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dsw_tenka ๐Ÿšซ

Accident sent military/engineer type back to pre Spanish southwest, in the first chapter or 2 the whole village is wiped out by a disease. But the MC and a few of the tribe that listened to him survive. He brings the tech way forward, airplanes and such. He creates a "county" from Mayan Central America to Colorado from West AZ to Texas coast. Any ideas?

Replies:   bk69  grandad_rufus
sherlockx ๐Ÿšซ

Building Utopia:
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https://storiesonline.net/a/SW_MO_Hermit

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bk69 ๐Ÿšซ

@sherlockx

The tech is there, but mostly he wasn't pre-Spanish, and he was more Southeastern. And his 'country' was the continent.
But yeah, that was my first guess.
I also wouldn't be surprised if the actual 'story' wasn't an amalgamation of several stories, like that and one of cmsix's...

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sherlockx ๐Ÿšซ

@bk69

I did wonder if it might be an amalgam myself but Building Utopia was the only one I could think of that included the "tech"

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bk69 ๐Ÿšซ

@sherlockx

I did wonder if it might be an amalgam myself but Building Utopia was the only one I could think of that included the "tech"

Pretty sure Spirit Quest tech was close. And Will and Carrie. And I think aubie56 had one that would fit...

bk69 ๐Ÿšซ
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@dsw_tenka

My guess would be 'Spirit Quest' by FantasyLover

edit: nope, just checked, he went to southern europe.

Will and Carrie would be the right location, roughly... not the right timeline tho.

LonelyDad ๐Ÿšซ

'A Close Call' Books 1 & 2 by Aubie56

https://storiesonline.net/s/56322/a-close-call-book-1-a-new-beginning

https://storiesonline.net/s/57553/a-close-call-book-2-a-try-for-utopia

dsw_tenka ๐Ÿšซ
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Thanks LonelyDad, that was the one!

I just finished Building Utopia a few weeks ago, after I found the forum. This is my 3rd CRS search and you guys are awesome.

I will search for Will and Carrie after I'm done with "A Close Call"

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bk69 ๐Ÿšซ

@dsw_tenka

I will search for Will and Carrie

it's by rotedrachan

grandad_rufus ๐Ÿšซ

@dsw_tenka

https://storiesonline.net/s/45061:33378/chapter-1-wilbur-sees-it-differently by Old 1 Eye may also be of interest

Regards G_R

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