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davenothere ๐Ÿšซ

As noted in the subject I don't have much to go on but I have seen you masters of answer here do wonders be for. I was reading a different and a part came to me and now that is all I can think about.
I have one piece that is stuck in my head. The MC is in a flower garden practicing with his sword and ends up cutting off all of the flowers.

Ernest Bywater ๐Ÿšซ

@davenothere

I've not checked to be sure, but when I first read this the first, and so far only, story that came to mind was Sword Saint by Shaddoth - I think it's about a thir to half way in when he's in the city.

https://storiesonline.net/s/56779/sword-saint-a-new-start

If I've got this wrong, it's still a good read for you.

Replies:   sunseeker  dsclink3
sunseeker ๐Ÿšซ

@Ernest Bywater

In ch 34 the MC cuts up a bunch of insects while practicing but no flowers...so far. Definitely a good read though...again! :)

dsclink3 ๐Ÿšซ

@Ernest Bywater

You have it right. It's in chapter 47.

Replies:   Remus2
Remus2 ๐Ÿšซ

@dsclink3

Agreed, that is the right one. I had the scene conflated with a different story.

Remus2 ๐Ÿšซ
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@davenothere

In the same town the MC cut all the flowers, he fought a beast that was killing off the towns children. The local guards were corrupted and covering it up.

I know the story, but my mind is blanking for the title.

ETA: I believe it was one of the stories in this series.
https://storiesonline.net/series/899/the-bards-tales
Which one, I can't remember.

junior15 ๐Ÿšซ

@davenothere

This sounds like a story I just read recently, but I can't remember the title or author. I'm not even sure it was on here or if it was on Kindle Unlimited. If the story I'm thinking about is the same as you, the scene you describe is when the MC is traveling to return a princess that was kidnapped/detained back to her father. They are stopped over in a town near the border and staying with the guy in charge of the town. The MC is in the prized garden of this guy and is practicing his ability to speed up his reflexes so he sees things in fine detail and slow motion. He starts just slicing a leaf off a plant and ends up doing the same to all the leaves, leaving the garden a mess. I think this is about 1/3 of the way into the story, but I'm not sure.

I know it's not much more to go on, but I hope it helps.

Replies:   davenothere
davenothere ๐Ÿšซ

@junior15

junior15
That sounds like the story. I'm sure that I read it here but I will have to check my Kindle just to be sure.
Thank you all for replying.

Replies:   junior15
junior15 ๐Ÿšซ

@davenothere

I just checked my recent stories on here and Ernest was right, that was the story I was thinking of. And as dsclink3 said, the part about destroying the garden is in Chapter 47 "I had decimated his garden leaf by leaf"

davenothere ๐Ÿšซ

@davenothere

Thank to all of you for your help. Ernest, you had the right story and I have no idea how you did it with so little to go on.
Thanks again.

Replies:   Ernest Bywater
Ernest Bywater ๐Ÿšซ

@davenothere

The scene stuck in my minds when I read the story. Since I do not read much in the sword and sorcery genre I had little to pick from. Although I hadn't read that story for about 4 years it's a memorable scene.

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