement seemingly out of nowhere?

To me this seems to suggest a solid basis for a story but not sure under which primary tag it would go... not time travel, not do-over, not alternate history...

The premise: Future scientists/engineers are working on an experiment in quantum physics/ quantum tunneling. They eventually succeed in creating a quantum tunneling effect and don't realize that their experiment had additional effects than what they observed... the effect of "snapshotting" their memories and injecting them into a migrating family-group of Cro-Magnons 40,000+ years in the past. These "snapshots" have JUST their memories, not their personalities, and they do NOT override the original memories of the Cro-Magnons... they just add to them.

So now this group has all these memories of seemingly fantastic things from that group of scientists and engineers...but also the background knowledge that the individuals learned. So they know it is not magic but simply the culmination of millennia of initially slow but eventually rapid technological advances. After a period of shock and mental adjustments, they start to use some of that knowledge to make small improvements in their lives and, as they travel, in the lives of those they encounter. They do not have the technological base available to make drastic advances, but the small changes they are able to make rapidly catch on and start the cultural shift towards modern humanity.

I invite anyone interested to use this as a story plot.

Freyrs_stories ๐Ÿšซ

@ralord82276

I would likely suggest anyone wanting to venture this way cast an eye over Jean M. Auel's clan of the cave bear series for at least a few pointers of where to start. if i recall correctly it was well researched for the years it was written.

I can't think of any other fiction that is as "accessible". maybe a bit of time on the primitive technology youtube channel to get some other "practical" ideas.

poke around here and there to build a picture of daily "functional" life. then work with a few standard tropes plot wise till you find your way. this sort of background world building may help kick this off a bit easier than diving in blind.

Replies:   Paladin_HGWT
Paladin_HGWT ๐Ÿšซ
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@Freyrs_stories

I can't think of any other fiction that is as "accessible". maybe a bit of time on the primitive technology youtube channel to get some other "practical" ideas.

There was a story I read back when I was a teen, c.1978-82 that would be classed as YA "Young Adult" now. It was about an early Homo Sapien Sapien male about 16 who is separated (exiled, maybe) from his small tribe.

He develops an atlatl (spear throwing stick), forms a relationship with an injured "wolfling" ๐Ÿบ (not pup, not full grown), and in his loneliness makes cave drawings.

Then he rescues a teen girl, then the remnants of her clan the (3 to 5) adult makes had just been killed hunting a bison (or mammoth?).

The postscript mentioned that the events that are described in the book (clay lined baskets, etc.) occurred over hundreds, perhaps thousands of years. The postscript stated that the story was theories of how such discoveries might have occurred.

The story might be called "The Stick Thrower" or something like that. The cover image was a teen male wearing furs, with a javelin/atlatl about to be thrown, and a wolf-dog beside him.

A similar book, that I have not read, written 20 years after I read the book mentioned above is: https://books.google.com/books/about/Dar_and_the_Spear_Thrower.html?id=AHvsKyxPeOcC

https://storiesonline.net/s/29577/darwin-s-world

Darwin's World has a similar theme, except people from c.2080 are "harvested" given 20s bodies, and transplanted to an alternative Earth.

Replies:   Harold Wilson
Harold Wilson ๐Ÿšซ

@Paladin_HGWT

Sounds like "The Hunter Returns", a barely novel length work by David Drake with a credit to Jim Kjelgaard. I think it was originally a short story/novella by Kjelgaard that Drake fleshed out as a favor to someone. (Jim Baen apparently was not shy about asking his authors to help other authors and/or their surviving spouses.)

At any rate, the whole boy, spearthrower, dog, girlfriend, hunting party survivors, thing rings a bell.

Keet ๐Ÿšซ
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@ralord82276

POL's story Ascent plays with that theme:

30,000 B.C. This story is one viewpoint of how our world became dominated by a single primate species. Follow along as one small clan changes the world forever.

Paladin_HGWT ๐Ÿšซ
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@ralord82276

https://www.iceman.it/en/the-iceman/

Look up Otzi the Iceman. Discovered c.1991 up in the Alps within a few meters of the Austrian-Italian border. They built a museum and research facility in Bolzano, Sud Tyrol, Northern Italy, but as a joint project with Austria.

They also have "Bog Mummies" and other persevered bodies and artifacts.

There is speculation that many tools and other artifacts, being constructed of organic materials, we haven't found traces of them.

I am in my mid 50's, and at least 3 times in my lifetime we have had significant changes to our beliefs of the "earliest" Humans. And where (Africa, China, Europe).

The Clinton Administration, for political reasons, destroyed evidence of "Kennewick Man" in Japan they have destroyed archeological evidence of the Ainu peoples.

https://www.crf-usa.org/bill-of-rights-in-action/bria-14-1a-the-kennewick-controversies

So, I believe further archeological wonders will be discovered in the near future.

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