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He Survived in Desert by Drinking His Own Urine

PotomacBob 🚫

I suspect this was a dead-tree story, probably paperback (which was what I could afford), and before the World Wide Web.
I remember very little about the story. What I do remember is that the MC was hiding in the American desert from the bad guy(s). Don't think he'd been there long, so probably fled there. I suspect whoever was chasing him had guns (otherwise why would he try to hide from him/them?)
The two most vivid things I remember were that while he was in the desert he survived by two things: (1) he was able to get some liquid by gathering drops of water from the leaves of desert plants and (2) he drank his own urine.
I know it isn't much to go on, but the SOL folks have come though on much less before.

Replies:   Mushroom  Ernest Bywater
Mushroom 🚫
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@PotomacBob

It could be "Deathwatch" by Robb White, in 1973.

A guy hunting mountain goats in the California desert hires a guy as a local guide. But after killing a lone prospector, he does not want the guide reporting it to the authorities, so instead starts to hunt him. And most of what you describe fits the story.

In 1974 it was turned into a TV movie called "Savages" with Andy Griffith, and in 2014 another movie called Beyond the Reach with Michael Douglas.

I remember the book as being on a mandatory reading book when I was in Junior High, and have seen both movies.

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PotomacBob 🚫

@Mushroom

Mushroom
11/8/2020, 5:38:35 PM
Updated: 11/8/2020, 5:39:02 PM

@PotomacBob

It could be "Deathwatch" by Robb White, in 1973.

Thanks. I've bought "Deathwatch" and will read it and will say whether it is the right book.

richardshagrin 🚫
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@PotomacBob

"Deathwatch" by Robb White, in 1973.

Deathwatch (novel) - Wikipediaen.wikipedia.org ' wiki ' Deathwatch_(novel)

Deathwatch is an American 1972 novel written by Robb White. The book was awarded the 1973 Edgar Award for Best Juvenile Mystery from the Mystery Writers of America, and was an Outstanding Book of the Year by The New York Times.

Its plot features a skilled and successful hunter and lawyer, Madec, who receives a rare permit to shoot bighorn sheep in California's Mojave Desert for seven days. He hires a timid college student named Ben as a guide. After Madec accidentally shoots an old prospector, he realizes that Ben will not help cover up the shooting, and he attempts to silence Ben forever.

Date of first publication: 1972

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Mushroom 🚫
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@richardshagrin

Deathwatch is an American 1972 novel written by Robb White. The book was awarded the 1973 Edgar Award for Best Juvenile Mystery from the Mystery Writers of America, and was an Outstanding Book of the Year by The New York Times.

OK, so I was off by a year or so.

Mostly I remember because my family and I watched it when it was first shown on TV, and it was unusual at that time seeing Andy Griffith as the bad guy.

Then in around 1980, and actually reading it as a mandatory book in my Junior High reading class. Can anybody imagine students being forced to read something like this today?

I found it interesting that most I talk to when the conversation of Junior High comes up, I ask them if they remember the books they had to read. They normally say that they have no idea. Yet I still remember all 4 of mine. Tom Sawyer and The Crucible, old classics. But also Deathwatch, and "The Endless Steppe". Something I often find fascinating that most have never heard of.

Even as they lived in "enlightened" areas like LA or San Francisco, yet I was living in a "rural backwoods" like Idaho.

As the supreme philosopher Stu Redmond said, "Country don't mean dumb".

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richardshagrin 🚫

@Mushroom

philosopher Stu Redmond said, "Country don't mean dumb".

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Redman or Redmond, On-line picks Redman. At least it isn't Redskins.

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Mushroom 🚫

@richardshagrin

"The Stand , Part I: The Plague
The Stand is a television miniseries, first broadcast in 1994, based on the novel of the same name by Stephen King, who also wrote the teleplay. It was directed by Mick Garris.

At least one person got the reference.

I admit, the unabridged book is my favorite, but the miniseries was a very faithful adaptation.

And it must be remembered that Gary Sinise played the Stu character. A perfect choice in casting. Very much the "country redneck" type of character. But also unusually sympathetic when compared to most stories by S. King.

And yes, I have both read the book again and watched the series this year. I still jokingly call what we are going through now as "Captain Trips", and then laugh at the illiterates that do not get the reference.

