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very similar story to A blossom fell by Dag123

zitqhile 🚫
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I just read A blossom fell. I thought I was going to reread a story I read years ago, but it is not the same.

The story I read before had the girl and boy on a school bus, but it was just the one trip.

The bus breaks down in the winter and the girl gets cold. The boy just got a large winter coat and wraps the girl in it with him so both stay warm. Very short story I thought was called a blossom fell, but is not.

Just wanted to add that in the story am looking for, it is happens on the bus. No deaths, no sex, no ever lasting romance/story. Just two young teens making the best of a large coat to keep warm together for a few hours on a cold/freezing bus.

Does anyone remember this story.

Replies:   davenothere  Dinsdale
davenothere 🚫

@zitqhile

There is a part of Dead Writer's "Incredible Changes" that has this happen but it is not a short story.

Dinsdale 🚫

@zitqhile

I have found three stories by https://storiesonline.net/a/Harrison0978 (all archived, premier only) which sort of come close, but only "sort of".
https://storiesonline.net/s/55333/her-brother-remembered-me
https://storiesonline.net/s/74996/i-will-visit-her-grave-someday (appears to be a rewrite of the first one)
https://storiesonline.net/s/57440/debby

I think these stories are probably "near misses" but they are all I can come up with now.

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