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MC (Assassin or Spook) and girl

oldegrump

I am looking for a story I read a long time age. Not sure where (SOL or ASSTR). MC lives out west in the wilderness. He is either an assassin or government spook. Someone wants to kill him or the girl he is protecting. There are underground chambers and weapons storage. One tunnel leads to a second house.

All help greatly appreciated.

Old Grump

Replies:   sunseeker  Grizz  PotomacBob
zellus

Story: https://storiesonline.net/s/10722/my-everett-mountain-retreat
Author: https://storiesonline.net/a/Jack_Spratt

oldegrump

sorry folks it's not jack spratt, and not kahmnd

This on is old, 2005 maybe older

aj702452

I'm thinking it's an Ernest bywater story

Replies:   Ernest Bywater
lorrainedalby_1

IIRC Mallard Heir has the tunnel between houses,by Ernest Bywater.

Ernest Bywater

@aj702452

I'm thinking it's an Ernest bywater story


I think you may be thinking of Mallard Heir, but that's not out west, it's in the Appalachians, so I don't think it's the story the person is looking for. The violent conflict in it is when the MC gets involved with a local girl the local bully is trying to force into being his girl, and they get into blows about it. Also, the second house is built to hide the existing tunnel when it's found.

This may be what he's after, but I'm not sure.

https://storiesonline.net/s/69156:124242/shamus-journals-chapter-1

sunseeker
Updated:

@oldegrump

I was thinking maybe Luck Jim 2 by FantasyLover - He does gov work and gets the house(s) with underground tunnels...

https://storiesonline.net/s/76190/lucky-jim-ii

oldegrump

Thank you all for the tries. It is none of those great stories, I have read them all. So far they are not the one I am looking for

This particular stories tunnel goes from the house to a remote garage that has a get away vehicle in it.

Replies:   limab
limab

@oldegrump

Is it a straight spy story or is there weird things going on.(Just read that what a strange sentence.) I remember a former agent who is now a blacksmith with hidden weapons who can form a "bubble" - a shield.

Replies:   samuelmichaels
AmigaClone

Could it be the Rick Growing Up series by Banadin?

The series consists of 3 stories on SOL (4 on FineStories). In the first story the MC starts hitchhiking west the summer before his ninth grade. He stops a bank robbery, goes on a bull riding circuit (and wins the junior category). The later puts him in contact with a famous actor and he ends up going to Hollywood.

At the end of book 1 on SOL (book 2 on FineStories) his family get a house like the one described (with a secret tunnel).

oldegrump

Again thanks for the responses. So far no memory bells being rung. I hate CRS.

If it helps, in one scene the house is attacked by a helicopter gunship. MC and girl escape down tunnel and use get away vehicle.

I know that there isn't much there to go on, but that is what I remember.

Old Grump

Replies:   Nizzgrrl  anim8ed
Nizzgrrl

@oldegrump

Does this story begin with a man who lives in an isolated area rescueing a badly beaten woman who was thrown from a vehicle onto his gravel driveway in th middle of th night in freezing weather?

As I recall he has the ability to access a bubble that saves them when his home is attacked.

Now you have me searching my files. It seems this was a two part story of two stand alone parts. Argghh! I hate not remembering!

Replies:   Obliterous
anim8ed

@oldegrump

Yes, CRS Sux.

The one I am thinking of, and can't remember the title or by whom, has the daughter as the MC who lives with the grandmother after the father disappeared. escape tunnel from house to garage where the escape vehicle is an old school muscle car. It takes place in the mountainous area with mining a major element. She has an old sports car she likes to drive to the limit. there is a returned marine as a love interest who rebuilds military humvees. a crooked sheriff with a fancy truck he puts snow tracks on. lots of action and explody stuff...

and I still CRS...

