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Teenager plays football, badly hurts other players

b6348637

People get mad at him but the main character is playing clean. Just in a brutal fashion. In one case he hit someone who tried to jump over him. That's all I remember.

Replies:   robberhands
robberhands

@b6348637

That's probably 'Banner Year' by Shrink42.

Replies:   b6348637  Remus2
b6348637

@robberhands

I'll give it a look and see. Thanks.

Reluctant_Sir
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I think there was a similar bit in the Stupid Boy stories by G_Younger

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b6348637
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@Reluctant_Sir

This is seeming like it. I'll have to go through it again from the start but I do remember a lot of people hating him. I also think it was in first person, unlike Banner Year. Thanks for the answer.

edit: pretty sure he had his hard but clean hits explained on the news

Ernest Bywater

There's a few stories what that type of action occurs. If you can remember anything else about the story that would help. However, I do think Stupid Boy is the story you're after because he likes the sound of the hits make on the pads. There are a couple of players carted off to hospital from clean hits.

Replies:   Nizzgrrl
Nizzgrrl
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@Ernest Bywater

Don't overlook Ernest Bywater's own contribution to high school football lore, "Finding Home."

https://storiesonline.net/s/66183/finding-home

shinerdrinker

It may not be there yet, but I hear that Mayhem in a Pill is gonna get to place soon to what the OP is looking for. Why not read a story on its way to something you want. The journey will be worth it.

But then again the author is kind of a dick and posts when he wants and not on a set schedule.

Tee Hee.

Replies:   red61544  Reluctant_Sir
red61544

@shinerdrinker

But then again the author is kind of a dick and posts when he wants and not on a set schedule.

We've been meaning to talk to you about that! Meet us in a dark alley and we can "discuss" it.

Reluctant_Sir

@shinerdrinker

Tee Hee.


Really? Forget the posting schedule, you should be flogged for that instead!

b6348637

I'm half-way through the third Stupid Boy book and I don't think this is it. There might have been a chant about eating them alive and shitting out their bones in it.

Replies:   The Outsider
The Outsider

@b6348637

The Grim Reaper by rlfj

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b6348637
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@The Outsider

Man, I'm gonna be pissed if that's it. It's a good one and I'll have to read it all over again.

edit: Okay, I've mixed up a couple different stories. It's not The Grim Reaper. I'll keep reading various ones. I'm pretty sure he goes to get interviewed on a news show and brings game clips to prove he's doing clean hits.

Replies:   sunseeker
sunseeker

@b6348637

sure sounds like Banner Year by Shrink42. Robberhands suggested it in the 1st response....

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Remus2

@robberhands

About halfway through that one (banner year).
It's a bit better written than most similar stories imo. Thanks for the heads up on it.

Replies:   robberhands
b6348637
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@sunseeker

Yeah, I got about halfway through before I stopped skimming, which was probably my mistake. I've read it before.

edit: that's the one. it happens in chapter 42. thanks

double edit: and 46

triple edit: how did I forget how great this part is

robberhands

@Remus2

It's a bit better written than most similar stories imo. Thanks for the heads up on it.

You're welcome, but considering your exuberant evaluation of the story, I'm not too sure you should've thanked me at all.

Replies:   Remus2
Remus2

@robberhands

I realize you're most likely taking the piss in regards to my comment, but it was sincere nontheless.

Replies:   robberhands
robberhands

@Remus2

... but it was sincere nontheless.

As was I.

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