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G42 ๐Ÿšซ

I was reading a story with 3 chapters I believe. A father was awakened in the middle of the e and a boy was demanduto speak with his second daughter. The next day he purchased a phone tap and started recording all calls he not only got a recording of the boy calling in the middle of the night. But of his wife making a date with her lover. I got through the first 2 chapters when the internet burped and I lost the third chapter finish.

I hope someone recognizes this story and can help me find the conclusion.

Thanks in advance.
G42

Dinsdale ๐Ÿšซ

@G42

What is

the middle of the e

?

Replies:   Pixy
Pixy ๐Ÿšซ

@Dinsdale

Probably 'Night'.

Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@G42

demanduto speak

??

Is this supposed to be "demanding to"?

Pixy ๐Ÿšซ

@G42

What's with all the grammar Nazi comments? So there are a few mistakes, nothing a bit of common sense can work out.

All that type of reply does, is stop people from posting questions. There are many reasons for poor spelling in comments, ranging from medical issues, English being the non native language and everything in between.

By demeaning the OP, you are demeaning yourselves.

Replies:   akarge  tendertouch  Dinsdale
akarge ๐Ÿšซ

@Pixy

Myself, I speak Murican.

tendertouch ๐Ÿšซ

@Pixy

In this case they were bad enough that I was wasting time trying to decipher them. I figured I'd come back later and someone would have already succeeded, and I was right.

Dinsdale ๐Ÿšซ

@Pixy

I simply had no idea what that "e" could represent, and guessing means there's a good chance of guessing wrongly. This is not being a "grammar Nazi", it was incomprehensible to me. You believe "night" but there's no "e" in night so I'm still not sure.

As for the "demanduto", there was enough there to work with. I was not sure of the precise word but 95% accuracy was easily good enough.

Replies:   Pixy  akarge
Pixy ๐Ÿšซ

@Dinsdale

but there's no "e" in night so I'm still not sure.

Well the OP does follow it with the words "The next day" and catching the "boy calling in the middle of the night" so there really is not that much ambiguity about it ...

Replies:   remarcsd
remarcsd ๐Ÿšซ

@Pixy

My guess was 'evening'.

akarge ๐Ÿšซ

@Dinsdale

Probably it was supposed to be 'nite'.

Gauthier ๐Ÿšซ

@G42

phone tap

Make a quick search on "phone tap" (with the ")
Chance are it's a Just Plain Bob story as he has 15 of the 56 phone tap stories.

Hero68 ๐Ÿšซ

@G42

I believe you are looking for the story The Call by the author nakdsub.

G42 ๐Ÿšซ

@G42

Thank you very much the call was what I was reading
G42

Replies:   sunseeker
sunseeker ๐Ÿšซ

@G42

Great story! Just finished reading it! Though from the description I have NO DESIRE to read the sequel!

SunSeeker

Radagast ๐Ÿšซ

@G42

That author's other pen name is Laptopwriter.
https://storiesonline.net/a/Laptopwriter
You may find something more to your tastes.

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