What about a story where Mom has been hypnotized and everybody in the family is okay with it.
She was previously always complaining, nagging and lazy. Now she's happy, vibrant but she also doesn't wear clothing, and does what anybody in the family tell her to do without question. She's aware she's hypnotized, and gets embarrassed but cannot stop herself from immediate obedience
My displeasure with incest themes aside...
I think the key to this story is to give the background as to the "why" everyone is okay with Mom being hypnotized...
Also i could see room for some "messing" with mom type situations. For example if she tries to put on clothes she's hypnotized to freeze and the clothing gets moved out of her reach.
That sort of thing....
yes, exactly.
They simply like her better this way, and possibly one of the characters has even tried to change her back but it only made it worse.
The main trouble i see with a story like this is that I'm fairly certain someone will compare it to or call it a mind control version of "Resetting my B*tch button" another story on here that goes along similar lines.
That's actually a story I wrote too!
I think my concern is that the premise may seem cartoony or absurd. I have done a 28 chapter mind control story where I allow the subjects to question if they are even hypnotized, and as they realize the limitations of it - that it's not "magic" - they question if its even real or they just like doing the things they were told are implanted.
The person hypnotizing them floods a part of their brain with suggestions to essentially over-ride certain fight/flight responses, but it's not like a magic ring or something. They can disobey at times, and they start to assume that they were always somewhat naughty. Then when they see pictures of themselves before the hypnosis smoking for instance, when they now believe smoking is taboo/the worst thing they can do - they freak out.
Resetting my bitch button was a woman voluntarily choosing a life of service and submission.
Hmm, yea i wasn't sure how to interpret "she's aware of being hypnotized" correctly.
I can also relate to having concerns about your own writing seeming too cartoony or absurd to. That's part of the reason why i make posts on this website.
Also to be fair i did like one of your earlier posts about the girl hypnosis victim after the hypnosis is over.
As an example, she is aware she is hypnotized, so she isn't a robot that just goes about her day to day life.
Example:
She is in the kitchen making breakfast for the family. Bobby comes downstairs.
"Mom, sit on the broom and ride it around like you are playing Quidditch in Harry Potter."
"Bobby please don't make me do that now, I am trying to finish making breakfast," she says as she sits on the broom and inserts it. She starts to blush but she can't help herself.
Dad comes downstairs. "Bobby, what have I told you about making your mom stick the broom up her ass?"
"It's not up her ass, Dad! She's fucking herself with it."
"Bobby didn't tell me how I had to sit, Score one for Huffle Puff!!!" she declares as she breathlessly gallops around the rooom.
You write stuff? do you mind linking me to one of your stories here or in private?