Mushroom 🚫
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@PotomacBob

Thanks. I've bought "Deathwatch" and will read it and will say whether it is the right book.

I have a suspicion that is what you remember.

Much of what you describe meshes with what I remember of it. And for me, it has often remained in my memory. Read back in an era when reading was not intended to make us comfortable, but to challenge us.

I find it ironic in the modern era where parents would probably think nothing of letting their kids read a book or watch a movie featuring 100 year old vampires seducing teenage girls, or seeing children slaughtered by the dozens. Yet would probably scream in outrage at books I read 40 years ago as part of the mandatory school system.

If anybody reads "Twilight", it is obvious Edward is over 100 years old. So his interest in 17 year old Bella is more than a little creepy. This is a guy that lived through WWI, prohibition, and the Roaring 20's. Being interested in a teen in the early 2000's I always found more than a little creepy.

And the least said about that and the Mockingjay series I always thought, the better. Steven King wrote a much better story about the same thing.

PotomacBob 🚫

@PotomacBob

Thanks. I've bought "Deathwatch" and will read it and will say whether it is the right book.

I am surprised to discover that it is labeled as a "children's book."

Replies:   bk69  Mushroom
bk69 🚫

@PotomacBob

I am surprised to discover that it is labeled as a "children's book."

It's a children's book in the same way Starship Troopers was a children's book. (I actually think adding Heinlein as part of the literature curriculum would be a tremendous idea.)

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StarFleet Carl 🚫

@bk69

It's a children's book in the same way Starship Troopers was a children's book. (I actually think adding Heinlein as part of the literature curriculum would be a tremendous idea.)

Heinlein actually wrote for Scribner what were termed juvenile novels. The twelve novels are:

Rocket Ship Galileo
Space Cadet
Red Planet
Farmer in the Sky
Between Planets
The Rolling Stones
Starman Jones
The Star Beast
Tunnel in the Sky
Time for the Stars
Citizen of the Galaxy
Have Spacesuit - Will Travel

Starship Troopers was written AS a juvenile, but rejected by Scribner and published by Putnam.

Podkayne of Mars is often considered a juvenile, but was not written as one by Heinlein, especially with the original ending.

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anim8ed 🚫

@StarFleet Carl

And I read every one of them when I was a juvenile. Actually started when I was still in elementary school. I attended a DOD school which was much better than those in the local school system. I am also old enough that we actually still had corporal punishment. Bring on the 'board' of education!

PotomacBob 🚫

@StarFleet Carl

Heinlein actually wrote for Scribner what were termed juvenile novels. The twelve novels are

Was the Rolling Stones book the basis for the Star Trek episode "The Trouble with Tribbles"?

Replies:   Dominions Son  Mushroom
Dominions Son 🚫

@PotomacBob

Was the Rolling Stones book the basis for the Star Trek episode "The Trouble with Tribbles"?

Possibly.

From what I could find on it, the issue of the similarity between the tribbles and Heinlein's flat cats was brought to the attention of the Star Trek producers. The producers were concerned about it enough to contact Heinlein and ask him for a waiver, which Heinlein for some bizarre reason gave them gratis.

According to what I found, Heinlein mentions this incident in his autobiography with some regret.

Mushroom 🚫
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@PotomacBob

Was the Rolling Stones book the basis for the Star Trek episode "The Trouble with Tribbles"?

Yes.

David Gerrold never hid that much of his inspiration for writing came from Heinlein. Quite often he has been described as a "Dark Heinlein".

This can really be seen in his Chtorran War series. Quite a bit lifted from Starship Troopers, but then turned very dark. Almost as if Heinlein was filtered through Steven King.

Replies:   StarFleet Carl
StarFleet Carl 🚫

@Mushroom

This can really be seen in his Chtorran War series. Quite a bit lifted from Starship Troopers, but then turned very dark.

It got so dark, he just quit writing it.

Which annoyed the crap out of me, because I really, really liked that series. Literally read the covers off a couple of the paperbacks in that series.

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Mushroom 🚫
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@StarFleet Carl

It got so dark, he just quit writing it.

Which annoyed the crap out of me, because I really, really liked that series. Literally read the covers off a couple of the paperbacks in that series.

I have completely given up on that series to be honest. Going on 30 years since the last book.

