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MD Doc, wife and child killed in car wreck, Joins Army, Develops mental Powers, ETC.

JDseller ๐Ÿšซ

I read this story 12-15 years ago IRC. It was a long story, I am thinking several books. The fellow was a MD and his wife and daughter where killed in car wreck. IRC the other driver got off scot free. He joined the Army and was flagged as you could not make him show any emotion, almost a robot. Turns out he was a super skilled shooter with any weapon. Special forces and all. Was over in the sand box and would sneak out of camp and go "hunting". He starts to have mental flashes/powers. He attacks a enemy camp and his mental powers make them think is the very devil himself. He rescues a couple of soldiers and gets them back to safety across a desert. Heat, lack of food and water, wounded, he starts to talk about religious things/powers etc. When he gets back to base the Army thinks he has had a break down so they discharge him. I do not remember what he did next. I do know his second wife cheated on him. I remember his children inherited his mental abilities. He did not trust anyone, even his kids with his powers so he "bound" the kids so theirs" were limited.
The only really strange thing to help remember it is the ending. His powers just drive Muslims into a killing rage against him. He goes to the Holy land and is killed by a mob with him as some type of martyr.
Once scene that stands out in my memory is while his in the Army he and his superior officer are in a police station on Army business. Some huge guy starts fighting several officers and they can not subdue the fellow. The guys gets a gun and starts threating people. The main character tells the police he can stop the fellow. He is told to do so. He just stands up on his chair so he can see of the dividers and shot the with one shot to the head.

Reluctant_Sir ๐Ÿšซ

@JDseller

I believe you want:

Lazlo Zalezac's John Carter Universe

Specifically, you want Oscar Meyers

Replies:   ralord82276
ralord82276 ๐Ÿšซ

@Reluctant_Sir

Almost none of the OP's description matches any of the John Carter Universe stories, not even Oscar Meyers...with the exception that at one point he was in the Army and at the end he was in the Holy Land and killed as a martyr.

Not an MD, wasn't married until 2/3rds through the story (which means no wife and daughter killed in a car wreck) and then married 2 women at once, never had psychic powers, never had children (both of his wives ended up pregnant with twins at the end of the story but they don't even know they are pregnant until after he is dead), no desert delusion scene, no Army discharge for mental breakdown, his wives never cheat on him, he never "binds" his children's powers (because they aren't even born when he dies), and no scene in Army police station with him sniping a rampaging prisoner in the head.

Replies:   Pixy
Pixy ๐Ÿšซ

@ralord82276

and at the end he was in the Holy Land and killed as a martyr

Woah!!! Spoiler alert ....

Replies:   itsmehonest
itsmehonest ๐Ÿšซ

@Pixy

OP spoiled first.

His powers just drive Muslims into a killing rage against him. He goes to the Holy land and is killed by a mob with him as some type of martyr.

Replies:   Dinsdale
Dinsdale ๐Ÿšซ

@itsmehonest

Interesting interpretation, and not one supported by the words of the actual story ("Oscar Meyers" by Lazlo Zalezac) - the mob which killed them consisted of bigoted believers of all three major religions centered around Jerusalem.

JDseller ๐Ÿšซ
Updated:

@JDseller

Thank You I just read the first section of Oscar Meyer and it is NOT the story I am looking for.
I will check out Ahab's suggestion.

Ahab ๐Ÿšซ

@JDseller

Some of that description sounds like Latikia's 'Second That Emotion', with Ike Blacktower as the protagonist.

https://storiesonline.net/s/49620/second-that-emotion

JDseller ๐Ÿšซ
Updated:

@JDseller

I just read a little of Latikia's story "Second That Emotion" And that is the one I have been looking for.

I apologize for my memory being faulty on the details of the story. I had combined several stories together in my memories. Second that emotion is the one I was looking for. No MD but was in pre-med at college. Other details were scrambled in my mind. Thanks to anyone that replied to my request. Ronnie

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