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Looking for a Mech story

Tazzy81 ๐Ÿšซ

I can't remember the author or the title but it's about a war against aliens using ride in giant mech soldiers (NOT the private by random writings)

Ernest Bywater ๐Ÿšซ

@Tazzy81

They have mechs in this, not sure if it's what you're after.

https://storiesonline.net/series/580/the-new-federation

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Tazzy81 ๐Ÿšซ

@Ernest Bywater

Not the one i was looking for but it's what i'm reading next, thanks :)

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@Tazzy81

Ace Cadet Leon Young by Shaddoth?

AJ

Replies:   sunseeker  Tazzy81
sunseeker ๐Ÿšซ
Updated:

@awnlee jawking

here's the link - https://storiesonline.net/s/26404/ace-cadet-leon-young

I was thinking of this one too but couldn't remember it or find it :)

Tazzy81 ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

Not the one i'm looking for but thanks

richardshagrin ๐Ÿšซ

@Tazzy81

"Shadow on the Edge by Aeralyndal
Author's Description:
THIS is the story I thought I was submitting under the title "Birth of Shadow" NO EXPLICIT SEX.
Size: 642 KB (124,926 words)
Genre:
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Science Fiction

Review by richardshagrin [other reviews by richardshagrin - Contact Reviewer]
Reviewed: 5/24/2015

This is VERY good story. It's long and filled with battles but there is a hero with issues and he develops and grows as a person as the story expands. He starts as a private, with some flashbacks to explain his past and ends as a Count on a new planet where he and his family are movers and shakers. Most of the combat involves very large armored Mechs which have lasers, missiles, machine guns, and armor in varying amounts. Some can jump and others fly.

I understand it is based on a game some of you have heard of before. The story does not require any familiarity with the game. Its set in interstellar space long after current era. There is so much detail there is no point in trying to give an explanation of what happens in the story. A young man grows up and succeeds in his career of being a Mech pilot and officer of a mercenary military force. If you like war stories you should be happy with this one.

I am going to give the plot a ten. There are lots of twists and turns and unexpected developments occur with little warning. The technical quality is pretty good, considering the length of the story. I saw a few creative spellings or errors but not enough to throw me out of the story. Lets give it a nine. I try very hard only to give one story a month a ten, and I already used my ten for May, so this is a nine. Six is a C. Seven is a B, Eight is an A. This is an A plus.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9"

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Tazzy81 ๐Ÿšซ

@richardshagrin

This is it! Thanks, for the life of me i couldn't remember much deails about it

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