At least I have been able to figure out most of what he intended I think. Even ran a GURPS campaign with that as the setting. Was a lot of fun, even when half the party got wiped after each engagement.

DG has long had a habit of starting a series, then just walking away and never finishing it. Which is why he finds it almost impossible to get published anymore. Over the decades he has had at least 3 contracts to finish it, but his foot dragging eventually causes the publisher to rip it up.

Along with the movie based on the series, the MMORPG based on the series, a graphic novel based on the series, etc, etc, etc.

Mushroom 🚫

@PotomacBob

I am surprised to discover that it is labeled as a "children's book."

"Young Adult".

As was Starship Troopers, and The Hobbit.

Heck, read Grimm's sometime. Or even Redwall.

PotomacBob 🚫

@Mushroom

It could be "Deathwatch" by Robb White, in 1973.

I finished reading "Deathwatch," and can report it is not the book I was looking for. That said, "Deathwatch" is a really good story. As I was readying it, I kept believing it would be the same story until I was about halfway through the book. The setting is right. The circumstances are right. The publication date of the book felt about right. Many of the details in the first half of the book sounded as though they could lead to the scenes I remember. But they never got there.
Thanks for recommending "Deathwatch"; it was worth the purchase price and the time spent reading it. The stories were similar enough to make me wonder if the same author might have another book that IS actually it.

rkimmelerre 🚫

Deathwatch was a hell of a book.

LonelyDad 🚫

The original Bionic Man deadtree book had Steve Austin and a female Israeli cohort trying to survive in the desert [Negev I think], but they didn't actually drink it. Rather, they swished it around in their mouths so the water would be absorbed by the lining of their mouth, then spitting the rest back out. While urine is sterile, some of the salts and other chemicals are not really good for the body in large quantities.

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Dominions Son 🚫

@LonelyDad

While urine is sterile, some of the salts and other chemicals are not really good for the body in large quantities.

True, but if you are trapped somewhere without a better source of water, dehydration will kill you faster.

Mushroom 🚫

@LonelyDad

The original Bionic Man deadtree book had Steve Austin and a female Israeli cohort trying to survive in the desert [Negev I think], but they didn't actually drink it. Rather, they swished it around in their mouths so the water would be absorbed by the lining of their mouth, then spitting the rest back out.

I remember that also, "Cyborg", by Martin Caidin. But I remembered that reference was also quite different, in as you said they did not actually "drink" it.

The book (and movie) was quite different than the actual series. In the book, his eye was a camera, and many other changes were made. His replacements were not as powerful, and the novel Col. Austin showed no hesitation in killing, something that was never done in the series.

Ernest Bywater 🚫

@PotomacBob

Are you sure it was the US desert. In the book Dune the MC has a suit that retains and processes all the body fluids to be recycled water. The whole planet is a huge desert. The main one is urine as the thinking is the best place for water is in the body and drinking more creates more urine which is more recycled water.

Dominions Son 🚫

@Ernest Bywater

In the book Dune the MC has a suit that retains and processes all the body fluids to be recycled water.

The key there is that it's processed, they weren't drinking raw urine.

StarFleet Carl 🚫

@Ernest Bywater

In the book Dune the MC has a suit that retains and processes all the body fluids to be recycled water.

The still suits also collected all evaporation from the skin. During typical moderate exercise, we sweat around a liter of water every hour. You may not even feel it, but that's because it's evaporating. Eight hours of walking in the desert of Arrakis means about seven and a half liters of water to drink, due to losses in recycling.

Replies:   bk69
bk69 🚫

@StarFleet Carl

You may not even feel it, but that's because it's evaporating.

Not around here. Nothing evaporates in 98% humidity.

Pixy 🚫
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Since no-one else has mentioned it, you can't drink very much urine. I can't remember the amount if it was in litres or pints, but basically it was one pint/litre of your own or 2 pints/litres of someone else's. The reason you can drink twice the amount of someone else's is because every ones livers work in different ways and there are less toxins in someone else's. Any more of the one (or two)amount and your liver is poisoned and unless you can get to a medical facility pronto, you die. Which is a bit of a bummer.

Replies:   bk69
bk69 🚫

@Pixy

It really depends.

If you're really well hydrated to begin with, the urine you produce will be much more water. If you're nearly dehydrated, your own urine will be toxic. (You can, however, distill it partially.)

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