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Zzz 🚫

Looking for a story I had saved, can't find, It was a story by reluctant_sir called "Magic 101," but written by someone else, I believe it was call "Magic 102," by Irish-righter. but it is not showing up in searches.

Thank in advance.

Replies:   _Zblj_  akarge  vern
_Zblj_ 🚫

@Zzz

Magic 201 - James Mcdonald

akarge 🚫
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@Zzz

He changed his pen name from Irish Writer to James MacDonald. He wrote, I think three sequels, to Reluctant Sir's original story

Replies:   jimq2
jimq2 🚫

@akarge

Nope. Just 2 sequels, Magic 201 & Magic 301.

vern 🚫

@Zzz

I hope for Magic 401 to show up

Replies:   XofDallas  Dinsdale
XofDallas 🚫

@vern

The author pretty much tied things off with a bow at the end of Magic 301. I'm sure there are ways he could resurrect it if he really wants to - but it'd be awkward.

Dinsdale 🚫

@vern

I did read those two in the end, but there were a large number of problems with 201 which made it borderline unreadable for me.
- misspellings, with words and with names (both names introduced in Magic 101 and those introduced later).
- gaping plot holes, frequently because the author had missed something in 101.
- characters behaving totally differently compared to the 101 originals.
301 was better, although IR/JM's attempt to get out of the mess he created by changing Cécile Henrard's gender in 201 created another problem.

I created a document listing errors in 201 and it is roughly 300 lines long, that includes a few lines at the start with all of the variations of the various names he came up with.
He used to be a programmer. In my experience, bad things tend to happen if you use multiple different versions of a variable's name. Either the compiler complains (good) or it assumes a misspelled name is a different variable (not so good).

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