Replies:   GITW
GITW

@anim8ed

Might be Runner by Monbade

https://storiesonline.net/s/65085/runner

Grizz

@oldegrump

Have a look at https://storiesonline.net/s/62705/ashley
And https://storiesonline.net/s/72041/ashley-ii

By https://storiesonline.net/a/Uncle_Jim

Replies:   jimh67
jimh67

@Grizz

That's the story I've been trying to remember the name of. I don't recall ever reading the sequel.

samuelmichaels

@limab

I remember a former agent who is now a blacksmith with hidden weapons who can form a "bubble" - a shield.


I think that was in the Ashley stories by Uncle Jim.

oldegrump

I will look at Runner, It is not the very good Ashley series. I have read the whole series many times.

I Just looked at runner, it's not that either. I think Anim8d is thinking of the same story.

The girl may have even been placed in the MC's care for protection. Not sure about that.

Again Thanks to all for trying.

Replies:   anim8ed  Obliterous
anim8ed
Updated:

@oldegrump

The story I was thinking of is Betrayal by michael-wolfam

https://storiesonline.net/s/67512/betrayal

https://storiesonline.net/a/michaelwolfam

It was posted in 2011 so may not be what you wanted.

edit I should note it is a premium story.

Obliterous

@Nizzgrrl

If you find it, let me know, I've been looking for that one for a while.

Replies:   Nizzgrrl
Obliterous

@oldegrump

you might want to look at Foole's Ambition, by Stultus

https://storiesonline.net/s/60580/fooles-ambition-angel-flying-too-close-to-the-ground
https://storiesonline.net/a/Stultus/4

Ernest Bywater

you may be after Noble

https://storiesonline.net/s/57706/noble

oldegrump

I did not mean to start that big of a search, but looking at all of the suggestions is fun. Most I have read.

So far none of the suggestions are the right story. Anim8or is so far describing the story I remember. Unfortunately he has CRS and can't remember the name.

Thank you all for your input. Someone will know it. I keep looking at the selections.

Replies:   anim8ed
anim8ed
Updated:

@oldegrump

**Points at his previous post**

I found the one I was thinking of and the missing father was a spook. I am rereading it myself.

The story I was thinking of is Betrayal by michael-wolfam

https://storiesonline.net/s/67512/betrayal

https://storiesonline.net/a/michaelwolfam

oldegrump

Betrayal is a great story, but it is not the one I am looking for.

I guess it is lost in the ether

Nizzgrrl

@Obliterous

Check out the Ashley Series by Uncle Jim. Thank you to samuelmichaels and Grizz for the reminder.

https://storiesonline.net/series/1251/the-ashley-series

On returning from an out of town repair job at one in the morning, Bill finds a naked abused girl on his front porch...

Replies:   Obliterous
Obliterous

@Nizzgrrl

Check out the Ashley Series by Uncle Jim. Thank you to samuelmichaels and Grizz for the reminder.


This was indeed the one, thanks for the reminder.

oldegrump

I'm very glad that people are finding good stories, but so far the story I want to find is not here

Thank you all for looking

Replies:   anim8ed
anim8ed

@oldegrump

Well you did say it might have been on ASSTR. I haven't spent any time there in over a decade. From what I have heard they have been having issues and finding things is getting more difficult.

Replies:   Sparky-1953
Sparky-1953

@anim8ed

For the last few weeks when I've tried to go to the site I've just got a blank page.

Obliterous

If you have bookmarks, or visit ASSTR via FTP, its still working. their database/web server is pretty bjorked tho.

PotomacBob

@oldegrump

Possibly "Protect and Serve" by Paul Phenomenon

Replies:   madnige
madnige

@PotomacBob

Possibly "Protect and Serve" by Paul Phenomenon


--Don't think so, P&S doesn't have any tunnel connecting his house to a second house or a garage with a getaway vehicle, though the other stuff more-or-less matches.

oldegrump

Protect and Serve


Not the story, This guy (MC) is either retired spook, or hit man living off the grid in west USA. Girl is under his protection. He does not suffer from amnesia.

Like I said, I read the story long Ago. Probably on ASSTR, but there was not a lot of sex involved

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