Forum: Lost Stories

A mind control story/Telepath/DomSub story?

Reluctant_Sir 🚫

My memory is spotty on this one, read it when I was new here.

There is an organization of telepaths of varying strengths. The strongest are the leaders, the council and enforcers.

MC is a teen boy, I think he lives with Aunt and Uncle. Mom and Dad are missing and he finds his mother's powers have been blocked and she has been given to his father, but there is a reversal and she gains control? Towards the end there is a big fight for control, a slave auction, big mansion....

Rind any bells for anyone?

JPanyon 🚫

Hermit's series about "Jake Fielding", Books 1-3 might be what you seek.

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Zellus 🚫

@JPanyon

Links;
Serie: https://storiesonline.net/series/657/jake-fielding-stories
By: https://storiesonline.net/a/hermit

Reluctant_Sir 🚫

@JPanyon

I'll check it out, but the first one sure doesn't ring that same bell in my head. Maybe I need to read further!

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JPanyon 🚫

@Reluctant_Sir

I was searching for something else this past weekend, and I believe I saw what you seek. I'll try retracing my path, and see what pops up.

Ernest Bywater 🚫

Although I can't remember the full name of the stories, and I suspect they may have been removed or the name changed, I do remember there used to be a series of stories about a boy who was first being recruited by an organization and then he started fighting its leaders and the organizations name referred to by its acronym of CAMP, thus all the stories had that in the name, but I just ran a search and got nothing like what I remember from way back when.

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awnlee jawking 🚫

@Ernest Bywater

I remember this one too. A quick google found a version on ASSTR, author WhiteStar.

AJ

Keet 🚫

Maybe this one on Wolfpub: CAMP: Ron's Journey

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Ernest Bywater 🚫

@Keet

Maybe this one on Wolfpub: CAMP: Ron's Journey

That's the one I remember and think might be what Reluctant Sir is after. Thanks for finding it. I don't know why it's not on SoL now, but I do remember seeing it way back when it was first released.

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Keet 🚫

@Ernest Bywater

That's the one I remember and think might be what Reluctant Sir is after. Thanks for finding it. I don't know why it's not on SoL now, but I do remember seeing it way back when it was first released.

It was a funny search. I have the 10 GB ASSTR FTP archive and have routed a file listing of the archive to a file (that's still a 145.5 MB file). I searched that file for 'CAMP' and found Apache and Netwolf, then did a web search (not gurgle) and found Wolfpub. Has been a long time since I visited that site.

Reluctant_Sir 🚫
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@Keet

Not exactly the most modern (or user friendly) website, is it? I will check it out, thanks!

[Edit] That was the story, but I will be damned if I am going to fry my brain trying to read it in a window on that website :) I'll register and maybe they have a download for members or something.

Anyway, thanks to @Ernest_Bywater and @keet for the help.

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Keet 🚫

@Reluctant_Sir

[Edit] That was the story, but I will be damned if I am going to fry my brain trying to read it in a window on that website :) I'll register and maybe they have a download for members or something.

Just select all of the chapter text and save to a file chapter*.txt. It's a bit of work for all chapters but then you can never loose it again ;)

ArthurSB73 🚫

@Reluctant_Sir

Reading this story with chrome on my tablet, it prompts for a simplified view. Now reads full screen.

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Reluctant_Sir 🚫

@ArthurSB73

Ah... forgot about that! Thanks :)

ChiMi 🚫

It is not CAMP

He lives with his Mother and two sisters.

Reluctant_Sir 🚫

Okay... that story was a swing and a miss.

It sounded familiar because I have read it before.

The story I am after had a big scene against a mental powerhouse at a slave auction, some big warehouse.

He wins, of course, and towards the end, he even gets his parents back together again, they live in a big mansion....Indoor pool, huge opulent place.

Any other guesses?

junior15 🚫

It's not exactly what you said, but a lot of the same plot points are in it.

https://storiesonline.net/s/34108/tim-the-teenage-mc

It's long an incomplete, but it does have mind control and the slave auction. He's an only child living with mom who used to be slave to dad but was freed then they get back together. With as long as it is, a lot of other stuff happens too.

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Reluctant_Sir 🚫

@junior15

YES! That sounds very close.

And I would have missed it in a search because I always exclude incomplete or inactive these days, though I was not always so picky.

Thanks, I'll check it out.

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