Forum: Lost Stories

Mother and sister die on journey father has problems after wife dies, son takes over with his workers and builds horse ranch. He buys 2 Indian sisters at auction to save them Can't remember the name or if it's on this site or Literotica . Thanks

A Cry in the Wilderness by Megumi Kashuahara

Thanks that's it

Started reading this and while it's a good story so far there are a lot of mistakes that should be corrected...johnny little bear introduced in 2 separate chapters in almost identical paragraphs, construction begins on house in Oct then Angus gets typhoid, passes it to Tessa who dies from it, then ch 13 starts saying it Nov then the next paragraph says "Four months had passed since they'd laid Tessa to rest on the hill overlooking the ranch." WTF? No "contact author" to let them know...

Edit - author did post asking to be informed of "wacky timeline stuff" so I posted there...

SunSeeker

I've tried reading a few of the author's stories but had to give up after just a few chapters in each. The editing, the lapse is timeline/storyline, etc makes them almost unreadable.