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brodan ๐Ÿšซ

Story where a young high school boy walking saw a girl being raped he stopped the rape but gets arrested because the attackers accused him as raping the girl
He goes to prison even though he a minor and while there his mom dies
He gets out because the truth finally comes out
He is an emancipated teen and moves to another town
Where he tries to start over

Please help if you can
Thanks
Hunt 1948

Replies:   joyR
joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@brodan

The Outsider by Jay Cantrell

Replies:   Ernest Bywater
Ernest Bywater ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

The Outsider by Jay Cantrell

score 10 out of 10 for the correct call.

Replies:   rustyken  joyR
rustyken ๐Ÿšซ

@Ernest Bywater

Great story!!

joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@Ernest Bywater

score 10 out of 10 for the correct call.

Every time you give me 10 out of 10, I have your handprint on my ass for a week...

Replies:   gruntsgt
gruntsgt ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

You bragging or complaining??

Replies:   joyR
joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@gruntsgt

You bragging or complaining??

Maybe :)

ystokes ๐Ÿšซ

Don't forget the follow up story A Flawed Diamond.
https://storiesonline.net/s/73779/a-flawed-diamond
Another 10

bobzchemist ๐Ÿšซ
Updated:

I'd like to point out that a few of Jays stories share characters/interlock somewhat also. Daze in the Valley, for example, interlocks with A Flawed Diamond towards the end. I've never read one of his stories that didn't rate a ten

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@bobzchemist

I'm less of a fan. Jay's stories tend to start with a cracking premise and lots of conflict, then gradually the drama subsides into melodrama and readers are treated to the tell-tale scenes of buying household furnishings.

AJ

Replies:   ystokes
ystokes ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

I'm less of a fan. Jay's stories tend to start with a cracking premise and lots of conflict, then gradually the drama subsides into melodrama and readers are treated to the tell-tale scenes of buying household furnishings.

I agree to a point as some of his longer stories I have to skip parts because of info overload. I love all the research he does but some times less is more.

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