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dylanburgess291990
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Looking for multiple. 1- teen is contacted by aliens, he is able to manipulate crystals with his mind.

2- group of teens are spelunking, one gets injured by a fall, found by a ships ai.

3- Boating trip goes bad survivors are saved by an ai from a underwater space station.FOUND

Earth Base Alpha

Replies:   sunseeker  skyview  Capt. Zapp
section8

For #1 try Space by John Wales

http://storiesonline.net/s/50921/space

http://storiesonline.net/a/John_Wales

sunseeker

@dylanburgess291990

is earth base alpha on SOL? What author? Thanks

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skyview

@dylanburgess291990

For #2: The Destroyer series by Monbade.
http://storiesonline.net/series/580/the-new-federation
http://storiesonline.net/s/57060/the-destroyers-book-1-a-new-beginning

Capt. Zapp

@dylanburgess291990

1- teen is contacted by aliens, he is able to manipulate crystals with his mind.


He finds an alien base behind his house? Starts a school on the moon? Ends up creating new drive system for spaceships? Protects Earth and other planets? If that's the one, I just read it not long ago but danged if I can remember the title. Maybe that additional information will help someone else remember.

dylanburgess291990

@sunseeker

https://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/Apache/My%20Favorites/Web/Siath/Earth%20Base%20Alpha%20Book%201/

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sunseeker

@dylanburgess291990

thank you!

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dylanburgess291990

@sunseeker

Np, book 2 and 3 can be found here
https://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/Apache/My%20Favorites/Web/Siath/ Euthara is 3

sunkuwan

@dylanburgess291990

I am two thirds through Book 1. Currently where they fight the crystaline enemies. .... I am seriously confused what happened with titan, earth's revenge and scythe. Why the fuck were they not communicating? Why did they crash into another? why were the prisoners allowed to be on the ship and how did they overwhelm the boarding party?
This whole scene boggles my mind and it isn't addressed in several chapters. I am still on the story with Atlantis and the crystals.

Also, the story lacks emotional impact from the characters. Except for the first chapter they show no real emotions regarding the things that happened. Only 500 Humans are left alive in the galaxy and no one bats an eye.
The story reads like a checklist
serious MarySue/MartySue overload.

Does it get better?

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JohnBobMead

@sunkuwan

Does it get better?


In a word, No.

sunkuwan

A shame.

The setting is intriguing but the issues outweigh it. It wasn't a great story before the Crystal Arc but it was passable to continue reading to that point.

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