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Renovating a grand old town property just across an alleyway from a rundown but popular bar, near a church.

pedlowd ๐Ÿšซ

That's all I can remember. Where he came from, what happened next, is completely lost, though there may have been an indigent female on a snowy night involved, oh, and the deeds of the property included a lease grant to the bar.

Not a lot to go on, I'm afraid - if only I'd learned how to remember names and titles all those years ago!

David

samuelmichaels ๐Ÿšซ

@pedlowd

Could be Human Phoenix by Refusenik.

limab ๐Ÿšซ

@pedlowd

Agreed. the only one that I can think of that hit all three points.

redlion75 ๐Ÿšซ
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@pedlowd

Read them both for context the first is human man I think.

sunseeker ๐Ÿšซ
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@pedlowd

Human Phoenix (1st) and Human Man (2nd). The story with the bar and building is Human Man. Both are excellent reads!

https://storiesonline.net/series/1001/human

vern ๐Ÿšซ

@pedlowd

It would be great to have a third part to the story

pedlowd ๐Ÿšซ

@pedlowd

Thankyou very much for your help, I'm off to refusnik's page now.
I remember it as being a good immersion antidote to reality. Very much needed at present!

Replies:   Dinsdale
Dinsdale ๐Ÿšซ

@pedlowd

Not strictly relevant, but your query reminded me of the text of a track by Yes (1972).

Down at the end, close by a river
Close to the edge, round by the corner
Close to the end, down by the corner
Down at the edge, round by a river

XofDallas ๐Ÿšซ

@pedlowd

Human Man and Human Phoenix are two of my absolute favorite stories on SOL. I also wish for a sequel. Frankly, I can see Scott (the MC in both stories) taking over as Sheriff of his home town, and later reluctantly becoming a congressman (wouldn't work now, the way the congressional districts are gerrymandered).

It always was a question for me: Scott's talents could take him virtually anywhere, and enable to do virtually anything, he wants. But where would his personality take him, and where would it allow/not allow, him to go? I don't think he'd necessarily be happy as either sheriff or a politician - in fact, I'd expect him to be quite unhappy. However, I don't think his destiny is to own/run a bar and sit quietly on top of a pile of money, either.

Replies:   Sparky-1953
Sparky-1953 ๐Ÿšซ

@XofDallas

From some of the background in Human Man and the way the story goes Scott just wants a normal, quiet life. So I don't expect any more to the story. He's found what he wants.

XofDallas ๐Ÿšซ

@pedlowd

lol, true enough for the character. It's just such a fine story that as a selfish reader, I wish for more.

Taking what I can get, always looking for the next great (or even very good) story.

pedlowd ๐Ÿšซ

@pedlowd

I'm almost glad my memory is so bad! I'm stuck into Human Phoenix and it's like meeting an old friend - I vaguely remember what he's like, but none of his detailed foibles.

So grateful you were able to put me on track for this antidote to our present grim realities.

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