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NC-Retired 🚫

Best as I can remember… But maybe I am conflating two stories together?

Aliens sent many men to a more primitive earth-like planet/reality to survive and thrive. The aliens did not choose their transportees with care. They got some defective personalities that were more interested in being a despot ruler and inflicting cruelty on the natives than creating a micro-culture where everyone thrived. The participants got to choose some modern supplies to take back with them.

My memory says that the protagonist was a 'good guy' and wanted the best life for those 'natives' he influenced.

Our MC had people within his influence build a long wood wall to surround the town and a nearby field keep out the large predators that roamed the land. HUGE bears maybe? The wall had gates.

There was a dormitory style housing structure.

He put an electric windmill on top of a tall wooden tower.

His 'people' dug a large sewer down the middle of the street to empty into the nearby river.

There was a coup while the MC was out of the town/compound and he crawled up the sewer to get inside the walls and re-take control. IIRC, the dormitory burned. There were many casualties.

Here's where I may be conflating stories…

I remember he then gathered the survivors and moved en masse south toward a warmer region. They had some 'incidents' during the trek. They finally settled on an old alluvial plain above a river.

And that's what I can remember.

Does any of this trigger your memories of reading a story with these elements?

TIA

limab 🚫

@NC-Retired

The first thought is cmsix. But I don't remember a sewer in any of his stories. Let me think on this.

Good Hunting, limab

dsclink3 🚫

@NC-Retired

Sounds like I Was a Modern Caveman by A Acer Custos

sunseeker 🚫
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@NC-Retired

when I 1st read the post I thought the 1st part sounds like cmsix, which limab mentions and the 2nd sounds like the a acer custos story as mentioned by dsclink3 but I didn't read enough of modern caveman to remember more than a big move from one place to another.

Good luck, SunSeeker

NC-Retired 🚫

@NC-Retired

Thank you all for your replies.

As noted, I may have conflated two stories into one memory.

I'll go look at the two mentioned.

Thanks.

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