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Sk0r ๐Ÿšซ

A man in the Air Force is grabbed and put on a 'train' with dozens of young thin teenage girls (except for one chunky girl who is grabbed by mistake) and sent to an underground bunker to ride out the end of the world. He develops a love affair with the chunky girl and encourages all the girls to have sex with each other by overriding the 'censure' monitoring software installed by the government. I read the story here or on asstr not sure which. Thanks

Replies:   Nizzgrrl
Ernest Bywater ๐Ÿšซ
Updated:

I recognize the story line and I remember reading it here on SoL about 10 years or so ago, but I can't remember the name or author. I'm pretty sure it was before we had the post apoc and scifi codes, so I'm not sure how you'd go about finding it on a category search. I'm trying and advanced search for you. - not having much luck, hopefully someone else will remember the name for you.

Sk0r ๐Ÿšซ

Thanks for narrowing it down to this site and for your search. It has been about 10 years since I read it.

Ernest Bywater ๐Ÿšซ

My biggest fear is it may be one of those stories that got pulled by the author. However, I do suspect it's simply because we can't get a good hit on the right categories or description.

Replies:   Sparky-1953
Sparky-1953 ๐Ÿšซ

@Ernest Bywater

I remember the story also. I seem to remember it may have been either incomplete or obviously set up for a sequel. It had reached the point where they were leaving the bunker.

Nizzgrrl ๐Ÿšซ

@Sk0r

I found two stories that may qualify. They are In the Cia Bunker by Just-this-guy and the other is Retribution by Fel.

My directory search turned up a number of other stories with the word bunker, but these two are the most likely.

Replies:   Sk0r  Sparky-1953
Sk0r ๐Ÿšซ

@Nizzgrrl

Thanks for checking, but neither of those stories are it.

Sparky-1953 ๐Ÿšซ

@Nizzgrrl

Bunker was used in the OP and our comments but was probably not used in the story. It was actually a large man-made cave (what do you call a hemisphere like shape that is less than a half globe?)that had multiple buildings in it. There was a separate huge (nuclear powered?) multistory walk-in refrigerator/freezer. The train/tram/shuttle was very long and twisty (100-200 miles?) and was collapsed in sections behind them as they traveled. The M/C was a pre-selected enlisted man who had just replaced his predecessor and wasn't trained yet. He was ordered/told/encouraged to kill one of the girls during the trip to establish his authority but he refused.

Ernest Bywater ๐Ÿšซ

@Sparky-1953

That's the story I remember. Now to find the name and author, if we can.

garymrssn ๐Ÿšซ

@Sparky-1953

(what do you call a hemisphere like shape that is less than a half globe?

Dome?

Sparky-1953 ๐Ÿšซ

@garymrssn

I know I'm too literal but "dome" is the name of a structure or artifact in that shape but I don't think it's the name of the shape itself. Any solid geometry teachers out there?

Replies:   limab  Remus2
limab ๐Ÿšซ

@Sparky-1953

I just googled it and came up with "spherical cap".

No, I don't remember that from calc, trig or geometry.

Unfortunately, I don't think it will help either.

limab

Replies:   Remus2
Remus2 ๐Ÿšซ

@limab

For the record, a hemisphere is a common design element among architectural, mechanical, aerospace, etcetera engineers. One of the more famous examples being the Pantheon in Rome.

https://interestingengineering.com/13-interesting-and-great-domes-of-the-byzantine-and-roman-empire

Remus2 ๐Ÿšซ

@Sparky-1953

Hemisphere

Replies:   joyR
joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@Remus2

Hemisphere

No.

The question was;

(what do you call a hemisphere like shape that is less than a half globe?)

Hemi is half, so less than a half a sphere would not be a hemisphere.

Replies:   Remus2
Remus2 ๐Ÿšซ
Updated:

@joyR

No.

The question was;

(what do you call a hemisphere like shape that is less than a half globe?)

Hemi is half, so less than a half a sphere would not be a hemisphere.

I won't argue it with you. Look it up.

I know I'm too literal but "dome" is the name of a structure or artifact in that shape but I don't think it's the name of the shape itself. Any solid geometry teachers out there?

ETA: That was the question I responded to.

Ernest Bywater ๐Ÿšซ

@garymrssn

I tried searches using cavern and cave along with some of the other words I thought would apply as there are way too many stories if I use cavern or cave by themselves.

Replies:   Sparky-1953
Sparky-1953 ๐Ÿšซ

@Ernest Bywater

As I remember it, I read this story at least 15 and probably closer to 20 years ago. My recollection was that it was a good story but that a few parts seemed rushed, like a section of an outline not fully fleshed out. Like an 7.9 story with potential to be an 8.6. It also seemed to be set up to be continued.

Ernest Bywater ๐Ÿšซ

Can someone with a premier membership check if the story War Games by Estragon is the story being looked for, please. For legal reasons I can't check the story itself. The author page link is below and the story is from 1999 with no story description. From the story size I don't think it is, but it does need to be checked and eliminated unless someone comes up with the correct story. I've checked over 2,000 stories using various searches and now working my way through a list of nearly 4,700 stories and this is the only likely hit in the first 600 stories covering the period from 1999 to 2002.

https://storiesonline.net/a/Estragon

Replies:   Keet  PlaysWithWires
Keet ๐Ÿšซ

@Ernest Bywater

War Games Posted October 8 1999, No description. Tags: FemaleDom. It's not the story being looked for.

PlaysWithWires ๐Ÿšซ

@Ernest Bywater

Nope.
Had a quick look at the beginning of it, it's a bunch of kids doing illegal things.
Not going any further with it.

Ernest Bywater ๐Ÿšซ
Updated:

Thanks for checking it out - with no description I couldn't rule it out and I can't legally check it myself right now. I've scanned the descriptions of 1470 files in the current list of nearly 4,700 files and up to mid 2007 without spotting a likely culprit. Taking a break and checking more later. I hate not solving a mystery like this.

sourdough ๐Ÿšซ

Thinking Horndog's stories have an MC with a preference for the chunky over the model thin girl. It is also a plot he likes. But some of those stories are on his 'for sale' site.
He does give a reading sample of each story.

Sparky-1953 ๐Ÿšซ

The more I think about this, the more details I seem to remember. I think the AF Base was in Eastern Washington, possibly near Spokane. The cavern was under the mountains of either southern Idaho or southwestern Montana. the Cave had a running/walking track around the perimeter. The escape tunnel opened up into Oregon or northern California. Is this stimulating anyone's memory? I'd really like to read it again.

Replies:   Remus2
Remus2 ๐Ÿšซ

@Sparky-1953

That rings bells, but not loud enough to get around CRS.

DuckDuckEd ๐Ÿšซ

Eden Below by anon circa 2004

https://www.asstr.org/files/Collections/Alt.Sex.Stories.Moderated/Year2004/48236

Replies:   Ernest Bywater  Sk0r
Ernest Bywater ๐Ÿšซ

@DuckDuckEd

Eden Below by anon circa 2004

Interesting, because I stopped reading on Asstr about 2001 or 2002 and I did read that story about ten years or so ago. I wonder if it got posted on SoL and later pulled?

Sk0r ๐Ÿšซ

@DuckDuckEd

Eden Below is it. Thank you so much for finding it.

limab ๐Ÿšซ

Very nice job, people. 24 hours 11 min to the answer, 37 more minutes for the confirmation.

limab

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